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Yo, I already love this story so much. It's not going too fast and not going too slow. And I love the fight scenes. I wish I would have found this later tho since I cant wait to read it, sadge only 17 chapters, imma put this on hold and wait till 100 chapters or more.
I see author is a man of culture since he be describing only thicc and sexy women in the novel so far. And the fights scene are cool I guess. I do say the update of one per is not so bad.
To be honest, there are not a lot of things about your world. The same goes for character design. It's just the occasional line about their shapes and faces. Not much to go with. The story pacing is average I'll say compared to other novels I've read.
The writing and grammar are alright, and it's digital so even better. And the guy on the cover looks hot AF! So I cant wait to see more from you. I really want my own character integrated, a cute girl with big mommy milkers!
Yo, I already love this story so much. It's not going too fast and not going too slow. And I love the fight scenes. I wish I would have found this later tho since I cant wait to read it, sadge only 17 chapters, imma put this on hold and wait till 100 chapters or more.
I see author is a man of culture since he be describing only thicc and sexy women in the novel so far. And the fights scene are cool I guess. I do say the update of one per is not so bad.
To be honest, there are not a lot of things about your world. The same goes for character design. It's just the occasional line about their shapes and faces. Not much to go with. The story pacing is average I'll say compared to other novels I've read.
The writing and grammar are alright, and it's digital so even better. And the guy on the cover looks hot AF! So I cant wait to see more from you. I really want my own character integrated, a cute girl with big mommy milkers!