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Through His Touch
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She is a young ever smiling lady but beneath her smile, a broken girl resides.
He is an established man who lost fell out of love in a second after an accident.
His girlfriend leaves him for his uncle, leaving him devastated.
This story is about two persons, Phoenix Jay, a massause owning her own shop and he, Jade Paulson a former devoted young Captain. They tackle life together, healing each others wounds.
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NB: The cover design is not mine.
Credit to Pinterest
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Your story has a unique tone to it. The plot is great and you used easy and understandable words. Please don't stop writing, I could see an upcoming bestseller Author in you. 💖💕💖💖💖
love the way this story is going and the plot and character development is great I'm definitely adding this book to my library, keep up the good work author❤️
well I don't want to give this a whole 5 cause there is still a room for improvement. show your support by reviewing this book. Porcupine_
I was a little confused in chapter one but as I read on things became clear. Jade seems to be a complex person and you have done well showing his frustration with his situation. Keep up the good work
Grrat start for an online novel! Extremely thrilling and exciting moments! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] Well done author, keep working hard!
You tend to over word things and it snarls up the flow. Trim the unnecessary and keep your dialogue crisp by using the rule if I wouldn't say it neither should my characters. For instance you used sister in law instead of the characters name.