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My personal opinion about your novel is that I really like it because the novel tells about the characters of gods, wizards, dragons, vampires, wolves, what's more, I like the Greek god the most, and this novel has a mystery and a plot that is not clichéd and boring, the point is this my favorite novel I love your novels, hope you keep releasing chapters and don't stop them, and good luck to you writers. greetings from me Indonesia :)
Nice, the word flow could be a little better but its not bad. I like the idea of the egoistical character being thrown down some steps or thats what I predict. Im assuming he’ll turn intl a dragon and have ti solve some trouble?
Just read it with the flow , that's all I would say. story is great, character description , details on spot. chapters left to read but the work is great. 🎉🎉
a very nice writing and you describe the characters really well. Reading the prologue is not enough so I had to read the next chapter and not gonna lie, it shocked me and kinda didn't see that coming. Well done👍🏻
amazing this is definitely a hidden gem!! the characters are amazing and the way you describe them is cool too 10/10 definitely Writing Quality - good like i said in the top the author really knows how to put words. character design - it's good updating stability - daily World background - cool!!
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5Star because why not.. is what i would like to say but its a promising novel in making and it has quite interesting concept. Writing quality will be improving as the author is just a newb
5 since u are like a homie
good novel and now the time to fill the minimum words what should i spam or should i just keep talking like this to myself will it work ,,,,and i can post it now great but honestly the quality of the novel has been great till now, the stability of updates... can't say much and as for the romance, the mc is gonna have 2 girls or more but 2 girls is pretty much confirmed. There are gonna be greek gods in this and they are pretty much gonna be destroyed bcz he, the author hates them. Sadly you can't edit the reviews on webnovel otherwise I would have added some more stuff to this review, right now, i am not cuz i am not in the mood to. Well, bye and do give the novel a try
Finally time to give my first shameless review. You readers might have already noticed this but in case you didn't, I'll just let you know that I have no experience of writing online. I used to write dramas for my school but they too were in a language that was very different from English. But I am trying to improve my writing as much as possible. That's all I had to say in my defence. Now when it comes to the story, you'll find several cases in the start where things just happen suddenly without much information and it might get confusing for a while but trust me when I say that by chapter 100 you'll get to know the reason why all of the things are so rapid for the MC and no it was not a mistake. I wanted the MC to fix this problem and I wanted him to be a confused mess. The story will take unexpected routes but when everything comes together it will be a spectacle to witness. I won't ask you to be patient and wait for some hopeful rain shower. So if you find it not worthy of your time you can leave any moment you want. Because at the end of the day it will be my fault that I couldn't entertain you. Thanks for reading this<3
My personal opinion about your novel is that I really like it because the novel tells about the characters of gods, wizards, dragons, vampires, wolves, what's more, I like the Greek god the most, and this novel has a mystery and a plot that is not clichéd and boring, the point is this my favorite novel I love your novels, hope you keep releasing chapters and don't stop them, and good luck to you writers. greetings from me Indonesia :)
Nice, the word flow could be a little better but its not bad. I like the idea of the egoistical character being thrown down some steps or thats what I predict. Im assuming he’ll turn intl a dragon and have ti solve some trouble?
Just read it with the flow , that's all I would say. story is great, character description , details on spot. chapters left to read but the work is great. 🎉🎉
a very nice writing and you describe the characters really well. Reading the prologue is not enough so I had to read the next chapter and not gonna lie, it shocked me and kinda didn't see that coming. Well done👍🏻
amazing this is definitely a hidden gem!! the characters are amazing and the way you describe them is cool too 10/10 definitely Writing Quality - good like i said in the top the author really knows how to put words. character design - it's good updating stability - daily World background - cool!!
amazing😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
5Star because why not.. is what i would like to say but its a promising novel in making and it has quite interesting concept. Writing quality will be improving as the author is just a newb
5 since u are like a homie
good novel and now the time to fill the minimum words what should i spam or should i just keep talking like this to myself will it work ,,,,and i can post it now great but honestly the quality of the novel has been great till now, the stability of updates... can't say much and as for the romance, the mc is gonna have 2 girls or more but 2 girls is pretty much confirmed. There are gonna be greek gods in this and they are pretty much gonna be destroyed bcz he, the author hates them. Sadly you can't edit the reviews on webnovel otherwise I would have added some more stuff to this review, right now, i am not cuz i am not in the mood to. Well, bye and do give the novel a try
Finally time to give my first shameless review. You readers might have already noticed this but in case you didn't, I'll just let you know that I have no experience of writing online. I used to write dramas for my school but they too were in a language that was very different from English. But I am trying to improve my writing as much as possible. That's all I had to say in my defence. Now when it comes to the story, you'll find several cases in the start where things just happen suddenly without much information and it might get confusing for a while but trust me when I say that by chapter 100 you'll get to know the reason why all of the things are so rapid for the MC and no it was not a mistake. I wanted the MC to fix this problem and I wanted him to be a confused mess. The story will take unexpected routes but when everything comes together it will be a spectacle to witness. I won't ask you to be patient and wait for some hopeful rain shower. So if you find it not worthy of your time you can leave any moment you want. Because at the end of the day it will be my fault that I couldn't entertain you. Thanks for reading this<3