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It was a really good experience.the characters are really charismatic and each one has our own objetive in the novel. the plot surprise me cuz i'd never expect seen a l0l1 holding a enormous rifle gun even through it was literary in the title.
The story is very good and waifus the development of the story and characters the adventures they embark on the unfolding of the adventures and plots the motivation of the villains etc.
it has potential, the characters, the way events go along looks good too. I started reading a short time ago and I already got attached to Kurone, I found it very charismatic.
very good, i really liked your story I hope you keep posting more chapters of this amazing story, very good and very cool it makes you spend a lot of time reading it is really an interesting story i want you to place a demihuman lobster that has a pistol that shoots fire
I'm still following along, I'm on the 5 chapters. So far I am loving it, I hope the story will develop even more. The protagonist has a great personality and her sister despite being crazy, is still perfect in her own way
Membuka SPOILER
This novel is very cool, I recommend it to everyone to read and see how the diversities happen in the story. Note 10 [img=recommend]
Membuka SPOILER
Although the beginning is a bit slow, the author manages to surprise us when he shows us the truth behind the innocent face of the protagonist!
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Membuka SPOILER
A great story, the writtig is regular, but the plot is interessing. I recommend to gate:jietai fans. The idea of mixing military weapons and fantasy elements was genius
It was a really good experience.the characters are really charismatic and each one has our own objetive in the novel. the plot surprise me cuz i'd never expect seen a l0l1 holding a enormous rifle gun even through it was literary in the title.
The story is very good and waifus the development of the story and characters the adventures they embark on the unfolding of the adventures and plots the motivation of the villains etc.
it has potential, the characters, the way events go along looks good too. I started reading a short time ago and I already got attached to Kurone, I found it very charismatic.
very good, i really liked your story I hope you keep posting more chapters of this amazing story, very good and very cool it makes you spend a lot of time reading it is really an interesting story i want you to place a demihuman lobster that has a pistol that shoots fire
I'm still following along, I'm on the 5 chapters. So far I am loving it, I hope the story will develop even more. The protagonist has a great personality and her sister despite being crazy, is still perfect in her own way
Membuka SPOILER This novel is very cool, I recommend it to everyone to read and see how the diversities happen in the story. Note 10 [img=recommend]
Membuka SPOILER Although the beginning is a bit slow, the author manages to surprise us when he shows us the truth behind the innocent face of the protagonist!
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Membuka SPOILER
A great story, the writtig is regular, but the plot is interessing. I recommend to gate:jietai fans. The idea of mixing military weapons and fantasy elements was genius