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good job author with every chap u left me hooked, the charaxhters are witten well, the plot is great . the author improved chap after another and the fact that tge pace of it is that great is captivating . please support the author because she isndoing her best with this novel
I am reading two novels right now. This is one of them. It's great and it seems like the story is soon about to give us a climax. The plot is always taking an exciting turn and the writer is never allowing us to get board of by dragging and necessary things in the chapters.
Good work all day You have me hooked but A lot of the chapters have inbetween the words so I can barely read it Please fix it
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it was interesting at first until she decided to train young kids to be soldiers/assassins.. idk why she had to go that route when she hated her previous lifestyle .. there were a lot of things that don't add up like she could raise her hand but she can walk or stand up, a father (ceo who should be a little smart at least) doesnt even know his triplets names, a 5 year old who was abused and prolly had no time to learn but is a computer genius even better than the main character, eh sry dropping it at ch 19, too cringe
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lots of chapters need a bit of editing the words are all running together. but over all it's a good storyline. well worth the reading. once the words are spaced out it will be even better and easier to read
It is quite good. Your writing and ideas are good. And the best part is, you almost perfectly avoid cliches that are recognized with this kind of genre. Please don't drop this.
Bro you rock! what a great plot and every chapter is amazing. So many views. You are popular i guess. New storyline!!!! amazing You are doing great job.
Okay.... Apart from some bad grammatical errors here and there, the book's premise is very interesting. But I think the chapter where the MC died doesn't give me a vivid image of the scene... (I can't understand where the bullets sprayed at her came from.) The author releases chapters steadily, and that's great. Good job.
An interesting plot and nice writing! I was never into FML but this sure has made me want to read more. I'll slap you if you give you on the story.
❤❤❤ It is the betrayed fl storyline but with a twist. I love the novel, the way the Fl took to the children as if there were hers was just incredible to read. It flows nicely. Nice one, Author-san.
This is a good book. I recommend you all read it. A fresh idea for new readers.👌🏼❤️ Man completing 140 words before posting a review is really annoying. 🤦🏼♂️🤦🏼♂️
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The first chapters are captivating and intriguing. However,as we dont know much about the character at the beginning of the book it is hard to sympathize with her but we do feel an attachment as the book progresses. A nicely written story with a good pace, recommended for anyone who enjoys that type of stories
From reading the first chapter, its a bit difficult for me because the protagonist is female and its natural hard for me to relate to a female protagonist as I'm a man, however it presented a good amount of info just in the first chapter, and held and interesting cliffhanger. Not my particular cup of tea, but I think it's still good. The only issue is the grammatical errors, but its understandable if english is not the Author's first language
The concept of the story seems interesting. It doesn't gives the vibes of a cliché novel that is usually found on this website. That is why i would suggest that you should novel a try...
This is my other novel, if you like it support it, if it has anything that needs rectification, please leave a comment and I will know. Thank you.
Hmm. The plot sure is interesting. I recommend you read this book. It is awesome. Thanks for providing this wonderful content, Author. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
good job author with every chap u left me hooked, the charaxhters are witten well, the plot is great . the author improved chap after another and the fact that tge pace of it is that great is captivating . please support the author because she isndoing her best with this novel
I am reading two novels right now. This is one of them. It's great and it seems like the story is soon about to give us a climax. The plot is always taking an exciting turn and the writer is never allowing us to get board of by dragging and necessary things in the chapters.
Good work all day You have me hooked but A lot of the chapters have inbetween the words so I can barely read it Please fix it
Membuka SPOILER it was interesting at first until she decided to train young kids to be soldiers/assassins.. idk why she had to go that route when she hated her previous lifestyle .. there were a lot of things that don't add up like she could raise her hand but she can walk or stand up, a father (ceo who should be a little smart at least) doesnt even know his triplets names, a 5 year old who was abused and prolly had no time to learn but is a computer genius even better than the main character, eh sry dropping it at ch 19, too cringe
Membuka SPOILER lots of chapters need a bit of editing the words are all running together. but over all it's a good storyline. well worth the reading. once the words are spaced out it will be even better and easier to read
It is quite good. Your writing and ideas are good. And the best part is, you almost perfectly avoid cliches that are recognized with this kind of genre. Please don't drop this.
Bro you rock! what a great plot and every chapter is amazing. So many views. You are popular i guess. New storyline!!!! amazing You are doing great job.
Okay.... Apart from some bad grammatical errors here and there, the book's premise is very interesting. But I think the chapter where the MC died doesn't give me a vivid image of the scene... (I can't understand where the bullets sprayed at her came from.) The author releases chapters steadily, and that's great. Good job.
An interesting plot and nice writing! I was never into FML but this sure has made me want to read more. I'll slap you if you give you on the story.
❤❤❤ It is the betrayed fl storyline but with a twist. I love the novel, the way the Fl took to the children as if there were hers was just incredible to read. It flows nicely. Nice one, Author-san.
This is a good book. I recommend you all read it. A fresh idea for new readers.👌🏼❤️ Man completing 140 words before posting a review is really annoying. 🤦🏼♂️🤦🏼♂️
Membuka SPOILER The first chapters are captivating and intriguing. However,as we dont know much about the character at the beginning of the book it is hard to sympathize with her but we do feel an attachment as the book progresses. A nicely written story with a good pace, recommended for anyone who enjoys that type of stories
From reading the first chapter, its a bit difficult for me because the protagonist is female and its natural hard for me to relate to a female protagonist as I'm a man, however it presented a good amount of info just in the first chapter, and held and interesting cliffhanger. Not my particular cup of tea, but I think it's still good. The only issue is the grammatical errors, but its understandable if english is not the Author's first language
The concept of the story seems interesting. It doesn't gives the vibes of a cliché novel that is usually found on this website. That is why i would suggest that you should novel a try...
This is my other novel, if you like it support it, if it has anything that needs rectification, please leave a comment and I will know. Thank you.
Hmm. The plot sure is interesting. I recommend you read this book. It is awesome. Thanks for providing this wonderful content, Author. [img=recommend][img=recommend]