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honestly couldnt read past chapter one. missing letters, atrocious english, random capital letters.... i was completely disappointed since the story had such interesting premises
Now this isn't my kind of story, I read it to the end because it's from Mushoku Tensei, but it's pretty bad.
Reading this genuinely lowers my iq I hate this he literally stated that he had to ntr th my at the beginning so that he could become a lusty person and the protag is all like time to bang all the time it’s to the point that he might as well have written a smut novel instead of a fanfic and people would like it more I mean seriously he could have made a smut with a plot similar but not the same as this at least that way people going into it wouldn’t think ohh this is a fanfic but nooo we can’t have nice things in life can we
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braindead plot. braindead characters. braindead system. braindead lore. brandead events. braindeas universe. but the smut is hot 😏. for that alone i give it 2 stat.
Muy bueno sigue así falta Roxy ??????????????????????????????????????????)))?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Y la elfa eliani
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I AM DONE WITH THIS AUTHOR'S NOVELS. I WILL NEVER READ ANYTHING OF HIS WORK..THEY HAVE NO PLOT AND ARE LAZY AND DUMB.I AM NOT WASTING MY TIME WITH THIS GUY NOVELS..THEY FAILURE
Ok this was amazing 🤩 you think the story goes one way and BAM! Waifu falls from the sky lol but all honesty how can you keep up with so many characters. Your way of writing there personality really come a cross will, like pretty sure your version of the characters has over-written the ones I remember lol also 😍Minerva 😍 best waifu 🎉🎉🎉
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Thanks for writing such a interesting story it has everything you can hope for. once again thanks for the great work and please keep up the story until the end.
Well, before reading this story I had very high expectations because it is very rare to find stories about Mushoku Tensei and adding the ability that you gave it makes it even more interesting, but... I ended up disappointed. Let's start first with that information glossary at the beginning, you can't start a story and the first thing to do is to load the readers with information, you could have approached all of this in a different way. Then in another chapter you address the entire life of the Mc, which I am not saying is bad, I have always liked to meet the protagonist before he begins his adventure, but coming from that first chapter I see everything as very bland and insipid. Another thing that could be highlighted about this story is that the writing is not written as such, it is rather a test script before writing the story, which already lowers many points, which would be acceptable for people who are just starting to write. write, but you are not the case, since I have seen that before this story he has already written many more. Another thing I can notice is that at times the story does not seem to advance, paragraphs are simply repeated, they are just with different words, even most of the paragraphs are showing the great list of Mc's abilities. To finish I will just say to wait longer, I even gave him 2 extra chances after deciding to leave him with the thought that he might get better, but no. I couldn't take it anymore and decided to quit permanently.
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Man you wrote some good books man and i hope you continue like this in the future also
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I really like the story, there are few Mushoku Tensei fanfics that are interesting and even fewer that have more than 20 chapters but this novel delivers, it doesn't have the best plot, it can be quite cliché and rushed at times but it is very entertaining and once Once you start reading it you don't stop. The only problem I can have is the update of the story, it can take one, two, three weeks or even a month, but I can understand that, the story does not receive the support that the creator would like, but even so it does not stop side. In conclusion, it is a good story, obviously it is not a masterpiece but it does its duty, entertaining the reader, it is a story with chapters (or at least for me) quite short that you can read when you are bored or if you have nothing to do. do, and I promise you that you will not be disappointed. Post: This review was made with the help of a translator so if there are errors I'm sorry, but you know why. :]
like one of the only good story's like this I've found the only thing i dont like is the weird update schedule but thats based on his life so i wont blame him
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Finally the true masterpiece of Mushoku tensei, of everything I read of Mushoku fanfic this is best!!!
I'll keep trying to send power stones, more chapters, please, this fanfic is very good
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Jejejeje...... Me alegro que la historia este avanzando más rápido era poco molesto esperar más ver los siguientes capítulos. Ya que hay pocas historias buenas de este anime.
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Reason for 4.8 not 5 is the stability of updated isn’t the best. Please update regularly! Don’t drop continue this masterpiece!!!! It’s a great story
honestly couldnt read past chapter one. missing letters, atrocious english, random capital letters.... i was completely disappointed since the story had such interesting premises
Now this isn't my kind of story, I read it to the end because it's from Mushoku Tensei, but it's pretty bad.
Reading this genuinely lowers my iq I hate this he literally stated that he had to ntr th my at the beginning so that he could become a lusty person and the protag is all like time to bang all the time it’s to the point that he might as well have written a smut novel instead of a fanfic and people would like it more I mean seriously he could have made a smut with a plot similar but not the same as this at least that way people going into it wouldn’t think ohh this is a fanfic but nooo we can’t have nice things in life can we
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braindead plot. braindead characters. braindead system. braindead lore. brandead events. braindeas universe. but the smut is hot 😏. for that alone i give it 2 stat.
Muy bueno sigue así falta Roxy ??????????????????????????????????????????)))?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Y la elfa eliani
Good fanfiction keep going 🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤
I AM DONE WITH THIS AUTHOR'S NOVELS. I WILL NEVER READ ANYTHING OF HIS WORK..THEY HAVE NO PLOT AND ARE LAZY AND DUMB.I AM NOT WASTING MY TIME WITH THIS GUY NOVELS..THEY FAILURE
Ok this was amazing 🤩 you think the story goes one way and BAM! Waifu falls from the sky lol but all honesty how can you keep up with so many characters. Your way of writing there personality really come a cross will, like pretty sure your version of the characters has over-written the ones I remember lol also 😍Minerva 😍 best waifu 🎉🎉🎉
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Thanks for writing such a interesting story it has everything you can hope for. once again thanks for the great work and please keep up the story until the end.
Well, before reading this story I had very high expectations because it is very rare to find stories about Mushoku Tensei and adding the ability that you gave it makes it even more interesting, but... I ended up disappointed. Let's start first with that information glossary at the beginning, you can't start a story and the first thing to do is to load the readers with information, you could have approached all of this in a different way. Then in another chapter you address the entire life of the Mc, which I am not saying is bad, I have always liked to meet the protagonist before he begins his adventure, but coming from that first chapter I see everything as very bland and insipid. Another thing that could be highlighted about this story is that the writing is not written as such, it is rather a test script before writing the story, which already lowers many points, which would be acceptable for people who are just starting to write. write, but you are not the case, since I have seen that before this story he has already written many more. Another thing I can notice is that at times the story does not seem to advance, paragraphs are simply repeated, they are just with different words, even most of the paragraphs are showing the great list of Mc's abilities. To finish I will just say to wait longer, I even gave him 2 extra chances after deciding to leave him with the thought that he might get better, but no. I couldn't take it anymore and decided to quit permanently.
Membuka SPOILER Man you wrote some good books man and i hope you continue like this in the future also
Hum...
Membuka SPOILER I really like the story, there are few Mushoku Tensei fanfics that are interesting and even fewer that have more than 20 chapters but this novel delivers, it doesn't have the best plot, it can be quite cliché and rushed at times but it is very entertaining and once Once you start reading it you don't stop. The only problem I can have is the update of the story, it can take one, two, three weeks or even a month, but I can understand that, the story does not receive the support that the creator would like, but even so it does not stop side. In conclusion, it is a good story, obviously it is not a masterpiece but it does its duty, entertaining the reader, it is a story with chapters (or at least for me) quite short that you can read when you are bored or if you have nothing to do. do, and I promise you that you will not be disappointed. Post: This review was made with the help of a translator so if there are errors I'm sorry, but you know why. :]
like one of the only good story's like this I've found the only thing i dont like is the weird update schedule but thats based on his life so i wont blame him
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Finally the true masterpiece of Mushoku tensei, of everything I read of Mushoku fanfic this is best!!!
I'll keep trying to send power stones, more chapters, please, this fanfic is very good
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Jejejeje...... Me alegro que la historia este avanzando más rápido era poco molesto esperar más ver los siguientes capítulos. Ya que hay pocas historias buenas de este anime.
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Reason for 4.8 not 5 is the stability of updated isn’t the best. Please update regularly! Don’t drop continue this masterpiece!!!! It’s a great story