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love this story so far! was disappointed to see that there isn't more, @leftpinky waiting anxiously for more chapters!
Don’t read if ntr isn’t for you it’s just that simple the main character really got cucked in the first 5 chapters like what that makes no sense the girl didn’t even have a reason to do it
Now while I generally despise the netorare genre entirely, in this instance I cab sort of accept it since it was a catalyst for his "power" what I would like to know though is will there be development between the three involved in the future before I get to heavily involved in this. but I do have to admit I like the way you write I'm up to the [fun night] 1/3 and enjoying it somewhat sofar.
I could only read up to chapter 6. The author did Netorare without warning. The girl has no reason to even do this. LOL...........................................................................................................................
It's a pretty good book but he did lose a lot of readers because of the earlier betrayal in the book. But don't worry about that just keep on doing you and never give up.
Well, the main character gets cucked, which the author didn’t even bother to warn about, which is quite the annoying thing thung to deal with when you expect a decent novel
The world is interesting, with characters that draw you in deep into the plot. I'm looking forward to seeing where the author takes the story next!
Hands down, a very enjoyable read. The idea is intriguing and the plot is so far amazing. The author does a good job on bringing the characters and story to life. Overall, it’s a really good read and I’d recommend it to anyone looking for a good, action packed book.
Each chapter grew better and you can visibly see the author's hardwork and determination towards story.Nice story, solid plot and interesting characters...Love it..keep it up Author[img=recommend][img=recommend]
❤❤ First the cover is amazing. The way the story began and the way it takes one in is great, you can help but want to read more and more. The Mc is likeable and I can't help but root for him. Good book.
I love the cover and the way the book draws you in, making you want to read it more and more. Honestly really good writing from chapter one and the plot can bee seen on good foundation by summary. World building is really hard to make and understand but it is done beautifully here.
Great Story and would recommend to anyone that's look for a solid plot and world build. The story is also executed properly putting you into a loop of wanting more and more. Definitely a 5 star story.
wow, just started reading the book. i feel bad for mc, seeing how is being treated in the first chap only. But the author has good writing with interesting plot.
Great book, author's writing skill is really good along with the story, quite interesting and a very easy read, good job author and good luck
Wow this book is amazing ,I love the grammar ,the plot everything was okay and I loved reading all the chapters so far can't wait to read more chapters if I get time ,I highly recommend this book , PLEASE DO CHECK OUT ON THIS BOOK and read it !!!!!!!
Great story and multidimensional, intelligent storytelling. It is both easy to read and easy to get lost into. The premise is interesting and the execution is just perfect, a definitely thrilling book.
love this story so far! was disappointed to see that there isn't more, @leftpinky waiting anxiously for more chapters!
Don’t read if ntr isn’t for you it’s just that simple the main character really got cucked in the first 5 chapters like what that makes no sense the girl didn’t even have a reason to do it
Now while I generally despise the netorare genre entirely, in this instance I cab sort of accept it since it was a catalyst for his "power" what I would like to know though is will there be development between the three involved in the future before I get to heavily involved in this. but I do have to admit I like the way you write I'm up to the [fun night] 1/3 and enjoying it somewhat sofar.
I could only read up to chapter 6. The author did Netorare without warning. The girl has no reason to even do this. LOL...........................................................................................................................
It's a pretty good book but he did lose a lot of readers because of the earlier betrayal in the book. But don't worry about that just keep on doing you and never give up.
Well, the main character gets cucked, which the author didn’t even bother to warn about, which is quite the annoying thing thung to deal with when you expect a decent novel
The world is interesting, with characters that draw you in deep into the plot. I'm looking forward to seeing where the author takes the story next!
Hands down, a very enjoyable read. The idea is intriguing and the plot is so far amazing. The author does a good job on bringing the characters and story to life. Overall, it’s a really good read and I’d recommend it to anyone looking for a good, action packed book.
Each chapter grew better and you can visibly see the author's hardwork and determination towards story.Nice story, solid plot and interesting characters...Love it..keep it up Author[img=recommend][img=recommend]
❤❤ First the cover is amazing. The way the story began and the way it takes one in is great, you can help but want to read more and more. The Mc is likeable and I can't help but root for him. Good book.
I love the cover and the way the book draws you in, making you want to read it more and more. Honestly really good writing from chapter one and the plot can bee seen on good foundation by summary. World building is really hard to make and understand but it is done beautifully here.
Great Story and would recommend to anyone that's look for a solid plot and world build. The story is also executed properly putting you into a loop of wanting more and more. Definitely a 5 star story.
wow, just started reading the book. i feel bad for mc, seeing how is being treated in the first chap only. But the author has good writing with interesting plot.
Great book, author's writing skill is really good along with the story, quite interesting and a very easy read, good job author and good luck
Wow this book is amazing ,I love the grammar ,the plot everything was okay and I loved reading all the chapters so far can't wait to read more chapters if I get time ,I highly recommend this book , PLEASE DO CHECK OUT ON THIS BOOK and read it !!!!!!!
Great story and multidimensional, intelligent storytelling. It is both easy to read and easy to get lost into. The premise is interesting and the execution is just perfect, a definitely thrilling book.
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