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La novela es buena. Esperando capitulo. agregue la etiqueta Harem también. Creo que esta es una novela de harén. Esperando más capítulos. más capítulo. Harén Harén
Novel is good. Waiting for chapter. add Harem tag also. I think this is harem novel. Waiting for more chapters. more chapter. Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem
Although I know it will be haram some part of me wanted to only be one girl and that be ophis. 😃🤨👍🏾😃🤯😚😔🙂👋🏿😃👋🏿😼🙃🤨🙃🤨😼🙃😔😚🤣😔😄👀😁🍭😄😑😂🤨😈🙂😄😑😃😇😉👐🤮👹👐🤮😽😵😽😵😼🦵🏼🦵🏼🗣👨🏼🦰
Espero que haga su propia facción de solo humanos y no sea perro de ningún otro ser. Aunque lo dudo mucho. Así que vamos a esperar a ver qué hace este autor
Alright infinity God here, the reason I didn't put a full have stars, is-...... Writing quality>I'm trying to write chapters as fast as possible so I can stack them, so I'll make mistakes in Grammer. Story development> I guess it is developing quite nicely in my opinion. Character>Only Characters that belongs to me is the previous world Characters and the God in the universal control center. Updating stability>One can never truly promise this, if one does they are lying. World background>Unfortunately the world background is not mine, as I said before only previous world Characters and main character are mine.
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La novela es buena. Esperando capitulo. agregue la etiqueta Harem también. Creo que esta es una novela de harén. Esperando más capítulos. más capítulo. Harén Harén
Novel is good. Waiting for chapter. add Harem tag also. I think this is harem novel. Waiting for more chapters. more chapter. Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem
Although I know it will be haram some part of me wanted to only be one girl and that be ophis. 😃🤨👍🏾😃🤯😚😔🙂👋🏿😃👋🏿😼🙃🤨🙃🤨😼🙃😔😚🤣😔😄👀😁🍭😄😑😂🤨😈🙂😄😑😃😇😉👐🤮👹👐🤮😽😵😽😵😼🦵🏼🦵🏼🗣👨🏼🦰
Espero que haga su propia facción de solo humanos y no sea perro de ningún otro ser. Aunque lo dudo mucho. Así que vamos a esperar a ver qué hace este autor
Alright infinity God here, the reason I didn't put a full have stars, is-...... Writing quality>I'm trying to write chapters as fast as possible so I can stack them, so I'll make mistakes in Grammer. Story development> I guess it is developing quite nicely in my opinion. Character>Only Characters that belongs to me is the previous world Characters and the God in the universal control center. Updating stability>One can never truly promise this, if one does they are lying. World background>Unfortunately the world background is not mine, as I said before only previous world Characters and main character are mine.
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