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Gerardo_Rivera

Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good

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kyleqi

Why are every HP fics getting their cover arts dropped?.................................................................................................

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Mr_neko

bro are you alive........author brooo are you dead

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Tauan_Ferraz

A novel Γ© muito interessante, nΓ£o conseguir terminar de ler Γ© a grande pena.

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Ayu123456

Best snape fic I have read Characters are well developed Many twists as the story progresses One problem is updating stability Pls update more frequently if possible 🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩

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SeniorTrouble

Such a board with these jokes and mockery in all HP works! However, everything is solved very simply! In this case, Severus stands up during dinner in the presence of the headmaster and professors and says: β€œI Severus Prince swear by mother magic that if a wand is simply pointed at me NOT during classes or official duels, that wand and the hand holding the wand will be completely destroyed before atoms by me personally, SO BE IT!”

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Ggggg_kj

Well I'm dropping this because I thought Alice is the only one love interest but turns out that there are 2 or more women and too much drama, and why can't this be a logical novel with interesting romance and a relationship that stick together. Well I had my fun in the beginning and a disappointment in the last chapter. Well good luck and thank you.

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MadMs
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I was liking it until the plot made the mc stop his relationship with Alice, after that Mc lost his personality And the plot went downhill with a lot of forced relationships with other girls. If the plan was to make a harem at least make it on way it doesn’t feel rushed. I feel this story could be much better.

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bloodcoler

cliche de harem forzado................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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Yumeth_Fernando

Please keep updating. Love the book.Will give when I can. Please update at least once a week

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NeoGodOfDreams

Vraiment très bon, merci de continuer à m'amuser avec livre. L'idée est bonne mais vous commencé à rajouter beaucoup de femmes là. Les deux sœurs Black, Francesca, Apolline, et Laena ? Et Alice en retour ?

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perser_112

It’s already starting to get boring that he always portrays himself as the extreme (victim), every time. And the images of forced relationships are already infuriating (MC has an emo complex or Sasuke that he is so autistic and everyone owes him β€œsocks”). It seems that he has great ambitions to β€œreach the borders of magic” or something like that (I don’t remember), supposedly this is our long-term goal (but we understand that the true goal is to get under the skirt of as many natives as possible). And also, playing in the sand with Dumby and Voldy is already boring when you can play all over the playground (I mean, send them to Dumbledore and Voldemort’s bathhouse. Let them arrange their own β€œDutch helm”, and you go to the β€œMaldives" or at least to Thailand to become a catgender). I mean that you can do anything (the main thing is the worldview of the magical world of Harry Potter and not the plot about β€œthe boy who was given a banana”), you can even put a β€œgreen hat” on Dumbledore’s head by picking up Grindelwald (why get involved in the racist party (black- white wizards) "Dumbledore x Voldemort"). Show them a "galaxy far, far away" (go beyond the plot). [Google transmigrated]

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warmonger0007

everything was good until 60 then the story,the plot along with the language all unalived themselves

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Chaos_Evil_Daoist

I don't really understand why author pushed the harem so hard to even suddenly change his love interest, and make him not even think about it. They were happy with Alice, and then he's suddenly so much happier with other women? Seriously, it was a very good story till him breaking up with Alice and suddenly saying that Greengrass is more compatible with himself. They were happy together, so WHY AUTHOR, WHY?!!?

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Rio_Bladimir

Esta historia solo necesita algo para ser perfecta y es tener mΓ‘s capΓ­tulos por mes el autor no la ha abandonado pero los cap salen muy lentos pero yo como su fiel lector los espero con paciencia

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Randomidiot2424242

It was good till chap60 , then It all went Downhill , him breaking up Whit Alice was the last drop, also there Is too mucho drama...3/10 . 😞

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AsuraAk
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Love this, cannot wait for more updates :)))

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Goblin_1000

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Alchemist

Had a lot of potential, but the author keeps pushing in the direction of a harem. MC is also an absolute moron when it comes to relationships, which is quite disappointing.

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Poisontester

The only reason i am giving 4 star is because of situations in last chapter but otherwise this is a great story. Wish updates were more frequent tho

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Mahra_Khan

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Mahra_Khan

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Dowell_Mendosa

Muy buena novela con una buena trama y todo eso pero te tardar en atulizar la novela y estΓ‘ mal porque uno queda emocionado y eso es malo para el corazΓ³n

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shirou_sureiya

really when you choose a girl you just to choose alice she is not even that beutiful she is just average

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AzureAsura

So far so good... If you are looking for HP fanfic with common sense, not-so-overpowered-but-strong MC who is not Harry Potter, this book is for you. Author found interesting magical theories here and there. Side characters are generally well-developed, but some of them have extreme personality (one-sided). Overall, good one. AUTHOR, PLEEEEASE >...<! UPDAAAATE!!![img=recommend]

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Hotdiddy

Love it!!! But please update more

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Fisherman_Dream

I take my hat off to you author, you are amazing for not letting this novel sit or abandon it, for that you have my respect. :)......................

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Sloth_King21

This is one of the best HP fanfictions available. Love it. Keep up the good work author.

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P0lar1s

I really like this fanfic and recommend it to everyone who likes a good hp fanfic which is au. Please do not drop it. When can we expect a new chapter?

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Gerardo_Rivera

Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good

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kyleqi

Why are every HP fics getting their cover arts dropped?.................................................................................................

5mth
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Mr_neko

bro are you alive........author brooo are you dead

5mth
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Tauan_Ferraz

A novel Γ© muito interessante, nΓ£o conseguir terminar de ler Γ© a grande pena.

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Ayu123456

Best snape fic I have read Characters are well developed Many twists as the story progresses One problem is updating stability Pls update more frequently if possible 🀩🀩🀩🀩🀩

7mth
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SeniorTrouble

Such a board with these jokes and mockery in all HP works! However, everything is solved very simply! In this case, Severus stands up during dinner in the presence of the headmaster and professors and says: β€œI Severus Prince swear by mother magic that if a wand is simply pointed at me NOT during classes or official duels, that wand and the hand holding the wand will be completely destroyed before atoms by me personally, SO BE IT!”

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Ggggg_kj

Well I'm dropping this because I thought Alice is the only one love interest but turns out that there are 2 or more women and too much drama, and why can't this be a logical novel with interesting romance and a relationship that stick together. Well I had my fun in the beginning and a disappointment in the last chapter. Well good luck and thank you.

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MadMs
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I was liking it until the plot made the mc stop his relationship with Alice, after that Mc lost his personality And the plot went downhill with a lot of forced relationships with other girls. If the plan was to make a harem at least make it on way it doesn’t feel rushed. I feel this story could be much better.

9mth
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bloodcoler

cliche de harem forzado................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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Yumeth_Fernando

Please keep updating. Love the book.Will give when I can. Please update at least once a week

10mth
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NeoGodOfDreams

Vraiment très bon, merci de continuer à m'amuser avec livre. L'idée est bonne mais vous commencé à rajouter beaucoup de femmes là. Les deux sœurs Black, Francesca, Apolline, et Laena ? Et Alice en retour ?

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perser_112

It’s already starting to get boring that he always portrays himself as the extreme (victim), every time. And the images of forced relationships are already infuriating (MC has an emo complex or Sasuke that he is so autistic and everyone owes him β€œsocks”). It seems that he has great ambitions to β€œreach the borders of magic” or something like that (I don’t remember), supposedly this is our long-term goal (but we understand that the true goal is to get under the skirt of as many natives as possible). And also, playing in the sand with Dumby and Voldy is already boring when you can play all over the playground (I mean, send them to Dumbledore and Voldemort’s bathhouse. Let them arrange their own β€œDutch helm”, and you go to the β€œMaldives" or at least to Thailand to become a catgender). I mean that you can do anything (the main thing is the worldview of the magical world of Harry Potter and not the plot about β€œthe boy who was given a banana”), you can even put a β€œgreen hat” on Dumbledore’s head by picking up Grindelwald (why get involved in the racist party (black- white wizards) "Dumbledore x Voldemort"). Show them a "galaxy far, far away" (go beyond the plot). [Google transmigrated]

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warmonger0007

everything was good until 60 then the story,the plot along with the language all unalived themselves

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Chaos_Evil_Daoist

I don't really understand why author pushed the harem so hard to even suddenly change his love interest, and make him not even think about it. They were happy with Alice, and then he's suddenly so much happier with other women? Seriously, it was a very good story till him breaking up with Alice and suddenly saying that Greengrass is more compatible with himself. They were happy together, so WHY AUTHOR, WHY?!!?

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Rio_Bladimir

Esta historia solo necesita algo para ser perfecta y es tener mΓ‘s capΓ­tulos por mes el autor no la ha abandonado pero los cap salen muy lentos pero yo como su fiel lector los espero con paciencia

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Randomidiot2424242

It was good till chap60 , then It all went Downhill , him breaking up Whit Alice was the last drop, also there Is too mucho drama...3/10 . 😞

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AsuraAk
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Love this, cannot wait for more updates :)))

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Goblin_1000

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Alchemist

Had a lot of potential, but the author keeps pushing in the direction of a harem. MC is also an absolute moron when it comes to relationships, which is quite disappointing.

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Poisontester

The only reason i am giving 4 star is because of situations in last chapter but otherwise this is a great story. Wish updates were more frequent tho

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Mahra_Khan

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Mahra_Khan

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Dowell_Mendosa

Muy buena novela con una buena trama y todo eso pero te tardar en atulizar la novela y estΓ‘ mal porque uno queda emocionado y eso es malo para el corazΓ³n

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shirou_sureiya

really when you choose a girl you just to choose alice she is not even that beutiful she is just average

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AzureAsura

So far so good... If you are looking for HP fanfic with common sense, not-so-overpowered-but-strong MC who is not Harry Potter, this book is for you. Author found interesting magical theories here and there. Side characters are generally well-developed, but some of them have extreme personality (one-sided). Overall, good one. AUTHOR, PLEEEEASE >...<! UPDAAAATE!!![img=recommend]

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Hotdiddy

Love it!!! But please update more

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Fisherman_Dream

I take my hat off to you author, you are amazing for not letting this novel sit or abandon it, for that you have my respect. :)......................

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Sloth_King21

This is one of the best HP fanfictions available. Love it. Keep up the good work author.

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P0lar1s

I really like this fanfic and recommend it to everyone who likes a good hp fanfic which is au. Please do not drop it. When can we expect a new chapter?

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