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Good Doraemon fanfic for me And if this is harem💗💗💗 then I am gonna continue.... so far story development is good.................👍👍👍👍👍👍
This is the best doraemon fanfiction on webnovel as of now. dont't drop this.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Please don't drop. this is the first Nobita fanfic of this decade. please don't drop
Novel has some problems in writing quality otherwise its all good so far as I have only read till 11th chapter. Please include all doremon movies in it, and some other cartoon's characters if you want some more content. If you increase conversations in characters and describe a bit more about not only characters but also places and situations it will be more interesting. You can change POV from time to time. Actually keeping 1st person POV all the time brings a bit of bad aftertaste. Other than that good work👍 [27-03-2023]
bro please continue this novel [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
It's super rare to see a doremon fanfic. it is good and all but as you said your a new author so i would suggest that you use this as a draft and rewrite after you gain experience and improve the writing skills and all. also don't mush many things up as in all movies and other things and personally I didn't like the he is part of GP and did enchantment part. the rewrite is only if you want to but consider it. and i think a proficiency system would have been better than a sign in system say something along the lines of his brain damage is healing and slowly maybe a little fast become smart and all.
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I like it please upload more chapters [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Author please continue the story,it is so good.I hope you will continue the chapters
Membuka SPOILER
i would say 3 things :- dont neglet other world development and make ch a little bigger make it a slice of life and bring doraemon 2nd DONT MAKE IT A HAREM PLZZZone girl is enough harem are stupid in my opinion 3rd dont make him too op in the start make it a progressful
I don't know what to say, just that keep posting more. I love it very much👍👍😄
Good Doraemon fanfic for me And if this is harem💗💗💗 then I am gonna continue.... so far story development is good.................👍👍👍👍👍👍
This is the best doraemon fanfiction on webnovel as of now. dont't drop this.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Please don't drop. this is the first Nobita fanfic of this decade. please don't drop
Novel has some problems in writing quality otherwise its all good so far as I have only read till 11th chapter. Please include all doremon movies in it, and some other cartoon's characters if you want some more content. If you increase conversations in characters and describe a bit more about not only characters but also places and situations it will be more interesting. You can change POV from time to time. Actually keeping 1st person POV all the time brings a bit of bad aftertaste. Other than that good work👍 [27-03-2023]
bro please continue this novel [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
It's super rare to see a doremon fanfic. it is good and all but as you said your a new author so i would suggest that you use this as a draft and rewrite after you gain experience and improve the writing skills and all. also don't mush many things up as in all movies and other things and personally I didn't like the he is part of GP and did enchantment part. the rewrite is only if you want to but consider it. and i think a proficiency system would have been better than a sign in system say something along the lines of his brain damage is healing and slowly maybe a little fast become smart and all.
🙃😆🙃😆🙃😆🙃😆🙃😆🙃😆🙃😇😃😆🙃😆🙃😆😃😆😄😆😉😆😄😄😆😉😆😉😅🙃😅🙃😆🙃😅😉😆🙃😆😊😁😁😁😄😄😆😄😆😊😁😁😁😉😗😄😆😄😆😆😄😄😊😄😊😄😉😊😄😄😗😄😗😗😗😄😗😄😗😄😗😄😗😄😊😄😊😄😊😄😊😄😊😄😊😄😊😄😊
I like it please upload more chapters [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Author please continue the story,it is so good.I hope you will continue the chapters
Membuka SPOILER i would say 3 things :- dont neglet other world development and make ch a little bigger make it a slice of life and bring doraemon 2nd DONT MAKE IT A HAREM PLZZZone girl is enough harem are stupid in my opinion 3rd dont make him too op in the start make it a progressful
I don't know what to say, just that keep posting more. I love it very much👍👍😄