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I don't know what to say except I really like it so keep up the good work ..................................................................
Now as much as I'd like to give 5 stars for the story, I can't because this story seems to be plagiarized. If you go on Archiveofourown and look up House of Memories, this story is almost an exact copy of that except with minor detail changes. For those who don't believe me, go and check it out and see for yourself.
This is good fanfic, author. I got addicted to your fanfic. I can't wait for more chapters. MOREEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Writing Quality: This is the best Haikyuu fanfiction that I have readβnot convinced? Then send me one that you think surpasses this one. Stability of Updates: I don't have any idea, but the update is relatively stable from the previous chapters. There must be some inconvenience on the Author's side that's why there's no update for two days. Story Development: It is at the most appropriate pace. Not fast nor slow, exactly in that golden zone where it is just right. Character Design: The characters are not just some blank characters. Hinata's character development is really good. You would even look forward to his changes. The changes in his character are not abrupt that they would seem out of place. World Background: So far, it had talked about some places that were not mentioned early in the original. Like the NA, or even Shiratorizawa Academy. So this is a good sign that the novel will not blindly follow the original route, I hope because that would be very boring. Conclusion: I like how Hinata improved and how it was not just overnight. It took him months to reach where he is now. I love how he had not wasted the memories of Adult Hinata, and I am looking forward to seeing Ninja Shoyo soon. A really big fan of Haikyuu, hope that there will be more chapters. You deserve the 5 stars.
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This is Amazing Haikyuu Fanfic. Even tho the story feels slow but it doesnt feel boring, atleast for me. For those of you who like Haikyuu i recommend this. Kiyoko For The Win.
u know think u would make a good blue lock ff or ao aoshi one [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Pretty Good. Not much chapters yet but I can definitely see the MC's personality shaping very well, which I believe would be enough premise for a well-devised plot despite this being an ff. Bravo, author-kun. Can't wait for more ππ― PS I can't help but notice the MC's show of interest in the glasses girl. I'm sorry but I strongly believe that there are other characters out there that would just be perfect for him. I just don't feel their chemistry yah know. Again, sorry for this.
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Thanks for this fanfic i really am enjoying this.Just the chapters are too short[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Absolutely lovee it !!!!!!!!!!!!!! really great story, please keep it going...β¦.............................................................
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Fam this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far ππ
This is the best Haikyuu Story I have seen so far. Please don't drop. ==============================================================================================================
This is agood Haikyuu fanfic. It is really well written story with decent grammar. I like how smarter Hinata is but at the same time we can still see the sunny attitude we love. The only problem I see with this story isβ¦. I WANT MORE CHAPTERS!!!Jk keep up the great work author san!
it deserve 5-Star[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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An absolute masterpiece. I am soo looking forward to more chapters. Please don't leave us hanging. Good concept, well-executed writing, moreover, writing isn't confusing at all and is rather high quality. Good job Bro.
If you like sport stories, then you will definitely like this! There's very few sports fanfiction nowadays and even fewer Haikyuu fics, so I am really hooked on this story! Hopefully this story is not just a flash in a pan, but will actually be completed because I have high hopes! Great story!
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man this IS REALLLLLY GOOD i got into so easily and it has semi long chapters si thats good and like my imagination can run wild with it i really hope you dont drop this any time soon and good luck with the writing
I don't know what to say except I really like it so keep up the good work ..................................................................
Now as much as I'd like to give 5 stars for the story, I can't because this story seems to be plagiarized. If you go on Archiveofourown and look up House of Memories, this story is almost an exact copy of that except with minor detail changes. For those who don't believe me, go and check it out and see for yourself.
This is good fanfic, author. I got addicted to your fanfic. I can't wait for more chapters. MOREEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Writing Quality: This is the best Haikyuu fanfiction that I have readβnot convinced? Then send me one that you think surpasses this one. Stability of Updates: I don't have any idea, but the update is relatively stable from the previous chapters. There must be some inconvenience on the Author's side that's why there's no update for two days. Story Development: It is at the most appropriate pace. Not fast nor slow, exactly in that golden zone where it is just right. Character Design: The characters are not just some blank characters. Hinata's character development is really good. You would even look forward to his changes. The changes in his character are not abrupt that they would seem out of place. World Background: So far, it had talked about some places that were not mentioned early in the original. Like the NA, or even Shiratorizawa Academy. So this is a good sign that the novel will not blindly follow the original route, I hope because that would be very boring. Conclusion: I like how Hinata improved and how it was not just overnight. It took him months to reach where he is now. I love how he had not wasted the memories of Adult Hinata, and I am looking forward to seeing Ninja Shoyo soon. A really big fan of Haikyuu, hope that there will be more chapters. You deserve the 5 stars.
Membuka SPOILER Muito boa historia vou acompanhar enquanto voce lançar pode ter sertesa que pelomenos 1 leitor pra essa história sempre vai ter [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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This is Amazing Haikyuu Fanfic. Even tho the story feels slow but it doesnt feel boring, atleast for me. For those of you who like Haikyuu i recommend this. Kiyoko For The Win.
u know think u would make a good blue lock ff or ao aoshi one [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Good[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Pretty Good. Not much chapters yet but I can definitely see the MC's personality shaping very well, which I believe would be enough premise for a well-devised plot despite this being an ff. Bravo, author-kun. Can't wait for more ππ― PS I can't help but notice the MC's show of interest in the glasses girl. I'm sorry but I strongly believe that there are other characters out there that would just be perfect for him. I just don't feel their chemistry yah know. Again, sorry for this.
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Thanks for this fanfic i really am enjoying this.Just the chapters are too short[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Absolutely lovee it !!!!!!!!!!!!!! really great story, please keep it going...β¦.............................................................
Your writing is a chef kiss [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Fam this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far ππ
This is the best Haikyuu Story I have seen so far. Please don't drop. ==============================================================================================================
This is agood Haikyuu fanfic. It is really well written story with decent grammar. I like how smarter Hinata is but at the same time we can still see the sunny attitude we love. The only problem I see with this story isβ¦. I WANT MORE CHAPTERS!!!Jk keep up the great work author san!
it deserve 5-Star[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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An absolute masterpiece. I am soo looking forward to more chapters. Please don't leave us hanging. Good concept, well-executed writing, moreover, writing isn't confusing at all and is rather high quality. Good job Bro.
If you like sport stories, then you will definitely like this! There's very few sports fanfiction nowadays and even fewer Haikyuu fics, so I am really hooked on this story! Hopefully this story is not just a flash in a pan, but will actually be completed because I have high hopes! Great story!
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man this IS REALLLLLY GOOD i got into so easily and it has semi long chapters si thats good and like my imagination can run wild with it i really hope you dont drop this any time soon and good luck with the writing