Reviews of Starting an Empire in DxD world by Zestia_Einsbern - Webnovel

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1yr
Lihat 0 balasan
Dagda
LV 10 Badge

the novel has nice premises, the idea is beautiful even if sometimes some things are a little forced. The inclusion in the world of DXD is not the most innovative (Issei's brother and shoulder ...) but divine negligible. Chapter 15, however, brings it all downhill .... some choices of the author in my opinion tend to ruin the story as a whole. (spoiler) The mc who gets engaged to Sona, is cute, but that he enters his nobility after becoming his boyfriend is absolutely ridiculous. In practice, being a piece of the nobility of Sona, you have subordinated him to his girlfriend, thus removing an equal relationship. What is even more frustrating is that now the mc will have to obey Sona's every whim and rule in order not to risk becoming a stray .... in my opinion a really bad choice.

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2yr
Lihat 0 balasan
GodGarp

i'm loving it keep it up please i can't wait for the next chapter of this fanfic i have read and reread it is very good i'm loving it keep it up please i can't wait for the next chapter of this fanfic i have read and reread it is very good

2yr
Lihat 0 balasan
dampsterHam

I rated it 4 since a few people may not like it, but for me, it's definitely one of the better ones out there. Or maybe it's because I'm a simp for Sona...

2yr
Lihat 9 balasan
Louis_reader_00001

i would Like To say that i liek it verry mutch i hope that more Updates come IT IS a nice devlopment and i m super hypd For the next CH thanks For writing something amazing πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜†

2yr
Lihat 2 balasan
TheGehrmanSparrow

The marriage seems kind of forced, first, next why does he tell sona about him knowing about three factions, what is he going to do next tell sona that this is his second life, also the writing quality is kind of inconsistent, one second you are misspelling every word the next you don't misspell anything.

2yr
Lihat 0 balasan
zNecrum
LV 12 Badge

So first I want to say that I really like the book, even though it has some flaws. Lets start with the good thing first: -good writing quality -interesting and unique premise -consistency is something I can not judge right now As for the bad things -although the marriage is good for the plot progression I felt it was to forced -I gave world building only 3 stars because its just the dxd world so nothing unique Yeah ok thatβ€˜s basically it. Looking forward to more!

2yr
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Karma_T3000

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1yr
Lihat 0 balasan
Dagda
LV 10 Badge

the novel has nice premises, the idea is beautiful even if sometimes some things are a little forced. The inclusion in the world of DXD is not the most innovative (Issei's brother and shoulder ...) but divine negligible. Chapter 15, however, brings it all downhill .... some choices of the author in my opinion tend to ruin the story as a whole. (spoiler) The mc who gets engaged to Sona, is cute, but that he enters his nobility after becoming his boyfriend is absolutely ridiculous. In practice, being a piece of the nobility of Sona, you have subordinated him to his girlfriend, thus removing an equal relationship. What is even more frustrating is that now the mc will have to obey Sona's every whim and rule in order not to risk becoming a stray .... in my opinion a really bad choice.

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2yr
Lihat 0 balasan
GodGarp

i'm loving it keep it up please i can't wait for the next chapter of this fanfic i have read and reread it is very good i'm loving it keep it up please i can't wait for the next chapter of this fanfic i have read and reread it is very good

2yr
Lihat 0 balasan
dampsterHam

I rated it 4 since a few people may not like it, but for me, it's definitely one of the better ones out there. Or maybe it's because I'm a simp for Sona...

2yr
Lihat 9 balasan
Louis_reader_00001

i would Like To say that i liek it verry mutch i hope that more Updates come IT IS a nice devlopment and i m super hypd For the next CH thanks For writing something amazing πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜†

2yr
Lihat 2 balasan
TheGehrmanSparrow

The marriage seems kind of forced, first, next why does he tell sona about him knowing about three factions, what is he going to do next tell sona that this is his second life, also the writing quality is kind of inconsistent, one second you are misspelling every word the next you don't misspell anything.

2yr
Lihat 0 balasan
zNecrum
LV 12 Badge

So first I want to say that I really like the book, even though it has some flaws. Lets start with the good thing first: -good writing quality -interesting and unique premise -consistency is something I can not judge right now As for the bad things -although the marriage is good for the plot progression I felt it was to forced -I gave world building only 3 stars because its just the dxd world so nothing unique Yeah ok thatβ€˜s basically it. Looking forward to more!

2yr
Lihat 0 balasan