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Lu_Shui
LV 14 Badge

Hi everyone, welcome to my first ever published original story in this genre. It is a story between two alpha werewolves who, despite their opposing natures, love each other deeply. That is what you need to keep in mind while you read, because it is not immediately apparent in the first chapters 😉. Enjoy reading and please do support me with collection, power stones, reviews, comments, and golden tickets if you like the story~ Message me in discord if you want to chat ❤️

2yr
Lihat 0 balasan
Kaname_Kuran_9015

Ahhh i love it so much 😍😍😍 Usually when i read novel , at first i found it interesting but i lost interest in the middle and stop , searching for new one but this novel captivate me, Once i started reading i couldn't stop 🤣 want more&more ,always check for update. I Love ronan dan lucien , they fit each other , ronan tantrum and childish behaviour made my day ,he is so funny 🤣🤣 For Kinnon His love for lucien is 👏👏 he is so mature and want lucien be happy even not with him 🥰🥰🥰 (come here kinnon , i'm more than willing to be your wife and love you but u only want lucien😭) thanks author , they don't threesome (Ronan-Lucien-Kinnon) because for me love is 2 person not 3 person 😅😅 and for anna hmmm No , untill the end i still don't like her 😅 but she end up with lowell so yeah ok 😬be happy

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
RemdragonGirl

Second chance stories is one of my fave tropes. The angst is good, and not just angst for the pain with no sense or gratification.

1mth
Lihat 1 balasan
Ohmnanon

i love this novel .... it has excellent storyline and everything about this is so good and interesing❤️❤️❤️❤️🥰🥰

5mth
Lihat 1 balasan
monmot
LV 15 Badge

I absolutely love this story. enough drama (sometimes on the border on a heart attack😜) still a lot of love🥰. Great descriptions of interactions between characters. Just Perfect 😍😍

6mth
Lihat 1 balasan
Breezz
LV 12 Badge

This was a great story, it devolved at a decent pace..The end wasn't rushed at all.

7mth
Lihat 1 balasan
Gwen_Allen

This was a won derful story I’ve read this story 3 times so far just wonderful funny sad and wonderful

1yr
Lihat 1 balasan
Debra_Worrell_6570

Excellent story and writing. Loved al of it.l

1yr
Lihat 1 balasan
Chesssman

Author, I can’t even BEGIN to rate this beautiful story but in one sentence I’d say: THIS IS AN AMAZING BOOK. I hope it can have a sequel

2yr
Lihat 2 balasan
thumki

the main plot is interesting with constant surprise and turns and twists. all the characters are lovable specially the main lead. The other characters are also we'll developed. overall it's an interesting novel.

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
javalka
LV 13 Badge

Not a usual fan of werewolf stories but this is just too good 😭 characters are unique and loveable. The story was interesting from the very first chapter. 👌

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
Londra_Wookie_Love

Fascinating book! If you want a wild ride of emotions, check out this book. It is a whole package of love, hurt, betrayal and all other emotions you can think of. The story is well developed as well as the characters. Good job dear author👏👏

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
Kaname_Kuran_9015

i cried 😭😭😭😭😭😭 stupid rowan hikz, i hate lillian because of her my poor baby lucien suffer so much , there's a time i want to rip that pregnant woman so much. Hope to see Lucien pregnant soon lols

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
SF_Writes

Wow! Amazing. I have seen most werewolves stories between an alpha and an omega. This is totally amazing. Two powerful alphas as fated mates. Author did an amazing job with this book. Can't wait to read further. [img=update]

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
thumki

The plot is crisp and the characters are fantastically drawn. There is no unnecessary cliff hangers nor any digression in the story The language too doesn't exhibit any grammatical inaccuracies . there is regular chapter update although sometimes we ,the readers get a bit greedy for more chapter release. Lucien is my favourite character.

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
Favour_Stephen5651

Words can't describe how well written this author's synopsis is. Am so curious already, this is a lovely story💗💗 Am a big fan of werewolves so this is a huge one for me😄

2yr
Lihat 0 balasan
yohan26_

Oh wow! I already liked the story after reading chapter one. I like where this is going. The plot was interesting and and unique. Can't wait for more! This is a masterpiece

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
lo_rezi

have been reading this book for a while and I really love it nice work author keep it up 👍♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️

2yr
Lihat 0 balasan
CallieLy

Sorry, I had to delete my previous rating because it was the first I made ever on Webnovel and I didn't really have any point of comparisons yet at the time😅My conscience won't let me sleep until I fix it so here you go. I hope this is ok with you. This is a really well-written novel. The world-building, character introductions, and scene transitions are artfully and smoothly done. It's definitely a pleasure to read. The way the chapters are organized will keep you scrolling for updates and reading more.

2yr
Lihat 3 balasan
Ink_Quanta

Well usually I don't read these kinda stories just not my type but if we talk about things like the character design and the story development seems to be nice so best of luck🤗.

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
Rainbow420

Nice story. I read first chapter. This is amazing for me. Thank you author.[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

2yr
Lihat 0 balasan
Oystermouth

The first few chapters were very short, but as the story continued the author's writing style got a lot better. I don't usually read ABO novels, so this was a new experience for me. But if you are looking for an ABO novel, there is no harm in trying this one!

2yr
Lihat 0 balasan
Sneakycat098

Aside from the amazing plotline of this novel, the think which kept me hooked all this time was how beautifully the author describes everything. Seriously, not only was it a good source of entertainment, but I also got to learn many wonderful ways to express situations, and I must thank author for that. As far as the constructive criticism and mistakes are concerned, I couldn't find any since everything looked so perfect to me. So yeah, good luck author for your novel and I hope you get to gain as many potential readers as possible^^

2yr
Lihat 0 balasan
Kittylovely

Love the development of the novel and everything, although am really not into this genre much. I read a few chapters and it was awesome and i think that others should give it a try, especially lovers of this genre.

2yr
Lihat 0 balasan
zigginah

The writing is amazing. The story isn't fast-paced I love the way it is. It is an amazing piece of work. Added it to my library to see how the story progresses.

2yr
Lihat 0 balasan
Sweet_Vanilla553

OMG❤️ Werewolves Alpha LGBT I am done author.This is what I have been carving for his long. The story got me attrached.But I am still in among first 15 chaps.Even though I came here since I felt like it was not early. This is a mind blowing work author. I love to read this kind of stories and your work made me feel so happy. Keep going author.... Update more soon.(But I am still on the way) I will surely continue to read this.....

2yr
Lihat 0 balasan
Jaison_Arbor

The novel is unique for me, I'm into alpha's story so I really enjoyed reading it, a detailed steamy story one can ask for, I'll be reading further hoping that it's end will be good 😌

2yr
Lihat 0 balasan
ShamelessGengar

1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. Follow me for exp ;) 16. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading! expexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexp

2yr
Lihat 2 balasan
lohse_
LV 13 Badge

The interaction between characters feels natural, which is a welcome surprise from the usual strange interactions in books of the same genre. The story is developing well without dragging or rushing, and the world is clearly established within the first few chapters. Great read so far! Now, I'll have to go see if this author has written other books, too!

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
Sacred_Spirit

A wonderful wolf fantasy. The grammar is excellent. No error that could affect the flow of the story. The storyline is great, the characters are well written and the world building is on point. Excellent job.

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
Lu_Shui
LV 14 Badge

Hi everyone, welcome to my first ever published original story in this genre. It is a story between two alpha werewolves who, despite their opposing natures, love each other deeply. That is what you need to keep in mind while you read, because it is not immediately apparent in the first chapters 😉. Enjoy reading and please do support me with collection, power stones, reviews, comments, and golden tickets if you like the story~ Message me in discord if you want to chat ❤️

2yr
Lihat 0 balasan
Kaname_Kuran_9015

Ahhh i love it so much 😍😍😍 Usually when i read novel , at first i found it interesting but i lost interest in the middle and stop , searching for new one but this novel captivate me, Once i started reading i couldn't stop 🤣 want more&more ,always check for update. I Love ronan dan lucien , they fit each other , ronan tantrum and childish behaviour made my day ,he is so funny 🤣🤣 For Kinnon His love for lucien is 👏👏 he is so mature and want lucien be happy even not with him 🥰🥰🥰 (come here kinnon , i'm more than willing to be your wife and love you but u only want lucien😭) thanks author , they don't threesome (Ronan-Lucien-Kinnon) because for me love is 2 person not 3 person 😅😅 and for anna hmmm No , untill the end i still don't like her 😅 but she end up with lowell so yeah ok 😬be happy

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
RemdragonGirl

Second chance stories is one of my fave tropes. The angst is good, and not just angst for the pain with no sense or gratification.

1mth
Lihat 1 balasan
Ohmnanon

i love this novel .... it has excellent storyline and everything about this is so good and interesing❤️❤️❤️❤️🥰🥰

5mth
Lihat 1 balasan
monmot
LV 15 Badge

I absolutely love this story. enough drama (sometimes on the border on a heart attack😜) still a lot of love🥰. Great descriptions of interactions between characters. Just Perfect 😍😍

6mth
Lihat 1 balasan
Breezz
LV 12 Badge

This was a great story, it devolved at a decent pace..The end wasn't rushed at all.

7mth
Lihat 1 balasan
Gwen_Allen

This was a won derful story I’ve read this story 3 times so far just wonderful funny sad and wonderful

1yr
Lihat 1 balasan
Debra_Worrell_6570

Excellent story and writing. Loved al of it.l

1yr
Lihat 1 balasan
Chesssman

Author, I can’t even BEGIN to rate this beautiful story but in one sentence I’d say: THIS IS AN AMAZING BOOK. I hope it can have a sequel

2yr
Lihat 2 balasan
thumki

the main plot is interesting with constant surprise and turns and twists. all the characters are lovable specially the main lead. The other characters are also we'll developed. overall it's an interesting novel.

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
javalka
LV 13 Badge

Not a usual fan of werewolf stories but this is just too good 😭 characters are unique and loveable. The story was interesting from the very first chapter. 👌

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
Londra_Wookie_Love

Fascinating book! If you want a wild ride of emotions, check out this book. It is a whole package of love, hurt, betrayal and all other emotions you can think of. The story is well developed as well as the characters. Good job dear author👏👏

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
Kaname_Kuran_9015

i cried 😭😭😭😭😭😭 stupid rowan hikz, i hate lillian because of her my poor baby lucien suffer so much , there's a time i want to rip that pregnant woman so much. Hope to see Lucien pregnant soon lols

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
SF_Writes

Wow! Amazing. I have seen most werewolves stories between an alpha and an omega. This is totally amazing. Two powerful alphas as fated mates. Author did an amazing job with this book. Can't wait to read further. [img=update]

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
thumki

The plot is crisp and the characters are fantastically drawn. There is no unnecessary cliff hangers nor any digression in the story The language too doesn't exhibit any grammatical inaccuracies . there is regular chapter update although sometimes we ,the readers get a bit greedy for more chapter release. Lucien is my favourite character.

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
Favour_Stephen5651

Words can't describe how well written this author's synopsis is. Am so curious already, this is a lovely story💗💗 Am a big fan of werewolves so this is a huge one for me😄

2yr
Lihat 0 balasan
yohan26_

Oh wow! I already liked the story after reading chapter one. I like where this is going. The plot was interesting and and unique. Can't wait for more! This is a masterpiece

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
lo_rezi

have been reading this book for a while and I really love it nice work author keep it up 👍♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️

2yr
Lihat 0 balasan
CallieLy

Sorry, I had to delete my previous rating because it was the first I made ever on Webnovel and I didn't really have any point of comparisons yet at the time😅My conscience won't let me sleep until I fix it so here you go. I hope this is ok with you. This is a really well-written novel. The world-building, character introductions, and scene transitions are artfully and smoothly done. It's definitely a pleasure to read. The way the chapters are organized will keep you scrolling for updates and reading more.

2yr
Lihat 3 balasan
Ink_Quanta

Well usually I don't read these kinda stories just not my type but if we talk about things like the character design and the story development seems to be nice so best of luck🤗.

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
Rainbow420

Nice story. I read first chapter. This is amazing for me. Thank you author.[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

2yr
Lihat 0 balasan
Oystermouth

The first few chapters were very short, but as the story continued the author's writing style got a lot better. I don't usually read ABO novels, so this was a new experience for me. But if you are looking for an ABO novel, there is no harm in trying this one!

2yr
Lihat 0 balasan
Sneakycat098

Aside from the amazing plotline of this novel, the think which kept me hooked all this time was how beautifully the author describes everything. Seriously, not only was it a good source of entertainment, but I also got to learn many wonderful ways to express situations, and I must thank author for that. As far as the constructive criticism and mistakes are concerned, I couldn't find any since everything looked so perfect to me. So yeah, good luck author for your novel and I hope you get to gain as many potential readers as possible^^

2yr
Lihat 0 balasan
Kittylovely

Love the development of the novel and everything, although am really not into this genre much. I read a few chapters and it was awesome and i think that others should give it a try, especially lovers of this genre.

2yr
Lihat 0 balasan
zigginah

The writing is amazing. The story isn't fast-paced I love the way it is. It is an amazing piece of work. Added it to my library to see how the story progresses.

2yr
Lihat 0 balasan
Sweet_Vanilla553

OMG❤️ Werewolves Alpha LGBT I am done author.This is what I have been carving for his long. The story got me attrached.But I am still in among first 15 chaps.Even though I came here since I felt like it was not early. This is a mind blowing work author. I love to read this kind of stories and your work made me feel so happy. Keep going author.... Update more soon.(But I am still on the way) I will surely continue to read this.....

2yr
Lihat 0 balasan
Jaison_Arbor

The novel is unique for me, I'm into alpha's story so I really enjoyed reading it, a detailed steamy story one can ask for, I'll be reading further hoping that it's end will be good 😌

2yr
Lihat 0 balasan
ShamelessGengar

1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. Follow me for exp ;) 16. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading! expexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexp

2yr
Lihat 2 balasan
lohse_
LV 13 Badge

The interaction between characters feels natural, which is a welcome surprise from the usual strange interactions in books of the same genre. The story is developing well without dragging or rushing, and the world is clearly established within the first few chapters. Great read so far! Now, I'll have to go see if this author has written other books, too!

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
Sacred_Spirit

A wonderful wolf fantasy. The grammar is excellent. No error that could affect the flow of the story. The storyline is great, the characters are well written and the world building is on point. Excellent job.

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
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