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Interesting start to a story that I hope you continue! The flaw and how that will interact with the rest of the abilities to come, as well as how strongly the MC's personality will be impacted with each new character is also going to be interesting. Keep it up!
It's interesting... But all of the chapter are too short... I need moreee...... (≧ω≦)(≧ω≦)(≧ω≦)(≧ω≦)(≧ω≦)(≧ω≦)(≧ω≦)(≧ω≦)(≧ω≦)(≧ω≦)(≧ω≦)(≧ω≦)(≧ω≦)(≧ω≦)(≧ω≦)(≧ω≦)(≧ω≦)(≧ω≦)(≧ω≦)(≧ω≦)(≧ω≦)
Very nice concept amd interesting flaw i really want to know what it means _______________________________________________________________
Interesting start to a story that I hope you continue! The flaw and how that will interact with the rest of the abilities to come, as well as how strongly the MC's personality will be impacted with each new character is also going to be interesting. Keep it up!
It's interesting... But all of the chapter are too short... I need moreee...... (≧ω≦)(≧ω≦)(≧ω≦)(≧ω≦)(≧ω≦)(≧ω≦)(≧ω≦)(≧ω≦)(≧ω≦)(≧ω≦)(≧ω≦)(≧ω≦)(≧ω≦)(≧ω≦)(≧ω≦)(≧ω≦)(≧ω≦)(≧ω≦)(≧ω≦)(≧ω≦)(≧ω≦)
Very nice concept amd interesting flaw i really want to know what it means _______________________________________________________________
great over-all hope to see more like this