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I can sense the X-men energy! I'm definitely excited to read this. has a captivating opening sequence that draws the reader in. The author was a seasoned veteran, and the writing quality was fair. By reading his works, you may probably already guess that. Best of luck and keep going [img=recommend]
Very inconsistent unrealistic reactions Book is more a like a blabbering all around the place seems like written by someone way young to write or express the thought process
sorry bro I can't even start reading the book because of the synopsis It's as if it is a Chinese young master novel.I will not comment anything on the novel as I have not read it,but I suggest changing the synopsis
This author really knows how to grab my attention. The suspense and thrill starts right from the first chapter, and it builds up it's momentum from there onwards. I can't wait to see what this world has in store for Felix 🔥😁
So people in the reviews are saying that they dont have a clue abt whats going on and i can relate to that ever since the second chapter. Its just very confusing. The story feels all over the place and its just too much. I thought maybe i just wasnt paying attention but thats not the case bc of the other reviews i saw. The story doesnt look bad its just written a bit poorly.
I Have a Cheat System in the Apocalypse is a story about Felix, who has a system (I think), trying to do something? Admittedly, chapter six isn't a good point to give a objective review on a novel, however the first six chapters are so bad I cannot continue reading this. First off, the writing quality. This whole novel reads like you were hit by a truck and are now attempting to recall what happened while under anesthesia. Nothing at all makes sense in this novel. The first six chapters are so badly written that you will only be able to pick up some very superficial information. Mutants are being hunted by humans. Mutants have a school. The main character *might* have a system. That's really all I gleaned. (1/5 stars) Moving onto story development. It's awful. This might have to do with the way this story was written, but very little makes sense. I was planning on giving a general rundown of the first six chapters but I can't be asked to make sense of that convoluted mess. Anywho, the pacing is absolutely insane, main character is randomly thrown into combat multiple times, each reason he starts combat is increasingly more stupid than the last. After the main character nearly gets assassinated, but narrowly wins, a intelligent gorilla attacks them. The main character saves his assassin (thats right), and kills the gorilla. Promptly following, he falls over and dies. After this, we are suddenly thrown into a MMORPG, because why not. I could continue rambling on about various inconsistencies and plot holes that are in the first six chapters, but all you need to know is that almost every single character, idea, place, setting, that is introduced doesn't make sense. (1/5 stars) Character design. I don't really know all that much, main character has a weird obsession with money, has a close friend, that's about it. Characters are also convoluted and the main character seems like he has some form of autism, so I'm just going to default this to two stars. (2/5 stars) World background is a mess. So, from what vague inferences I can make, this is a apocalyptic world, where humanity is being attacked by various mutant beasts. So, in spite of this, the government decides to hunt down and kill humans with abilities? Anyway, school the main character has a super-powerful mutant in charge, but all it takes to pressure him is a mech and like ten police officers. Well, author only spent about five chapters in the real world before the main character dies and goes into a MMORPG world, so whatever. (1/5 stars) Overall, this is a very bad novel, but in a new way. I haven't seen as many novels that are as convoluted as this. Writing quality is very bad, and causes a lot of confusion right off the bat. The story development and world background don't help this either, making reading this even more confusing. I would recommend the author to use a story board and plan ahead, and at the very least fixing the abhorrent pacing issues. I give this novel 2.0 stars out of 5.
So I do like it, but honestly I just don't understand what is happening, maybe I didn't pay attention but I'm around chapter 35 and I've completely lost track of what's happening
This pretty much just seems like a wish fufilment self insert. It’s a good story but they way all conflict is meaningless because you know the mc will always be on top is kinda boring. Even when it’ literally impossible he’ll jus create a skill to make it possible. There’s no conflict and the comedy is alright i guess. Mid story but good enough.
Overall a good story. Writing Quality (5/5): Ignoring the very small, almost non-existent errors, the writing didn't hinder me from diving into the story. Stability of updates (5/5): it's updated frequently so I have no regrets in reading till the latest chapter. Story Development (4/5): I say, there are some parts that could have come out better (not mentioning, don't want to spoil) but yes, the development felt a tad bit forced here and there. Character design (4/5): I don't mostly like op chars or chars with such mentality, but it was good nonetheless. Plus, I loved the side chars developed however, you could add more emotions and make them chat jovially perhaps. World background (4/5): not bland, but not perfect. Though, I shouldn't question you considering that it didn't hinder the reading, but when it came to judging, I did feel that it was lacking a bit. Overall (4.4/5): Recommending to all who like less-descriptive story and more of a fun read.
Good. Very good. Real good. Profoundly good. Paranormally good. Astoundingly good. Breathtakingly good. Shockingly good. Overwhelming good. Staggeringly good. Astonishingly good. Confoundingly good. Stupefyingly good. It's just good. Why did you read all of this? What's wrong with you? Why are you wasting your life on my nonsense? Hi
The story is not bad, I'm on chapter 14 and I still can't understand several things. For example, he is in an academy protected by a great mutant, but some policemen with a robot decide to attack them, I don't understand the thought of trying to defeat such a powerful mutant with policemen. Second, apparently it's normal to kill each other at school, I don't know if it's a satire of the United States or what. Third, a student is able to infiltrate an intelligent humanoid beast capable of murdering students, let's remember that we are in a school with powerful mutants. Fourth, upon "dying" he wakes up in a Battle Royale, and apparently an administrator tries to kill him for no reason, which is then turned into an MMORPG-like game. And that I'm only going for chapter 14. I think the story has potential, but it needs to correct several things.
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Excellent book. I love the story and the way the story is progressing. I read only few chapters now but will read more. This book is great and I recommend you to read it. Truthfully, I don't like giving spoilers it would be better if you read it!! I added it to my library and will read more. Great work, Author. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Writing Quality: Author vividly describes the scenes that had taken part in the novel that will allow the readers to fully immerse within the world of the novel. Definitely excellent writing quality! Story Development: Author used the system cliche very well to make it intriguing to read that wouldn't bore out the readers. Also, NO HAREM!!! Character Design: Three words- Not Beta MC. Do I have to elaborate? I think not. We readers already know the importance of the mc not being beta. Updating Stability: Author updates daily. What more can you ask for? World Background: A bit of an info dump at the start but the author was aware of it so he didn't made it too much of an info dump and prevented it from boring the readers. kudos to the author! Overall: A must read! The fact that the MC isn't Beta is already one of the best thing about this novel. And... NO HAREM!!! Hurray!!!
A fantasy novel worth reading. It was fun to read, fresh for everyone, and enjoyable for your free time. The Main Character is relatable. The World Building is a perfect fit for the story. The pacing is good, not rushed, not delayed, just smooth enough to make me read more chapters. I recommend this novel to all readers out there.
it's a good story, unlike other novel with mc being trash F rank or something like that, mc here has abnormal rank at the beginning tho. mc is a chill guy sometimes 😆 Grammers are readable.
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i all about romance but I decided to give this book a chance. Okay, what got my attention was the book cover and I proceeded to the synopsis and I told myself. I must read this. Sincerely, the book didn't disappoint me which excite me a lot. A great piece of work and looking forward to more chapters!
As far as i read the book, its really interesting and hook me up for reading next chapter. It's well written about mutants. I LIKE NIX CHARACTER, STRONG and POWERFUL. KEEP IT UP GOOD WORK AUTHOR
I can feel the vibes of X men! 😂 This sure excites me to read. With an opening scene that sure hooks your readers in. The writing quality was decent and the author was already a veteran. You can already guess that by reading his works. Good luck and keep it up [img=recommend]
Excellent book I have to say, story development is on point, keeping the tension and suspense growing. Character Design is relatable, easy to flow with and the world Background give you the enthusiasm of a kind of realm you want to learn about. Good job, author!
The story is fast paced with mutant gorillas and everything else mutant. Think X-men, sliders and a system meshed together in one action based novel.
This is a good story, the plotline is easy to follow, the author did a great job and the writing quality is good too, I look forward to more chapters and i wish you good luck!.
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Another of DMC's hit books! I feel like my heart and soul is stolen! Story Quality ✓ Characters ✓ World Building ✓ OP MC ✓ Updating Stability ✓ Story Development ✓ (Hmm, I think this one's as good as TGOPC... Maybe even better. Heh heh)
Author again! Here to release another amazing review for my newest work. Okie readers, this book is a book in a science world with fantasy elements! What do I mean? Have you ever had a thought that strange supernatural forces are always hiding in the darkness masked by the reign of technology? Our MC is a supervillain with a system that helps him cheat the order of the gods above. He is an anti-hero who doesn't risk his life without a reason. The story is set in an apocalyptic world where they're Superheroes (Deviants), Supervillains (Mutants), and scarily intelligent zombies (Variants). They'll be steady character growth from weak and naive to cunning and strong. This book has romance but no harem. Support is always welcome including your gifts, tickets, and power stones! Chapter Release Rate: 14 Chapter/Week +Bonus Chapters For Fulfilling Author Goals! Well, time for you to read the book, and see for yourself how amazing it could be.
I can sense the X-men energy! I'm definitely excited to read this. has a captivating opening sequence that draws the reader in. The author was a seasoned veteran, and the writing quality was fair. By reading his works, you may probably already guess that. Best of luck and keep going [img=recommend]
Very inconsistent unrealistic reactions Book is more a like a blabbering all around the place seems like written by someone way young to write or express the thought process
sorry bro I can't even start reading the book because of the synopsis It's as if it is a Chinese young master novel.I will not comment anything on the novel as I have not read it,but I suggest changing the synopsis
This author really knows how to grab my attention. The suspense and thrill starts right from the first chapter, and it builds up it's momentum from there onwards. I can't wait to see what this world has in store for Felix 🔥😁
So people in the reviews are saying that they dont have a clue abt whats going on and i can relate to that ever since the second chapter. Its just very confusing. The story feels all over the place and its just too much. I thought maybe i just wasnt paying attention but thats not the case bc of the other reviews i saw. The story doesnt look bad its just written a bit poorly.
I Have a Cheat System in the Apocalypse is a story about Felix, who has a system (I think), trying to do something? Admittedly, chapter six isn't a good point to give a objective review on a novel, however the first six chapters are so bad I cannot continue reading this. First off, the writing quality. This whole novel reads like you were hit by a truck and are now attempting to recall what happened while under anesthesia. Nothing at all makes sense in this novel. The first six chapters are so badly written that you will only be able to pick up some very superficial information. Mutants are being hunted by humans. Mutants have a school. The main character *might* have a system. That's really all I gleaned. (1/5 stars) Moving onto story development. It's awful. This might have to do with the way this story was written, but very little makes sense. I was planning on giving a general rundown of the first six chapters but I can't be asked to make sense of that convoluted mess. Anywho, the pacing is absolutely insane, main character is randomly thrown into combat multiple times, each reason he starts combat is increasingly more stupid than the last. After the main character nearly gets assassinated, but narrowly wins, a intelligent gorilla attacks them. The main character saves his assassin (thats right), and kills the gorilla. Promptly following, he falls over and dies. After this, we are suddenly thrown into a MMORPG, because why not. I could continue rambling on about various inconsistencies and plot holes that are in the first six chapters, but all you need to know is that almost every single character, idea, place, setting, that is introduced doesn't make sense. (1/5 stars) Character design. I don't really know all that much, main character has a weird obsession with money, has a close friend, that's about it. Characters are also convoluted and the main character seems like he has some form of autism, so I'm just going to default this to two stars. (2/5 stars) World background is a mess. So, from what vague inferences I can make, this is a apocalyptic world, where humanity is being attacked by various mutant beasts. So, in spite of this, the government decides to hunt down and kill humans with abilities? Anyway, school the main character has a super-powerful mutant in charge, but all it takes to pressure him is a mech and like ten police officers. Well, author only spent about five chapters in the real world before the main character dies and goes into a MMORPG world, so whatever. (1/5 stars) Overall, this is a very bad novel, but in a new way. I haven't seen as many novels that are as convoluted as this. Writing quality is very bad, and causes a lot of confusion right off the bat. The story development and world background don't help this either, making reading this even more confusing. I would recommend the author to use a story board and plan ahead, and at the very least fixing the abhorrent pacing issues. I give this novel 2.0 stars out of 5.
So I do like it, but honestly I just don't understand what is happening, maybe I didn't pay attention but I'm around chapter 35 and I've completely lost track of what's happening
This pretty much just seems like a wish fufilment self insert. It’s a good story but they way all conflict is meaningless because you know the mc will always be on top is kinda boring. Even when it’ literally impossible he’ll jus create a skill to make it possible. There’s no conflict and the comedy is alright i guess. Mid story but good enough.
Overall a good story. Writing Quality (5/5): Ignoring the very small, almost non-existent errors, the writing didn't hinder me from diving into the story. Stability of updates (5/5): it's updated frequently so I have no regrets in reading till the latest chapter. Story Development (4/5): I say, there are some parts that could have come out better (not mentioning, don't want to spoil) but yes, the development felt a tad bit forced here and there. Character design (4/5): I don't mostly like op chars or chars with such mentality, but it was good nonetheless. Plus, I loved the side chars developed however, you could add more emotions and make them chat jovially perhaps. World background (4/5): not bland, but not perfect. Though, I shouldn't question you considering that it didn't hinder the reading, but when it came to judging, I did feel that it was lacking a bit. Overall (4.4/5): Recommending to all who like less-descriptive story and more of a fun read.
Good. Very good. Real good. Profoundly good. Paranormally good. Astoundingly good. Breathtakingly good. Shockingly good. Overwhelming good. Staggeringly good. Astonishingly good. Confoundingly good. Stupefyingly good. It's just good. Why did you read all of this? What's wrong with you? Why are you wasting your life on my nonsense? Hi
The story is not bad, I'm on chapter 14 and I still can't understand several things. For example, he is in an academy protected by a great mutant, but some policemen with a robot decide to attack them, I don't understand the thought of trying to defeat such a powerful mutant with policemen. Second, apparently it's normal to kill each other at school, I don't know if it's a satire of the United States or what. Third, a student is able to infiltrate an intelligent humanoid beast capable of murdering students, let's remember that we are in a school with powerful mutants. Fourth, upon "dying" he wakes up in a Battle Royale, and apparently an administrator tries to kill him for no reason, which is then turned into an MMORPG-like game. And that I'm only going for chapter 14. I think the story has potential, but it needs to correct several things.
Membuka SPOILER Excellent book. I love the story and the way the story is progressing. I read only few chapters now but will read more. This book is great and I recommend you to read it. Truthfully, I don't like giving spoilers it would be better if you read it!! I added it to my library and will read more. Great work, Author. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Writing Quality: Author vividly describes the scenes that had taken part in the novel that will allow the readers to fully immerse within the world of the novel. Definitely excellent writing quality! Story Development: Author used the system cliche very well to make it intriguing to read that wouldn't bore out the readers. Also, NO HAREM!!! Character Design: Three words- Not Beta MC. Do I have to elaborate? I think not. We readers already know the importance of the mc not being beta. Updating Stability: Author updates daily. What more can you ask for? World Background: A bit of an info dump at the start but the author was aware of it so he didn't made it too much of an info dump and prevented it from boring the readers. kudos to the author! Overall: A must read! The fact that the MC isn't Beta is already one of the best thing about this novel. And... NO HAREM!!! Hurray!!!
A fantasy novel worth reading. It was fun to read, fresh for everyone, and enjoyable for your free time. The Main Character is relatable. The World Building is a perfect fit for the story. The pacing is good, not rushed, not delayed, just smooth enough to make me read more chapters. I recommend this novel to all readers out there.
it's a good story, unlike other novel with mc being trash F rank or something like that, mc here has abnormal rank at the beginning tho. mc is a chill guy sometimes 😆 Grammers are readable.
the only flaw is that there are no more chapters[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
i all about romance but I decided to give this book a chance. Okay, what got my attention was the book cover and I proceeded to the synopsis and I told myself. I must read this. Sincerely, the book didn't disappoint me which excite me a lot. A great piece of work and looking forward to more chapters!
As far as i read the book, its really interesting and hook me up for reading next chapter. It's well written about mutants. I LIKE NIX CHARACTER, STRONG and POWERFUL. KEEP IT UP GOOD WORK AUTHOR
I can feel the vibes of X men! 😂 This sure excites me to read. With an opening scene that sure hooks your readers in. The writing quality was decent and the author was already a veteran. You can already guess that by reading his works. Good luck and keep it up [img=recommend]
Excellent book I have to say, story development is on point, keeping the tension and suspense growing. Character Design is relatable, easy to flow with and the world Background give you the enthusiasm of a kind of realm you want to learn about. Good job, author!
The story is fast paced with mutant gorillas and everything else mutant. Think X-men, sliders and a system meshed together in one action based novel.
This is a good story, the plotline is easy to follow, the author did a great job and the writing quality is good too, I look forward to more chapters and i wish you good luck!.
Membuka SPOILER Another of DMC's hit books! I feel like my heart and soul is stolen! Story Quality ✓ Characters ✓ World Building ✓ OP MC ✓ Updating Stability ✓ Story Development ✓ (Hmm, I think this one's as good as TGOPC... Maybe even better. Heh heh)
Author again! Here to release another amazing review for my newest work. Okie readers, this book is a book in a science world with fantasy elements! What do I mean? Have you ever had a thought that strange supernatural forces are always hiding in the darkness masked by the reign of technology? Our MC is a supervillain with a system that helps him cheat the order of the gods above. He is an anti-hero who doesn't risk his life without a reason. The story is set in an apocalyptic world where they're Superheroes (Deviants), Supervillains (Mutants), and scarily intelligent zombies (Variants). They'll be steady character growth from weak and naive to cunning and strong. This book has romance but no harem. Support is always welcome including your gifts, tickets, and power stones! Chapter Release Rate: 14 Chapter/Week +Bonus Chapters For Fulfilling Author Goals! Well, time for you to read the book, and see for yourself how amazing it could be.