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Interesting idea but the writing style is too melodramatic for me. Than there's that multiple universes mashup plot, too convoluted for me.Keep up the good work though, had to drop it because this story is not to my taste.
I don't usually write a review but since the author seems to need it, I will write an honest review. (PS: I am currently reading until chapter 53.) The story about transmigration as Fukagu and deals with the fallen God is interesting, especially about the sudden appearance of Father and 7 sins from FMA. I am looking forward to the next development. For me, the story pace is fine. I like how the author makes a detail about the shinobi war and Fukagu's character development in it. It seems the author did a lot of proper research when writing it. I also know the difficulty of writing such a plot about war. It was so complex that it involved political, social, economic, and other stuff. Even Kishimoto the original author didn't truly detail this part. (Recommended for people who want to explore the idea of shinobi war.) Overall, it is well-written and recommended Naruto fan-fiction.
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Let's get won't thing out of the way. The fanfic is great and Fugaku is a very underrated character. The wishes were also unique in the Naruto setting. But something off-putting is the dialogue. It's so formal even between friends. It's like I'm reading one of those Chinese novels. If you can fix that it'll be great
Iβm a sucker for anything non-canon, so 5 stars for me. Extra stars for not being with fulfillment or kage level strength at age of 2
I really like this story, I hope this doesnβt discontinued but I also hope this isnβt harem. Iβll support u author on the sidelines!
I know the author said the story would be slow paced, that is not a problem but if you are making your story slow, atleast don't make it too boring.
Good Read, Good Story. Just want to ask if he will still marry Mikoto? I'm just to tired Reading Harem, Harem Have became to clichΓ© at this point.
I Want more but I don't want the quality to go down, so Just keep up the pace. βββ βββ β β ΰΏβββ βββ β β ΰΏβββ βββ β β ΰΏβββ βββ β β ΰΏβββ βββ β β ΰΏ
Self insert as Uchiha Fugaku when he was a child. Sakumo is still alive, Orochimaru has not yet a traitor. Currently at war (Chapter 34). Anyway i just want to say that if the mc is an Uchiha just kill Danzo and BAM problem solve
Gostei bastante da historia, se acontecer dela declinar ou ser abandonada, eu volto para editar . . . . . . . . . ...................................................... ...................................................... ...................................................... ...................................................... ...................................................... . . . . . . . .
This book so far has been a interesting read with great character development and easy to follow story line. I look forward to the future chapters and seeing how our main character will develop and how this fanfic generates its alternative naruto timeline. keep up the great work. π
1st of all this is not a Canon rewrite this is way back canon sakumo is still alive and orochimaru is not yet traitor and minato is still a kid. Also he is not in a Genin team/Jonin sensei which i liked cause its something new but i hope the mc also got genin students when he became a jonin or later in the story. Mc has OP powers but not yet OP its like most of his powers are Passive and the active ones have some sort of conditions/limitations. Anyway said powers are the Seven Deadly Sins Powers not the Meliodas/Ban etc. its the Full Metal Alchemist Seven Deadly sins. The story tackles the political the side i mean instead of using violence and power to solve the uchiha problem he instead tackles it via politics such as trickery and scheming. You might ask he is strong and OP, why not just bulldoze through it, the answer to that is that he might have OP powers but he is still not OP for some reasons unknown even he did something direct he will do it Disguised or Transformed. Lastly is that i want more chapters cause its a good Story and I Hope it wont get dropped. So here is some Stones ^_^
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Hey author I like what Iβv read so far and this has great potential, when will we see more chapters ?
The synopsis is bad but I suggest you to try this fanfic because as far as I read the story please me. The chapter are not too short or too long. (Chapter 6 and I will read the others after I write this review)
Hello ππ½ I am the author of this little stor and personally I like what I am writing otherwise I would not be writing it right. So if you feel like it visit my Patreon and support me! Each subscriber means a lot to me and makes it possible for me to be a full time writer and pay my rent and other expenses. π€π½peace out.
this plot new for me, never read reincarnation as fugaku but the story is boring i can't hold to yawn everytime when i read the story
Interesting idea but the writing style is too melodramatic for me. Than there's that multiple universes mashup plot, too convoluted for me.Keep up the good work though, had to drop it because this story is not to my taste.
I don't usually write a review but since the author seems to need it, I will write an honest review. (PS: I am currently reading until chapter 53.) The story about transmigration as Fukagu and deals with the fallen God is interesting, especially about the sudden appearance of Father and 7 sins from FMA. I am looking forward to the next development. For me, the story pace is fine. I like how the author makes a detail about the shinobi war and Fukagu's character development in it. It seems the author did a lot of proper research when writing it. I also know the difficulty of writing such a plot about war. It was so complex that it involved political, social, economic, and other stuff. Even Kishimoto the original author didn't truly detail this part. (Recommended for people who want to explore the idea of shinobi war.) Overall, it is well-written and recommended Naruto fan-fiction.
Membuka SPOILER Let's get won't thing out of the way. The fanfic is great and Fugaku is a very underrated character. The wishes were also unique in the Naruto setting. But something off-putting is the dialogue. It's so formal even between friends. It's like I'm reading one of those Chinese novels. If you can fix that it'll be great
Iβm a sucker for anything non-canon, so 5 stars for me. Extra stars for not being with fulfillment or kage level strength at age of 2
I really like this story, I hope this doesnβt discontinued but I also hope this isnβt harem. Iβll support u author on the sidelines!
I know the author said the story would be slow paced, that is not a problem but if you are making your story slow, atleast don't make it too boring.
Good Read, Good Story. Just want to ask if he will still marry Mikoto? I'm just to tired Reading Harem, Harem Have became to clichΓ© at this point.
I Want more but I don't want the quality to go down, so Just keep up the pace. βββ βββ β β ΰΏβββ βββ β β ΰΏβββ βββ β β ΰΏβββ βββ β β ΰΏβββ βββ β β ΰΏ
Self insert as Uchiha Fugaku when he was a child. Sakumo is still alive, Orochimaru has not yet a traitor. Currently at war (Chapter 34). Anyway i just want to say that if the mc is an Uchiha just kill Danzo and BAM problem solve
Gostei bastante da historia, se acontecer dela declinar ou ser abandonada, eu volto para editar . . . . . . . . . ...................................................... ...................................................... ...................................................... ...................................................... ...................................................... . . . . . . . .
This book so far has been a interesting read with great character development and easy to follow story line. I look forward to the future chapters and seeing how our main character will develop and how this fanfic generates its alternative naruto timeline. keep up the great work. π
1st of all this is not a Canon rewrite this is way back canon sakumo is still alive and orochimaru is not yet traitor and minato is still a kid. Also he is not in a Genin team/Jonin sensei which i liked cause its something new but i hope the mc also got genin students when he became a jonin or later in the story. Mc has OP powers but not yet OP its like most of his powers are Passive and the active ones have some sort of conditions/limitations. Anyway said powers are the Seven Deadly Sins Powers not the Meliodas/Ban etc. its the Full Metal Alchemist Seven Deadly sins. The story tackles the political the side i mean instead of using violence and power to solve the uchiha problem he instead tackles it via politics such as trickery and scheming. You might ask he is strong and OP, why not just bulldoze through it, the answer to that is that he might have OP powers but he is still not OP for some reasons unknown even he did something direct he will do it Disguised or Transformed. Lastly is that i want more chapters cause its a good Story and I Hope it wont get dropped. So here is some Stones ^_^
Membuka SPOILER Hey author I like what Iβv read so far and this has great potential, when will we see more chapters ?
The synopsis is bad but I suggest you to try this fanfic because as far as I read the story please me. The chapter are not too short or too long. (Chapter 6 and I will read the others after I write this review)
Hello ππ½ I am the author of this little stor and personally I like what I am writing otherwise I would not be writing it right. So if you feel like it visit my Patreon and support me! Each subscriber means a lot to me and makes it possible for me to be a full time writer and pay my rent and other expenses. π€π½peace out.
this plot new for me, never read reincarnation as fugaku but the story is boring i can't hold to yawn everytime when i read the story