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I have enjoyed the novel so far. The mc was really annoying for the first few chapters but his character has improved over the course of the novel. I wish that more than one chapter was released a day as the chapters feel too short. Highly recommend reading it.
Felt important so i think i should talk about this. i know how important the mc of the story can be, some people do not like Azriel, so here are his character traits. -he kills innocents. -he is naive and reckless. -he likes to fight and get stronger. -he does not like to read. of course, it will change in the future, he will be the one who leads the empire, a leader can't be a Brute who doesn't think anything. He will change and get better. Actually, he is already a lot better than before within 30ish chapters and will keep on improving as the story progress. please be patient with him and me. hmm hmm, that's all i wanted to say. I hope have a great time reading.
Came from SHGS and I absolutely love this Novel as well. would 100% recommend that you read it.
Pls can the MC not have harem let him just love one person or don't fall in love at all pls, almost all books are harem 😠💢🤬ðŸ˜
This is even better than Supreme Harem God System! The world building is amazing in combination with Shgs and I love that the protagonist isn’t from earth. Makes the story feel more authentic. The Azriel Origin Arc was great.
Hey author why are you not updating,please start updating this novel......................................................................................................................................................................................................
Have not read the book yet but 5 stars from me in anticipation and knowing that it's from the same world as shgs and by same author. Please update shgs soon so I can finish that and start on this.
I read this book when you were releasing chapters regularly and suddenly one day in the middle of night, I got a random thought of this book and why did I stop reading it, turns out I was just waiting for an update and it never came.Anyway,just wanted to know if you have dropped the fic or will continue it.
The character design, background design/description every thing is perfect from my POV except for the chapter updates it has been the same for some months but overall a really good story
I really like the concept, characters, and world design so far. Very interesting, but the updates are severely lacking. I hope the author comes back to the this.
the story itself is OK, the character design is just meh, the updating has been on a 3 month hiatus. all in all, the story is just average, nothing extraordinary
Just an honest man giving an honest review. Novel wasn’t bad and I’m a huge system junky so I love system novels making this review a little more biased. The premise of the novel was decent and the background was kinda plain but I don’t really expect much from novels on this app. I’m just trying to find hidden gems that suit my taste. Recommend you give it a try if you have nothing else to do with your life, peace.
The uploading dates are so bad but the stroy is very good i just hope more uploads
The start is abut slow but the storyline is nice. I like the book and I am looking forward to how it will develop
i love the book but i would like to see him eventually have a both with both the female leads..great book tho 10/10
This one is good. chapters between 120 to 128 gives me feels and those onions cutting ninja in those chapter, I dont want them, but I dont hate them. I dont like them but They made it more interesting. well I have weird relationship with them. but that was good world background with onion cutting ninjas.
was good but now i cant even know if mc is even the real mc......................................................................................................
Great. At first, flow was good the MC character was.. someone hit him before I do. however you managed to weave a proper character development for the MC. Giving him proper growth. I am going to be continuing reading on to see how you make the story, characters, magic, continue. @ ch 145.
I love the story line and concept that this book has it's very interesting if you're reading this give the book a try I promise it will keep you entertained. Also shameless plus go checkout my book The End Of White.
Any updates on this one? This is a really good read and things are just starting to get good and pickup speed. Mc no longer has any bottlenecks either.. Please don't drop
This is a really good novel if you want an op protagonist who grows stronger quickly and a story with a pretty good world building. It's currently at the stage where he knows that he can steamroll the low level mob who's in the vampire continent but he'll get absolutely decimated by the big bosses who are hanging back in their main continent the moment he does, so he's building up power and experience in battle through training and gaining the memories of the first vampire.
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my fav webnovel, the MC is well built, his motivations and personality. But the greatest feature of this novel is The World background.
characters, story, background of world, everything ist amazing. I love this. I can't wait for moooooore.
weeee neeeeeed moreeeeeeee chapterssss, update is soo slow aurthor update faster ...........................................................................................
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it started well in the first episodes, but then it became stupid the character also begins to depend on the system, gradually, every time he jumps a level, someone two or three levels up needs his blood to develop again, and the speed of development is very slow
finally! a book with war setting that won't get wishy washed by morals like I won't kill innocents!! or a book about a non human MC but still cares for the other race!! like a demon king yet still saves human!! CHOOSE YOUR OWN RACE FOR MY SANITY'S SAKE! I HOPE THIS CONTINUES!! I LOVE THE STORY SO FAR!
I have enjoyed the novel so far. The mc was really annoying for the first few chapters but his character has improved over the course of the novel. I wish that more than one chapter was released a day as the chapters feel too short. Highly recommend reading it.
Felt important so i think i should talk about this. i know how important the mc of the story can be, some people do not like Azriel, so here are his character traits. -he kills innocents. -he is naive and reckless. -he likes to fight and get stronger. -he does not like to read. of course, it will change in the future, he will be the one who leads the empire, a leader can't be a Brute who doesn't think anything. He will change and get better. Actually, he is already a lot better than before within 30ish chapters and will keep on improving as the story progress. please be patient with him and me. hmm hmm, that's all i wanted to say. I hope have a great time reading.
Came from SHGS and I absolutely love this Novel as well. would 100% recommend that you read it.
Pls can the MC not have harem let him just love one person or don't fall in love at all pls, almost all books are harem 😠💢🤬ðŸ˜
This is even better than Supreme Harem God System! The world building is amazing in combination with Shgs and I love that the protagonist isn’t from earth. Makes the story feel more authentic. The Azriel Origin Arc was great.
Hey author why are you not updating,please start updating this novel......................................................................................................................................................................................................
Have not read the book yet but 5 stars from me in anticipation and knowing that it's from the same world as shgs and by same author. Please update shgs soon so I can finish that and start on this.
I read this book when you were releasing chapters regularly and suddenly one day in the middle of night, I got a random thought of this book and why did I stop reading it, turns out I was just waiting for an update and it never came.Anyway,just wanted to know if you have dropped the fic or will continue it.
The character design, background design/description every thing is perfect from my POV except for the chapter updates it has been the same for some months but overall a really good story
I really like the concept, characters, and world design so far. Very interesting, but the updates are severely lacking. I hope the author comes back to the this.
the story itself is OK, the character design is just meh, the updating has been on a 3 month hiatus. all in all, the story is just average, nothing extraordinary
Just an honest man giving an honest review. Novel wasn’t bad and I’m a huge system junky so I love system novels making this review a little more biased. The premise of the novel was decent and the background was kinda plain but I don’t really expect much from novels on this app. I’m just trying to find hidden gems that suit my taste. Recommend you give it a try if you have nothing else to do with your life, peace.
The uploading dates are so bad but the stroy is very good i just hope more uploads
The start is abut slow but the storyline is nice. I like the book and I am looking forward to how it will develop
i love the book but i would like to see him eventually have a both with both the female leads..great book tho 10/10
This one is good. chapters between 120 to 128 gives me feels and those onions cutting ninja in those chapter, I dont want them, but I dont hate them. I dont like them but They made it more interesting. well I have weird relationship with them. but that was good world background with onion cutting ninjas.
was good but now i cant even know if mc is even the real mc......................................................................................................
Great. At first, flow was good the MC character was.. someone hit him before I do. however you managed to weave a proper character development for the MC. Giving him proper growth. I am going to be continuing reading on to see how you make the story, characters, magic, continue. @ ch 145.
I love the story line and concept that this book has it's very interesting if you're reading this give the book a try I promise it will keep you entertained. Also shameless plus go checkout my book The End Of White.
Any updates on this one? This is a really good read and things are just starting to get good and pickup speed. Mc no longer has any bottlenecks either.. Please don't drop
This is a really good novel if you want an op protagonist who grows stronger quickly and a story with a pretty good world building. It's currently at the stage where he knows that he can steamroll the low level mob who's in the vampire continent but he'll get absolutely decimated by the big bosses who are hanging back in their main continent the moment he does, so he's building up power and experience in battle through training and gaining the memories of the first vampire.
Membuka SPOILER my fav webnovel, the MC is well built, his motivations and personality. But the greatest feature of this novel is The World background.
characters, story, background of world, everything ist amazing. I love this. I can't wait for moooooore.
weeee neeeeeed moreeeeeeee chapterssss, update is soo slow aurthor update faster ...........................................................................................
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it started well in the first episodes, but then it became stupid the character also begins to depend on the system, gradually, every time he jumps a level, someone two or three levels up needs his blood to develop again, and the speed of development is very slow
finally! a book with war setting that won't get wishy washed by morals like I won't kill innocents!! or a book about a non human MC but still cares for the other race!! like a demon king yet still saves human!! CHOOSE YOUR OWN RACE FOR MY SANITY'S SAKE! I HOPE THIS CONTINUES!! I LOVE THE STORY SO FAR!