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extreme wishfulfillment without much thought and logic behind it. MC transmigrated as snape, found million of gold in ROR, went to Gringot to do blood test and become heir to 4-5 pureblood houses. Nah, just too much brainless writing here, better skip this.
the story started something good but after a while the plot is the same with other stories nothing new or special and the author having Mc have a girlfriend but he never have time with her but with some other random girls who... The Mc stared as a smart and cunning business man but now is a brain dead arrogant 16yold boy
best hp FF so far I loved the way u chose pre Hogwarts era Snape character is great and the jealousy lily is 👌👌👌
Güzel ve nadir bir konu umarım bu kitap okuyan herkese zevk verir şahsen çok sevdiğim bir konu severus snape bana kalırsa HP evrenindeki gerçek kahramandır âşk var sadakat var kararlılık var zeka var. Bir ana karakter için tüm özelliklere sahip
Excelente historia de severus snape, me gusta el desarrollo de personaje, solo que esperaba que fuera más profundo[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]
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good story, good mc and original plot. The beginning (3/4 chapters )is a bit too fast and he got things too easily like wealth and power. Later the story get better, and show a different develop of "the dark time" with a slow pace.
This story has every cringe and clique moments from all other stories. I gave it a try anyway. I do not know why others like this story so much. I read stories like that at fanfiction.net when I first started reading fanfictions. So I guess this fic is suitable for beginning readers.
I love this book and its one of the best Severus Snape book I've read so far, although the protagonist is reborn as Snape with golden fingers,it's not way too overpowered it's just like a little enhancement on his talent and the charector communications and relations are pretty good so far and i I'd recommend the author to just keep a single heroine or none as harem just sucks and it gets way too annoying to read chapters about the mcs love life with multiple women and it also ruins the book fr.. overall i like this book and I'd recommend you to try reading it
It sounds dumb saying this but even for a fictional world full of magic this is just unrealistic. He finds everything he need, wherever he looks, he made himself pretty, became friends with goblins, became the most knowledge and powerful wizard, the best healer, etc. Whole other side with the trio seems ridiculous as well. Nothing has a smooth transition in this story. Just A to B and nothing in between. The author obviously hasn't given this any thought and just runs on imagination until he's bored then quits and moves on. Stop trolling us.
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I don't really like the beginning of the story, its slowness too, but overall it's still good. Another negative is the update rate, but hey, I'm still going to give 5 stars because I really enjoy reading the story.
It’s ok, story wise is developing and just starting. Chapters are short, and I mean very short. Charactercter development is plain and dry. As if it’s nonexistent, there is mild bashing here and there. But overall it’s plain. Work building is somewhat almost nonexistent, wth ou little to any detail. To me, this story is a wish fulfillment story. With the MC gaining power left and right, multiple family house names suddenly given to him. And the power of plot armor and side quests. It ok, but not the best. Nothing more but a wish fulfillment story.
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This simply might be one of the best Harry Potter fanfics I have ever read. This is definitely worth a read
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This is good. The beginning was alright but it only kept getting better along the way. I hope the author forgets about the idea of including spells inspired by anime powers. That's just ew. I also hope the MC acts his age. He can be quite childish sometimes. Other than that, I say good job. I'm a picky person. It's not often I reach the 30 chapters mark in an HP FF.
it is very good, i need more plese...................................................................................................................
can you have snape learn how to use a staff or a spear then add his wand into it I don't why but just feel like that cool also it would be good just in case he run out magic
great story great mc _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Dear author, thank you very much for redeeming the character of Severus Snape, since from my point of view he deserved it. PS: I love your writing work, I know it's not easy, so thank you. 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
great book I recommend ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
it's a nice ff i feel a nices vibes for this one......................................................................................................................................................................................
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extreme wishfulfillment without much thought and logic behind it. MC transmigrated as snape, found million of gold in ROR, went to Gringot to do blood test and become heir to 4-5 pureblood houses. Nah, just too much brainless writing here, better skip this.
the story started something good but after a while the plot is the same with other stories nothing new or special and the author having Mc have a girlfriend but he never have time with her but with some other random girls who... The Mc stared as a smart and cunning business man but now is a brain dead arrogant 16yold boy
best hp FF so far I loved the way u chose pre Hogwarts era Snape character is great and the jealousy lily is 👌👌👌
Güzel ve nadir bir konu umarım bu kitap okuyan herkese zevk verir şahsen çok sevdiğim bir konu severus snape bana kalırsa HP evrenindeki gerçek kahramandır âşk var sadakat var kararlılık var zeka var. Bir ana karakter için tüm özelliklere sahip
Excelente historia de severus snape, me gusta el desarrollo de personaje, solo que esperaba que fuera más profundo[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]
Membuka SPOILER good story, good mc and original plot. The beginning (3/4 chapters )is a bit too fast and he got things too easily like wealth and power. Later the story get better, and show a different develop of "the dark time" with a slow pace.
This story has every cringe and clique moments from all other stories. I gave it a try anyway. I do not know why others like this story so much. I read stories like that at fanfiction.net when I first started reading fanfictions. So I guess this fic is suitable for beginning readers.
I love this book and its one of the best Severus Snape book I've read so far, although the protagonist is reborn as Snape with golden fingers,it's not way too overpowered it's just like a little enhancement on his talent and the charector communications and relations are pretty good so far and i I'd recommend the author to just keep a single heroine or none as harem just sucks and it gets way too annoying to read chapters about the mcs love life with multiple women and it also ruins the book fr.. overall i like this book and I'd recommend you to try reading it
It sounds dumb saying this but even for a fictional world full of magic this is just unrealistic. He finds everything he need, wherever he looks, he made himself pretty, became friends with goblins, became the most knowledge and powerful wizard, the best healer, etc. Whole other side with the trio seems ridiculous as well. Nothing has a smooth transition in this story. Just A to B and nothing in between. The author obviously hasn't given this any thought and just runs on imagination until he's bored then quits and moves on. Stop trolling us.
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I don't really like the beginning of the story, its slowness too, but overall it's still good. Another negative is the update rate, but hey, I'm still going to give 5 stars because I really enjoy reading the story.
It’s ok, story wise is developing and just starting. Chapters are short, and I mean very short. Charactercter development is plain and dry. As if it’s nonexistent, there is mild bashing here and there. But overall it’s plain. Work building is somewhat almost nonexistent, wth ou little to any detail. To me, this story is a wish fulfillment story. With the MC gaining power left and right, multiple family house names suddenly given to him. And the power of plot armor and side quests. It ok, but not the best. Nothing more but a wish fulfillment story.
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This simply might be one of the best Harry Potter fanfics I have ever read. This is definitely worth a read
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This is good. The beginning was alright but it only kept getting better along the way. I hope the author forgets about the idea of including spells inspired by anime powers. That's just ew. I also hope the MC acts his age. He can be quite childish sometimes. Other than that, I say good job. I'm a picky person. It's not often I reach the 30 chapters mark in an HP FF.
it is very good, i need more plese...................................................................................................................
can you have snape learn how to use a staff or a spear then add his wand into it I don't why but just feel like that cool also it would be good just in case he run out magic
great story great mc _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Dear author, thank you very much for redeeming the character of Severus Snape, since from my point of view he deserved it. PS: I love your writing work, I know it's not easy, so thank you. 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
great book I recommend ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
it's a nice ff i feel a nices vibes for this one......................................................................................................................................................................................
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