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It was sweet, really liked both main characters. It did leave a plot line unresolved but the main one & their relationship was established good. No unnesesary misunderstandings just incorrect use of possessive pronouns.
Absolutely wonderful story with a satisfying ending. It's so nice to read a story that moves with a good pace, great growth of the main relationship and growth of characters. Also so very thankful that they didn't have to deal with crises and conflicts drawn out too long, and no terrible misunderstandings nor wannabe third parties!!! Totally worthwhile simple, sweet love story of the perfect length!
love the story, it's not too complicated and it focuses on the main characters [img=update]
I like this novel. Although it was a little hard to tell how much time was passing by as I was reading. The overall plot was great. I am also glad they didn’t drag the story on. I do wish that they would just keep the secret between the two MC’s and not include Kevin. But I defintley reccomend this book if you like a good paced story with a ba**ss and smart MC!
I love this novel. Too bad that her grandfather never got his retribution . He got off easily without being punished.
This is a good story, wonderful world building and lovely characters. I love that this is a good amount of chapters instead of the 300+, 500+ or even 1000+ chapters! I can appreciate the story more because of this. However, it needs some serious editing. There are inconsistencies with the sentence and paragraph structure. And a big issue is the wrong pronouns getting used is so consistent. I feel if people are paying to read the chapters on WebNovel, authors need to make some effort on this part for the readers as this will elevate your novel as which it deserves!
Short story but very fulfilling. :) There are parts where I kinda cringe because the dialogues are too sweet or cheesy for me, but it's still acceptable. The pacing is just right, not too much twists and very straightforward. Highly recommended. :)
Story sounds good but the grammar is horrifying and I can’t continue to read it
Pretty cute story. Some parts really not believable. But it’s fiction so what yuygonna do? I don’t regret spending the coins
This was a very good story . Good development of characters and background . What I loved the most was it was complete and it ended well with in less than 100 chapters . When you finish this story you’ll feel happy . It feels like a finished story ! Highly recommend ! Loved the FL!!! The ML and the second ML were also good!!
I really enjoyed reading this novel. I feel as if it is the near perfect amount of chapters and doesn’ leave the reader in suspense wit very short chapters that are prolonged for no reason other than to gain coins. For future reference: If you have a good story line and plot, but you need to make money on this platform it would be much better to write and interesting novel that is not too long and creat sequels to draw an audience. Just saying 🤷🏻♀️
the story is nice! i would love to read it more but I can't because the unlock features are not available. i need to buy the whole book for 402 coins i hope it gets fixed :(
as much as i love this, I CANNOT UNLOCK CHAPTERS 😭 THE UNLOCK COST IS 402?!!!! WEBNOVEL IS 🤮 this app is so annoying can author upload this story to other apps pls WATTPAD PLS
Some corrections on the he/her she/he in this book. It threw me off a little some times. The overall story is great.. I can easily see a sequel brewing from where this is currently. I can appreciate that the main character being as powerful as she is without it being over the top world dominating. I really enjoyed this story.
I love books with story lines that are not over doing it. It doesn’t take over a thousand of chapters to make a good book.
I Absolutely love this story! It is so sweet and the world building is intriguing and complete. Though there were some translation issues, gender and leaving out some transition words it still flows well. The main characters are complex and well developed and tended to act more like real peeps than a lot of the supporting characters in these novels. I thought the author’s use of the main character’s name was clever and helped move the plot forward. Bravo and would give 5 stars if not for the translation issues .
Great book.. sometimes a book can be too much, but this one had just the right amount of everything in my opinion
I liked it very much because it didn't repeat information in order to pad out chapters. It didn't explain stuff in way that made you feel as though the author thought you the reader are stupid just to fill out chapters. My only complaint is that the English translation was a bit lacking, but over all a good read. [img=recommend]
I just want to say I recommend this book 100%, The story line is not only great but I enjoy how the author was able to keep the story interesting as well as making all the main characters who are not like normal story line after being arranged marriage... I hope the author can continue to write more stories like this..[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I can't seem to edit my previous comment, so I will put it in here. I know it's shameless for me to did this but please bear with me a little. T_T For anyone who's enjoy reading my story, please check my other book, The Useless Duchess' Second Chance. It's about a girl who's turn back time to fix her past mistakes. It's a historical romance story, with war, political marriage, and battle for the throne as the main problem. I will be really grateful if you're spare your time to check the story. ><
Can’t use fast past😕 why??please change that… but good story. Lots of love💕
Author is here! Sorry for the shameless rating. But I want to say that I'm truly grateful to anyone who has read and supported Maya and Evan's journey. This story is my first story in webnovel, so I'm a little anxious, especially when English is not my primary language. I'm truly grateful to those who are willing to tolerate the grammar mistakes and keep reading this story to the end. I love you guys so much. I will continue to learn to improve the quality of my story, so hopefully we can meet in other stories in the future!
I enjoyed this novel and would love to read more chapters so is this the end or are there more chapters coming soon. I want to know if their going to bring down that police chief I do hope they can.
Although I'm a fan of transmigration and reincarnation stories I don't usually enjoy reading contemporary stories. However this story came up under my free reads so I gave it a go since I could finish it in one sitting. I was pleasantly surprised. although there is some issues with pronouns and some confusion in the FLs name as her original name differs from the incarnation. Overall this is a solid read which comes to a satisfying end although not all plots are tied up, but that's just life isn't it...life isn't fair and stories not everyone gets their just desserts.
It was sweet, really liked both main characters. It did leave a plot line unresolved but the main one & their relationship was established good. No unnesesary misunderstandings just incorrect use of possessive pronouns.
Absolutely wonderful story with a satisfying ending. It's so nice to read a story that moves with a good pace, great growth of the main relationship and growth of characters. Also so very thankful that they didn't have to deal with crises and conflicts drawn out too long, and no terrible misunderstandings nor wannabe third parties!!! Totally worthwhile simple, sweet love story of the perfect length!
love the story, it's not too complicated and it focuses on the main characters [img=update]
I like this novel. Although it was a little hard to tell how much time was passing by as I was reading. The overall plot was great. I am also glad they didn’t drag the story on. I do wish that they would just keep the secret between the two MC’s and not include Kevin. But I defintley reccomend this book if you like a good paced story with a ba**ss and smart MC!
I love this novel. Too bad that her grandfather never got his retribution . He got off easily without being punished.
This is a good story, wonderful world building and lovely characters. I love that this is a good amount of chapters instead of the 300+, 500+ or even 1000+ chapters! I can appreciate the story more because of this. However, it needs some serious editing. There are inconsistencies with the sentence and paragraph structure. And a big issue is the wrong pronouns getting used is so consistent. I feel if people are paying to read the chapters on WebNovel, authors need to make some effort on this part for the readers as this will elevate your novel as which it deserves!
Short story but very fulfilling. :) There are parts where I kinda cringe because the dialogues are too sweet or cheesy for me, but it's still acceptable. The pacing is just right, not too much twists and very straightforward. Highly recommended. :)
Story sounds good but the grammar is horrifying and I can’t continue to read it
Pretty cute story. Some parts really not believable. But it’s fiction so what yuygonna do? I don’t regret spending the coins
This was a very good story . Good development of characters and background . What I loved the most was it was complete and it ended well with in less than 100 chapters . When you finish this story you’ll feel happy . It feels like a finished story ! Highly recommend ! Loved the FL!!! The ML and the second ML were also good!!
I really enjoyed reading this novel. I feel as if it is the near perfect amount of chapters and doesn’ leave the reader in suspense wit very short chapters that are prolonged for no reason other than to gain coins. For future reference: If you have a good story line and plot, but you need to make money on this platform it would be much better to write and interesting novel that is not too long and creat sequels to draw an audience. Just saying 🤷🏻♀️
the story is nice! i would love to read it more but I can't because the unlock features are not available. i need to buy the whole book for 402 coins i hope it gets fixed :(
as much as i love this, I CANNOT UNLOCK CHAPTERS 😭 THE UNLOCK COST IS 402?!!!! WEBNOVEL IS 🤮 this app is so annoying can author upload this story to other apps pls WATTPAD PLS
Some corrections on the he/her she/he in this book. It threw me off a little some times. The overall story is great.. I can easily see a sequel brewing from where this is currently. I can appreciate that the main character being as powerful as she is without it being over the top world dominating. I really enjoyed this story.
I love books with story lines that are not over doing it. It doesn’t take over a thousand of chapters to make a good book.
I Absolutely love this story! It is so sweet and the world building is intriguing and complete. Though there were some translation issues, gender and leaving out some transition words it still flows well. The main characters are complex and well developed and tended to act more like real peeps than a lot of the supporting characters in these novels. I thought the author’s use of the main character’s name was clever and helped move the plot forward. Bravo and would give 5 stars if not for the translation issues .
Great book.. sometimes a book can be too much, but this one had just the right amount of everything in my opinion
I liked it very much because it didn't repeat information in order to pad out chapters. It didn't explain stuff in way that made you feel as though the author thought you the reader are stupid just to fill out chapters. My only complaint is that the English translation was a bit lacking, but over all a good read. [img=recommend]
I just want to say I recommend this book 100%, The story line is not only great but I enjoy how the author was able to keep the story interesting as well as making all the main characters who are not like normal story line after being arranged marriage... I hope the author can continue to write more stories like this..[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I can't seem to edit my previous comment, so I will put it in here. I know it's shameless for me to did this but please bear with me a little. T_T For anyone who's enjoy reading my story, please check my other book, The Useless Duchess' Second Chance. It's about a girl who's turn back time to fix her past mistakes. It's a historical romance story, with war, political marriage, and battle for the throne as the main problem. I will be really grateful if you're spare your time to check the story. ><
Can’t use fast past😕 why??please change that… but good story. Lots of love💕
Author is here! Sorry for the shameless rating. But I want to say that I'm truly grateful to anyone who has read and supported Maya and Evan's journey. This story is my first story in webnovel, so I'm a little anxious, especially when English is not my primary language. I'm truly grateful to those who are willing to tolerate the grammar mistakes and keep reading this story to the end. I love you guys so much. I will continue to learn to improve the quality of my story, so hopefully we can meet in other stories in the future!
I enjoyed this novel and would love to read more chapters so is this the end or are there more chapters coming soon. I want to know if their going to bring down that police chief I do hope they can.
Although I'm a fan of transmigration and reincarnation stories I don't usually enjoy reading contemporary stories. However this story came up under my free reads so I gave it a go since I could finish it in one sitting. I was pleasantly surprised. although there is some issues with pronouns and some confusion in the FLs name as her original name differs from the incarnation. Overall this is a solid read which comes to a satisfying end although not all plots are tied up, but that's just life isn't it...life isn't fair and stories not everyone gets their just desserts.