One piece: Unwilling Idle System User

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Anonyrius

What can I say? I'm lazy, and an Idle system could be the best thing in my life... Probably. So why not create something like that, but in one piece. As for if this story will be a harem... I will just follow whatever my heart tells me while writing the story, so I don't know yet. You can stay around if you don't mind such things though, I'm just making this to give you guys some fun.

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DreamCrusher101

It is a good idea but the problem is why give it to a person who cant even read and understand whats on the screen Why not make the mc and tranmigrator with no memories or something or at least give the mc an idea on how to use the system at the first place

LV 1

123r97

Not sure why this has such a high rating... It's not a 1 star story but it's definitely not a 5 star one either. After rating everything else I'd give it around 3-3.5 stars mostly because of the character design and grammar. Writing quality: The author is either ESL (English second language) or is just really bad at grammar. It feels like a lot of paragraphs have been shoved into a google translate blender to come out as almost gibberish. Their favorite words/phrases also seem to be 'suddenly, immediately and out of nowhere' to the point that they are shoved into every other paragraph even if they don't make sense. They'd be better off if they just removed them entirely from their vocabulary rather than every single action happening 'suddenly'. Stability of update: No real context but considering a chapter was 'it wasn't dropped' and it's 50 chapters over the course of 7 months with sporadic updates I'll at least give it 4 stars here Story development: They gave a warning that the character was going to avoid using their system. Which is fine so long as they actually have a good reason to do so. But the reason in the story is so forced that it's a good marking point of when the story starts going downhill fast which isn't saying much since the story was already fairly average until then with the only real good part being the interesting system. There's little to no real story besides that, the mc has no goals or real purpose so everything is just him being forced to go around fighting all the while the mc is constantly complaining so there isn't enough to even really review. Character design: This is one of the main downsides of the story. The Author for some reason made an entirely unlikable main character. They have no drive, no goals they don't even have much of a personality besides being a lazy moron that's very strong, they have no reason to do anything making every chapter just comprise of them constantly complaining while doing things and acting like an idiot despite having something that's supposed to help their ability to think. The author also keeps trying to make dumb jokes that aren't that funny with cows and other jokes at the mc's expense when he's not a very likable character. It also seems like they are drinking the batman coolaid about the no killing thing. Which is always disappointing to see in characters, I don't need a psychopathic murderer but that and capital punishment when you can only gain are two entirely different things. World background: It's a ff and It doesn't really expand on the original world or add anything interesting. If anything someone that's never read/watched one piece before would be very confused reading this story.

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That_Lazy_Guy

Very interesting idea. and a new take on the system. few grammar mistakes that can be overlooked. realistic character and no reincarnation. I highly recommend this. hope the author doesn't drop and continue. keep up the good work

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abu_saeed

It's good but could be better, maybe once the main story starts. But updates are too slow.

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Monsieur_Dreamer

This is probably my favorite One Piece fanfic in this App. It’s refreshing to see an MC who isn’t edgy, villain and a genius right from the start.The author actually builds up his character very nicely and doesn’t feel forced at all. The MC’s interaction with the canon characters introduced so far is actually good and makes the reader hooked in to their relationships (not romantically). The MC is still a kid and that’s what the best part of the story. He is funny and very similar to Luffy. I’m invested in his character because he has a lot of things to developed from unlike the generic MC with a system who is a Gary Stu. He faces challenges first because of his naiveness as child and overcomes it, even now he’s still facing challenges.. Can’t wait to see him interacting with other canon characters and see who’s gonna end up with him but hopefully the perfect woman or women for him, he’s “strongest and toughest man in the world” after all..

LV 14

Vacio_Starrk

The writing quality is good i have not seen any bad grammar and also the stability of updates is good. I like where the story is going just hope it is not a harem the character design is almost realistic like in chapter 2 when he was sparring the kid when he was hit the reaction was very realistic for a child which is good I will give the world background a 4 star cause he has not started his adventure so maybe I will change my review later but I highly recommend this. And the system is very interesting overall it is a good story that has a very good potential.

LV 13

Angry_Reviewer

MCs that are supposedly OP but go around "hiding" their strength and acting like morons are not entertaining to read about in the least, trash story is trash.

LV 4

Ai_Evangeline

The story develops well up to a certain point... then the mc turns into a depressed crybaby, bua bua, that's all he needed to do..... garbage.

LV 4

YorumeSensei00

A good novel, one of the unique out there. Have a lot of potential to be honest. However in chapter about 20+ it goes downhill from there, a forced plot and a sudden nerf to his stats just for the plot to progress, honestly it was such a disappointment. A perfect moment to awaken his Conquerer's Haki but no let's go to the BS plot for forced character depression, he left alone his one and only key to strength. Also saying he is the worlds strongest Man but his mindset is not. A world where killing is normal as it is a world of pirates but MC just killed one and it was justified as they are notorious pirates but no let the MC start thinking I killed an 'innocent' person and let's be depressed. I know that this story is something that he will join strawhat and Author will need to balance his strength but can't he go about another route?! Honestly, the route the author take is just forced plot and such a a BS development where it doesn't make any sense.

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DaoistJ2BfOl

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Said_Palacio

I just checked this will be where I drop my daily stones keep up the good work[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Baldysalino

Updates are EXTREMELY slow and inconsistent. at this point might as well drop the story.

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kobeblackmamba

Very interesting idea. and a new take on the system. few grammar mistakes that can be overlooked. realistic character and no reincarnation. I highly recommend this. hope the author doesn't drop and continue. keep up the good work

LV 14

ManasCiel

I am enjoying. Give it a try. If you don’t like it, you only wasted a bit of time. I hope this does not get dropped any time soon. Keep up the good work Author!

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7CigarettePuffs

I don't usually comment but brother, please don't drop this gem. It's too good! It has got everything I could expect. You've 'perfectly' blended your character into OP and its characters. Something you did different that I commend you for is that the character doesn't have 'memories' of the plot. It was too good of a move for immersion! I feel like a monkey tasting honey for the first time. And then it's gone. Literally. I don't know your circumstances brother but if one of the reasons is that you think this isn't worth it, then you're wrong. It definitely is! Bring it back ? *puppy eyes *

LV 10

OsloTheUnkown

This is really good, although the system is cliche in a way, it's refreshing to see it in the hands of someone who doesn't know how it works vs someone who does, not only that but the design of the MC is really fluid, the naive nature mixed with his overwhelming strength is a good mix compared to the cliche black haired mc who kills everyone who looks at him the wrong way, but as with the mc I can see how the 'Nature of Killing' will effects him, anyone can nitpick about things in the story, but in my view this is really good, it isn't a story based on collecting a harem, nor is it a op mc that saves everyone in the nic of time, it's something that really resonates with the soul, a story that actually focuses on the story.

LV 2

JustSomeAirBison

5/5 story so far. The story really nails the athmosphere of One Piece when it first started, the fun fantasy vibe with a seriousness slowly creeping in the story. The characters are actually well-written and fleshed out and by the time I caught up to the story I was very invested on the characters. The Story development is well done in terms of pacing and story telling so huge plus on that, it takes time to make the main character strong because the mc isn’t actually the typical OC in a fanfictions where he’ll be the strongest character very quickly. And for the romance, there’s none yet since it’s too early although if it ended up as a harem I’d actually be more happy even if I hate most Harem stories because it doesn’t fit in the setting of the story but it would definitely work in One Piece and would just add realism to the Pirates vibes.

LV 14

EmreDemir

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