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Bagikan pikiran Anda dengan orang lain
Tulis ulasanGood good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
Why are every HP fics getting their cover arts dropped?.................................................................................................
Best snape fic I have read Characters are well developed Many twists as the story progresses One problem is updating stability Pls update more frequently if possible π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©
Such a board with these jokes and mockery in all HP works! However, everything is solved very simply! In this case, Severus stands up during dinner in the presence of the headmaster and professors and says: βI Severus Prince swear by mother magic that if a wand is simply pointed at me NOT during classes or official duels, that wand and the hand holding the wand will be completely destroyed before atoms by me personally, SO BE IT!β
Membuka SPOILERWell I'm dropping this because I thought Alice is the only one love interest but turns out that there are 2 or more women and too much drama, and why can't this be a logical novel with interesting romance and a relationship that stick together. Well I had my fun in the beginning and a disappointment in the last chapter. Well good luck and thank you.
I was liking it until the plot made the mc stop his relationship with Alice, after that Mc lost his personality And the plot went downhill with a lot of forced relationships with other girls. If the plan was to make a harem at least make it on way it doesnβt feel rushed. I feel this story could be much better.
cliche de harem forzado................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Membuka SPOILERVraiment trΓ¨s bon, merci de continuer Γ m'amuser avec livre. L'idΓ©e est bonne mais vous commencΓ© Γ rajouter beaucoup de femmes lΓ . Les deux sΕurs Black, Francesca, Apolline, et Laena ? Et Alice en retour ?
Membuka SPOILERItβs already starting to get boring that he always portrays himself as the extreme (victim), every time. And the images of forced relationships are already infuriating (MC has an emo complex or Sasuke that he is so autistic and everyone owes him βsocksβ). It seems that he has great ambitions to βreach the borders of magicβ or something like that (I donβt remember), supposedly this is our long-term goal (but we understand that the true goal is to get under the skirt of as many natives as possible). And also, playing in the sand with Dumby and Voldy is already boring when you can play all over the playground (I mean, send them to Dumbledore and Voldemortβs bathhouse. Let them arrange their own βDutch helmβ, and you go to the βMaldives" or at least to Thailand to become a catgender). I mean that you can do anything (the main thing is the worldview of the magical world of Harry Potter and not the plot about βthe boy who was given a bananaβ), you can even put a βgreen hatβ on Dumbledoreβs head by picking up Grindelwald (why get involved in the racist party (black- white wizards) "Dumbledore x Voldemort"). Show them a "galaxy far, far away" (go beyond the plot). [Google transmigrated]
Membuka SPOILEReverything was good until 60 then the story,the plot along with the language all unalived themselves
I don't really understand why author pushed the harem so hard to even suddenly change his love interest, and make him not even think about it. They were happy with Alice, and then he's suddenly so much happier with other women? Seriously, it was a very good story till him breaking up with Alice and suddenly saying that Greengrass is more compatible with himself. They were happy together, so WHY AUTHOR, WHY?!!?
Membuka SPOILEREsta historia solo necesita algo para ser perfecta y es tener mΓ‘s capΓtulos por mes el autor no la ha abandonado pero los cap salen muy lentos pero yo como su fiel lector los espero con paciencia
It was good till chap60 , then It all went Downhill , him breaking up Whit Alice was the last drop, also there Is too mucho drama...3/10 . π
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Had a lot of potential, but the author keeps pushing in the direction of a harem. MC is also an absolute moron when it comes to relationships, which is quite disappointing.
The only reason i am giving 4 star is because of situations in last chapter but otherwise this is a great story. Wish updates were more frequent tho
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Muy buena novela con una buena trama y todo eso pero te tardar en atulizar la novela y estΓ‘ mal porque uno queda emocionado y eso es malo para el corazΓ³n
really when you choose a girl you just to choose alice she is not even that beutiful she is just average
So far so good... If you are looking for HP fanfic with common sense, not-so-overpowered-but-strong MC who is not Harry Potter, this book is for you. Author found interesting magical theories here and there. Side characters are generally well-developed, but some of them have extreme personality (one-sided). Overall, good one. AUTHOR, PLEEEEASE >...<! UPDAAAATE!!![img=recommend]
I take my hat off to you author, you are amazing for not letting this novel sit or abandon it, for that you have my respect. :)......................
Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
Why are every HP fics getting their cover arts dropped?.................................................................................................
Best snape fic I have read Characters are well developed Many twists as the story progresses One problem is updating stability Pls update more frequently if possible π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©
Such a board with these jokes and mockery in all HP works! However, everything is solved very simply! In this case, Severus stands up during dinner in the presence of the headmaster and professors and says: βI Severus Prince swear by mother magic that if a wand is simply pointed at me NOT during classes or official duels, that wand and the hand holding the wand will be completely destroyed before atoms by me personally, SO BE IT!β
Membuka SPOILERWell I'm dropping this because I thought Alice is the only one love interest but turns out that there are 2 or more women and too much drama, and why can't this be a logical novel with interesting romance and a relationship that stick together. Well I had my fun in the beginning and a disappointment in the last chapter. Well good luck and thank you.
I was liking it until the plot made the mc stop his relationship with Alice, after that Mc lost his personality And the plot went downhill with a lot of forced relationships with other girls. If the plan was to make a harem at least make it on way it doesnβt feel rushed. I feel this story could be much better.
cliche de harem forzado................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Membuka SPOILERVraiment trΓ¨s bon, merci de continuer Γ m'amuser avec livre. L'idΓ©e est bonne mais vous commencΓ© Γ rajouter beaucoup de femmes lΓ . Les deux sΕurs Black, Francesca, Apolline, et Laena ? Et Alice en retour ?
Membuka SPOILERItβs already starting to get boring that he always portrays himself as the extreme (victim), every time. And the images of forced relationships are already infuriating (MC has an emo complex or Sasuke that he is so autistic and everyone owes him βsocksβ). It seems that he has great ambitions to βreach the borders of magicβ or something like that (I donβt remember), supposedly this is our long-term goal (but we understand that the true goal is to get under the skirt of as many natives as possible). And also, playing in the sand with Dumby and Voldy is already boring when you can play all over the playground (I mean, send them to Dumbledore and Voldemortβs bathhouse. Let them arrange their own βDutch helmβ, and you go to the βMaldives" or at least to Thailand to become a catgender). I mean that you can do anything (the main thing is the worldview of the magical world of Harry Potter and not the plot about βthe boy who was given a bananaβ), you can even put a βgreen hatβ on Dumbledoreβs head by picking up Grindelwald (why get involved in the racist party (black- white wizards) "Dumbledore x Voldemort"). Show them a "galaxy far, far away" (go beyond the plot). [Google transmigrated]
Membuka SPOILEReverything was good until 60 then the story,the plot along with the language all unalived themselves
I don't really understand why author pushed the harem so hard to even suddenly change his love interest, and make him not even think about it. They were happy with Alice, and then he's suddenly so much happier with other women? Seriously, it was a very good story till him breaking up with Alice and suddenly saying that Greengrass is more compatible with himself. They were happy together, so WHY AUTHOR, WHY?!!?
Membuka SPOILEREsta historia solo necesita algo para ser perfecta y es tener mΓ‘s capΓtulos por mes el autor no la ha abandonado pero los cap salen muy lentos pero yo como su fiel lector los espero con paciencia
It was good till chap60 , then It all went Downhill , him breaking up Whit Alice was the last drop, also there Is too mucho drama...3/10 . π
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Had a lot of potential, but the author keeps pushing in the direction of a harem. MC is also an absolute moron when it comes to relationships, which is quite disappointing.
The only reason i am giving 4 star is because of situations in last chapter but otherwise this is a great story. Wish updates were more frequent tho
please update more chapters as soon as possible [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=fp][img=fp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Muy buena novela con una buena trama y todo eso pero te tardar en atulizar la novela y estΓ‘ mal porque uno queda emocionado y eso es malo para el corazΓ³n
really when you choose a girl you just to choose alice she is not even that beutiful she is just average
So far so good... If you are looking for HP fanfic with common sense, not-so-overpowered-but-strong MC who is not Harry Potter, this book is for you. Author found interesting magical theories here and there. Side characters are generally well-developed, but some of them have extreme personality (one-sided). Overall, good one. AUTHOR, PLEEEEASE >...<! UPDAAAATE!!![img=recommend]
I take my hat off to you author, you are amazing for not letting this novel sit or abandon it, for that you have my respect. :)......................