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I'm sorry if I appear as arrogant. But i won't easily accept any suggestion as i don't want to destroy my story to fit other people wishes Still, I very much welcome any critics that helps me improve my story.
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I hope this novel continues, even though it's not that good in my opinion, but it's not bad considering there are very few TDG fanfics
Very good fanfic, good writing, please don't drop it...please update quickly 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
I dropped tales of demons and gods years ago, but this fic to me seems better than the source. It’s a bit of glazing, but I just want the author to keep updating
Interesting story, curious if this is a harem novel or not. More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More
Good story, pls update more! Good story, pls update more!Good story, pls update more!Good story, pls update more!Good story, pls update more!Good story, pls update more!
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I'm still waiting for 100+ chapters more to make a conclusion about the story TQ: acceptable Im in basic lvl for an English so the grammars is not that bad only that the author should make a long chapter for every update because of the long gap with no stability SD:would like to see how the regressor han will react to this timeline haha Maybe he will get his brain cells back by not creating a harem I mean he doesn't act for his mental age when around females👋🫨 CD:Need more chapters WB: it's a fanfiction so no comment
A Chinese name for a TDG background cuz it's Chinese and a df from one piece, umu~ let's try this one, i hope it's Good
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the power of a logia fruit in a cultivation world interests me, not many times you see this type of Fanfics. I'm going to give this story a chance, hopefully it doesn't disappoint me (translated)
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Pretty interesting story so far. Not much has happened yet, but I look forward to future chapters. Hoping they take the light devil fruit in a cool direction, and don’t just copy kizaru’s moves.
ignore the other review who gives 2 stars with no constructive critism at all. and ofc ignore me who gives myself a full 5 stars cz obviously im biased. Try it yourself if you fan of TDG. This novel is not a wish fulfillment, so you wont get mc who suddenly destroy everything and b*ng all the beauties from the very first day.
I'm sorry if I appear as arrogant. But i won't easily accept any suggestion as i don't want to destroy my story to fit other people wishes Still, I very much welcome any critics that helps me improve my story.
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I hope this novel continues, even though it's not that good in my opinion, but it's not bad considering there are very few TDG fanfics
Very good fanfic, good writing, please don't drop it...please update quickly 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
I dropped tales of demons and gods years ago, but this fic to me seems better than the source. It’s a bit of glazing, but I just want the author to keep updating
Interesting story, curious if this is a harem novel or not. More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More
Good story, pls update more! Good story, pls update more!Good story, pls update more!Good story, pls update more!Good story, pls update more!Good story, pls update more!
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I'm still waiting for 100+ chapters more to make a conclusion about the story TQ: acceptable Im in basic lvl for an English so the grammars is not that bad only that the author should make a long chapter for every update because of the long gap with no stability SD:would like to see how the regressor han will react to this timeline haha Maybe he will get his brain cells back by not creating a harem I mean he doesn't act for his mental age when around females👋🫨 CD:Need more chapters WB: it's a fanfiction so no comment
A Chinese name for a TDG background cuz it's Chinese and a df from one piece, umu~ let's try this one, i hope it's Good
Update saja, saya lebih bias kepenulis. Update update update update update update update update Update update update update update update update update Update update update update update update update update Update update update update update update update update
the power of a logia fruit in a cultivation world interests me, not many times you see this type of Fanfics. I'm going to give this story a chance, hopefully it doesn't disappoint me (translated)
Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work
Pretty interesting story so far. Not much has happened yet, but I look forward to future chapters. Hoping they take the light devil fruit in a cool direction, and don’t just copy kizaru’s moves.
ignore the other review who gives 2 stars with no constructive critism at all. and ofc ignore me who gives myself a full 5 stars cz obviously im biased. Try it yourself if you fan of TDG. This novel is not a wish fulfillment, so you wont get mc who suddenly destroy everything and b*ng all the beauties from the very first day.