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I'm not really good at this but gotta give my honest opinion. Good story, I mean pretty good for something that don't have an outline In it,has lots of similarities with one piece: path to power but it do have some uniqueness in it. Writing quality good but can be improved, story development 4.5 its good but it kinda lacks something but it's understandable as the author just write whats in his head,character design 5 pretty good, the mc is black which for me is the first time as other novels, ff I've read always have jade white skin to olive so pretty much a new experience to me so yeah, update stability hmm idk maybe 3? I just binge it just now but till last month The last chapter was only updated yesterday so ye, world back ground 5, Its op so pretty much yeah. Overall 4.4 I think this novel has lots of potential LIKE lotSsss so I hope the author don't drop this or rewrite this in a more planned way?
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I'm not really good at this but gotta give my honest opinion. Good story, I mean pretty good for something that don't have an outline In it,has lots of similarities with one piece: path to power but it do have some uniqueness in it. Writing quality good but can be improved, story development 4.5 its good but it kinda lacks something but it's understandable as the author just write whats in his head,character design 5 pretty good, the mc is black which for me is the first time as other novels, ff I've read always have jade white skin to olive so pretty much a new experience to me so yeah, update stability hmm idk maybe 3? I just binge it just now but till last month The last chapter was only updated yesterday so ye, world back ground 5, Its op so pretty much yeah. Overall 4.4 I think this novel has lots of potential LIKE lotSsss so I hope the author don't drop this or rewrite this in a more planned way?