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Just wanna come back and state that the true plot begins on chapter 45. The 44 chapters were just a introduction and a funny way to start off my novel and have you guys meet some main characters. There will be more important characters later on so please stay up to date with the chapters. Thank you so much for coming this far with me, I have had a blast writing this book so far and I don’t intend to stop anytime soon!
How come u stopped writing!!??? I really liked this book and wanted to see it through to the end!! I wanted to see it go so for a long time!! It has so much potential and I hope u come back and start writing again!!
I have always liked this book and was always looking forward to seeing more of it but u just stopped writing and it was a let down!!! I was looking forward to seeing how everything played out but I guess I wont be able to see it!! if u were just going to stop then y start writing the book in the first place!!!???
Y DID U STOP WRITING?? I LOVE THIS BOOK AND NOW THERES NOTHING MORE TO READ!! Y IS IT THAT ALL OF THE BOOKS THAT CAME OUT AT THE SAME TIME R JUST CUTTING OFF THE BOOK AND JUST ENDING IT!! I HATE IT SO MUCH!!! IF UR NOT GOING TO FINISH THE BOOK THEN TAKE IT DOWN BECAUSE ITS JUST A HUGE DISAPPOINTMENT!!
there are some mistakes here and there but it's honestly refreshing to see a newer idea like this one. I've always wanted to write my own but time doesn't allow but anyways looks great.
Its really good so far and I been waiting for ever for u to come back and keep writing this book but havent come back yet!!
WHY DID U STOP WRITING?? U HAVENT WRITEN FOR AWHILE AND IT SUCKS THAT U ABANDONED THE BOOK!!
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I REALLY LIKE THIS BOOK ITS REALLY GOOD!! Y DID U STOP WRITING?? AND R U GOING TO COME BACK??
So dose Aruis eventually get back to his wives or what casue they must be freaking out like CRAZY!!!! I'm in the book were he is separated from them and has to wait for help. Message for the AUTHOR
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this is really good.. though author-kun may have problems writing in English like me this story is worth your time.. so c'mon read this guys[img=recommend]
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so I see myself as the guy that will just stand there and cheer them up to fight
I scored most 3stars other then character development. I can’t get over the fact that a 6 year old is out fighting a wolf with a carving knife. No one seemed to care, I mean sure this is a different culture. Things might pick up later but between this and the rate of release it’s just not worth my time.
It's great if you don't take it too seriously. Also it's kind of hard to read, especially near the start, with there being a serious lack of punctuation but it kind of adds to the comedy for me as it stops me from taking it seriously right from the beginning.
That ch41 reference of demon child mask reminded me of 'Licht Bach' from "Plunderer". The comedic element in the story is nice.It will be fun to see when he will rise to the rank of god.
Membuka SPOILER
story is well written MC is op , has a harem of different personalities which blend together very well, MC smart , the world building is unique and enormous , has enough romance . My biggest problem where the updates why are we getting so many less chapters only 2 chapters per week please it's very low increase it
too many plot hole and writing qulity is just normal but i really a funny and i really love this novel %^^///////////-----//////////
so ur not going to keep up with it anymore? I loved it. if ur not going to keep up with it or just end it like this why even start it? you get people to read it and like it or even fall in love with it but then u just stop... I really don't want it to stop I wan to keep going and have a proper end and no just cut off or stop
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!
First and foremost I love the world building in this story and the character motivations are amazing. What stopped me after 28 chapters was the writing. I couldn’t see myself spending coins to continue the story.
I can't wait for upcoming chapters 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉
even though I missed some jokes because of the Google translator (since I only speak Portuguese), I really enjoyed the 24 chapters I read, too bad I won't be able to read the rest for now because the dollar is very expensive 😭😭😭
well....it is good but suddenly he gone premium. so sadly im gonna dropping this........................ .............. ...................
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omg this is one of the best yandere novels I've read xD, good job to the autor, I can wait to see more of this crazy adventures
I like it a lot im just annoyed that he didnt get the other option has well when he first leveled up he didnt get it at all from what ive seen other than that its goofy and i like it
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First I would like to say thank you for stopping by and trying my novel it means a lot to me who has loved light novels for years and wanted to try and make one myself. Second This is my first original novel so please tell me if I made any mistakes or how I can improve as a author and make this story better for you guys! Thank you.
Just wanna come back and state that the true plot begins on chapter 45. The 44 chapters were just a introduction and a funny way to start off my novel and have you guys meet some main characters. There will be more important characters later on so please stay up to date with the chapters. Thank you so much for coming this far with me, I have had a blast writing this book so far and I don’t intend to stop anytime soon!
How come u stopped writing!!??? I really liked this book and wanted to see it through to the end!! I wanted to see it go so for a long time!! It has so much potential and I hope u come back and start writing again!!
I have always liked this book and was always looking forward to seeing more of it but u just stopped writing and it was a let down!!! I was looking forward to seeing how everything played out but I guess I wont be able to see it!! if u were just going to stop then y start writing the book in the first place!!!???
Y DID U STOP WRITING?? I LOVE THIS BOOK AND NOW THERES NOTHING MORE TO READ!! Y IS IT THAT ALL OF THE BOOKS THAT CAME OUT AT THE SAME TIME R JUST CUTTING OFF THE BOOK AND JUST ENDING IT!! I HATE IT SO MUCH!!! IF UR NOT GOING TO FINISH THE BOOK THEN TAKE IT DOWN BECAUSE ITS JUST A HUGE DISAPPOINTMENT!!
there are some mistakes here and there but it's honestly refreshing to see a newer idea like this one. I've always wanted to write my own but time doesn't allow but anyways looks great.
Its really good so far and I been waiting for ever for u to come back and keep writing this book but havent come back yet!!
WHY DID U STOP WRITING?? U HAVENT WRITEN FOR AWHILE AND IT SUCKS THAT U ABANDONED THE BOOK!!
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I REALLY LIKE THIS BOOK ITS REALLY GOOD!! Y DID U STOP WRITING?? AND R U GOING TO COME BACK??
So dose Aruis eventually get back to his wives or what casue they must be freaking out like CRAZY!!!! I'm in the book were he is separated from them and has to wait for help. Message for the AUTHOR
Membuka SPOILER this is really good.. though author-kun may have problems writing in English like me this story is worth your time.. so c'mon read this guys[img=recommend]
Está novela es muy buena y ahora una nueva está saliendo más capitulos autor Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmnnnnnnnnnnnnnnmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmnnnnnnnnnnnnnnmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmnnnnnnnnnnnnnnmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmnnnnnnnnnnnnnnmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmnnnnnnnnnnnnnnmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmnnnnnnnnnnnnnnmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmnnnnnnnnnnnnnnmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmnnnnnnnnnnnnnnmmmmm
so I see myself as the guy that will just stand there and cheer them up to fight
I scored most 3stars other then character development. I can’t get over the fact that a 6 year old is out fighting a wolf with a carving knife. No one seemed to care, I mean sure this is a different culture. Things might pick up later but between this and the rate of release it’s just not worth my time.
It's great if you don't take it too seriously. Also it's kind of hard to read, especially near the start, with there being a serious lack of punctuation but it kind of adds to the comedy for me as it stops me from taking it seriously right from the beginning.
That ch41 reference of demon child mask reminded me of 'Licht Bach' from "Plunderer". The comedic element in the story is nice.It will be fun to see when he will rise to the rank of god.
Membuka SPOILER story is well written MC is op , has a harem of different personalities which blend together very well, MC smart , the world building is unique and enormous , has enough romance . My biggest problem where the updates why are we getting so many less chapters only 2 chapters per week please it's very low increase it
too many plot hole and writing qulity is just normal but i really a funny and i really love this novel %^^///////////-----//////////
so ur not going to keep up with it anymore? I loved it. if ur not going to keep up with it or just end it like this why even start it? you get people to read it and like it or even fall in love with it but then u just stop... I really don't want it to stop I wan to keep going and have a proper end and no just cut off or stop
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!
First and foremost I love the world building in this story and the character motivations are amazing. What stopped me after 28 chapters was the writing. I couldn’t see myself spending coins to continue the story.
I can't wait for upcoming chapters 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉
even though I missed some jokes because of the Google translator (since I only speak Portuguese), I really enjoyed the 24 chapters I read, too bad I won't be able to read the rest for now because the dollar is very expensive 😭😭😭
well....it is good but suddenly he gone premium. so sadly im gonna dropping this........................ .............. ...................
harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem 💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙
omg this is one of the best yandere novels I've read xD, good job to the autor, I can wait to see more of this crazy adventures
I like it a lot im just annoyed that he didnt get the other option has well when he first leveled up he didnt get it at all from what ive seen other than that its goofy and i like it
Se ve bueno comensare ah verlo mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm
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First I would like to say thank you for stopping by and trying my novel it means a lot to me who has loved light novels for years and wanted to try and make one myself. Second This is my first original novel so please tell me if I made any mistakes or how I can improve as a author and make this story better for you guys! Thank you.