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en general la historia es perfecta, tiene la justificación de ser relatada como un diario, por lo cual los saltos de tiempos ( que no son largos en su) pasan desapercibidos.
Great story. I loved all of it, but I'm kinda sad about the ending. Although i know why it was done like that, I kinda wanted him to have the peace he always wanted.
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Really good story. It is just the good length and well written, the diary updates are quite good and make for an interesting read. The characters are recognizable and the world background is respected aven though Captain America does give change in the story.
I loved the unique way this book was written. Written like letters in the beginning and as it progressed, it transformed into something akin to a diary. Overall, I loved it. Thank you
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Seriously one of the handful of non-garbage fanfics out here, which I’m sadly guilty of. People who criticize the epistolary style of writing must have never read real books before, because it’s nothing new. My only gripe is having to find out you were using the book when I kept imagining everything in its tv format for most of the story. This was a joy to read.
If the author is to lazy to write a proper synopsis I am to lazy to read the fic. Giving 3 stars because I think giving just 1 would be unfair.
I rerely see completed GOT fanfic, good job for author. I know the ending of story is quite rush. overall, the story is good. I definitely enjoy it
This is a good fanfic book to read. The story is fast paced. Would have been better if the story was developed a bit more. loved the fast pace of the story.
I love this W.Q. 5* Almost no errors S.D. 5* Fantastic C.D. 5* Always lovey when characters act like who the're suppos to be U.S. 5* The end was abit sad W.B. 5* Nothing to say here other then it was good
Diary writing sucks and you can’t properly explore the side characters emotion and growth. 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎
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Es increíble esto me encanta,aunque los capitulos no son largos,la actualizaciones son bastantes seguidas,estoy esperando con ansias muchas cosas ,espero que sigan asi las actualizaciones kkkkkkkkkk
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lol Steve not doing anything about mycah's death is BS, Steve is not a saint but he was good man so him not doing anything and forgetting about mycah's death was big BS. Looks like these so called "some questionable, some noble, etc actions or decisions" will be nonsense forced plots that will forcibly portray a different Steve.
I fell asleep reading this. If you read it dont come in expecting it to be action packed and with a MC who has ambition and a goal. Captain America is just there….while things happen around him. You wouldnt know he was captain america if he wasnt wearing red white and blue 24/7 and talking about how he misses peggy all the time, otherwise youd think you were following the story POV of some background character.
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a good crossover, I think it is the second that I find of captain america, although there are many chapters that are like a daily story is interesting, it is also strange that stannis has reached an agreement with renly and that there is no news of daenerys from her , Dany and the captain I don't know if they would work, maybe Sansa would be better.
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The chapters are great, not any grammatical errors I could find(yet). Also, the fic is situated in the world of westros, a complicated and beautiful world and the MC is captain, a complicated character. I am excited to see what this leads to, by the tags, I am hoping to see a beautiful and complex story. Recommend it and good luck author-san!
Very good writing. Real character development and interesting take on plots. This is what fan fiction is. Thank you for a great story! Please keep writing!
this is a great find! the pacing is great for me not much issues were found. I think that even if you do not have a proper background of game of thrones, you could easily get into this by treating it just like other medieval fantasy novel.
Great novel I would love to see more of this. I hope you won't be stopping any time on the future . 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
well captain America is passifist in this, became a dog well that was nothing new. spare the enemies, during war what were you doing Cap, didn't even try to kill mountain
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Realmente achei está fanfic interessante, seja seu modo de contar a história em uma forma de diário ou o protagonista que se mantém fiel a imagem que temos do capitão América, com algumas mudanças no personagem é claro. Realmente recomendo está fanfic para quem estiver interessado.
Captain America huh. Nice. I hope you finish this. I liked the first few chapters and I want to see how this goes. I hope you pair Steve with Dany. lulz
Not many Captain America fics here on WN. Not many good GoT fics either. I like it. It's Nicely written and the style is quite like Anne Frank's diary.
The chapters are great, not any grammatical errors I could find(yet). Also, the fic is situated in the world of westros, a complicated and beautiful world and the MC is captain, a complicated character. I am excited to see what this leads to, by the tags, I am hoping to see a beautiful and complex story. Recommend it and good luck author-san!
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One of the good stories I read here on Webnovel.The story had good beginning good story line and pretty good ending There was some inconsistency in character but overall it was well written .
en general la historia es perfecta, tiene la justificación de ser relatada como un diario, por lo cual los saltos de tiempos ( que no son largos en su) pasan desapercibidos.
Great story. I loved all of it, but I'm kinda sad about the ending. Although i know why it was done like that, I kinda wanted him to have the peace he always wanted.
Membuka SPOILER Really good story. It is just the good length and well written, the diary updates are quite good and make for an interesting read. The characters are recognizable and the world background is respected aven though Captain America does give change in the story.
I loved the unique way this book was written. Written like letters in the beginning and as it progressed, it transformed into something akin to a diary. Overall, I loved it. Thank you
Membuka SPOILER Seriously one of the handful of non-garbage fanfics out here, which I’m sadly guilty of. People who criticize the epistolary style of writing must have never read real books before, because it’s nothing new. My only gripe is having to find out you were using the book when I kept imagining everything in its tv format for most of the story. This was a joy to read.
If the author is to lazy to write a proper synopsis I am to lazy to read the fic. Giving 3 stars because I think giving just 1 would be unfair.
I rerely see completed GOT fanfic, good job for author. I know the ending of story is quite rush. overall, the story is good. I definitely enjoy it
This is a good fanfic book to read. The story is fast paced. Would have been better if the story was developed a bit more. loved the fast pace of the story.
I love this W.Q. 5* Almost no errors S.D. 5* Fantastic C.D. 5* Always lovey when characters act like who the're suppos to be U.S. 5* The end was abit sad W.B. 5* Nothing to say here other then it was good
Diary writing sucks and you can’t properly explore the side characters emotion and growth. 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎
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Es increíble esto me encanta,aunque los capitulos no son largos,la actualizaciones son bastantes seguidas,estoy esperando con ansias muchas cosas ,espero que sigan asi las actualizaciones kkkkkkkkkk
Membuka SPOILER lol Steve not doing anything about mycah's death is BS, Steve is not a saint but he was good man so him not doing anything and forgetting about mycah's death was big BS. Looks like these so called "some questionable, some noble, etc actions or decisions" will be nonsense forced plots that will forcibly portray a different Steve.
I fell asleep reading this. If you read it dont come in expecting it to be action packed and with a MC who has ambition and a goal. Captain America is just there….while things happen around him. You wouldnt know he was captain america if he wasnt wearing red white and blue 24/7 and talking about how he misses peggy all the time, otherwise youd think you were following the story POV of some background character.
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a good crossover, I think it is the second that I find of captain america, although there are many chapters that are like a daily story is interesting, it is also strange that stannis has reached an agreement with renly and that there is no news of daenerys from her , Dany and the captain I don't know if they would work, maybe Sansa would be better.
Membuka SPOILER The chapters are great, not any grammatical errors I could find(yet). Also, the fic is situated in the world of westros, a complicated and beautiful world and the MC is captain, a complicated character. I am excited to see what this leads to, by the tags, I am hoping to see a beautiful and complex story. Recommend it and good luck author-san!
Very good writing. Real character development and interesting take on plots. This is what fan fiction is. Thank you for a great story! Please keep writing!
this is a great find! the pacing is great for me not much issues were found. I think that even if you do not have a proper background of game of thrones, you could easily get into this by treating it just like other medieval fantasy novel.
Great novel I would love to see more of this. I hope you won't be stopping any time on the future . 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
well captain America is passifist in this, became a dog well that was nothing new. spare the enemies, during war what were you doing Cap, didn't even try to kill mountain
++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Realmente achei está fanfic interessante, seja seu modo de contar a história em uma forma de diário ou o protagonista que se mantém fiel a imagem que temos do capitão América, com algumas mudanças no personagem é claro. Realmente recomendo está fanfic para quem estiver interessado.
Captain America huh. Nice. I hope you finish this. I liked the first few chapters and I want to see how this goes. I hope you pair Steve with Dany. lulz
Not many Captain America fics here on WN. Not many good GoT fics either. I like it. It's Nicely written and the style is quite like Anne Frank's diary.
The chapters are great, not any grammatical errors I could find(yet). Also, the fic is situated in the world of westros, a complicated and beautiful world and the MC is captain, a complicated character. I am excited to see what this leads to, by the tags, I am hoping to see a beautiful and complex story. Recommend it and good luck author-san!
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One of the good stories I read here on Webnovel.The story had good beginning good story line and pretty good ending There was some inconsistency in character but overall it was well written .