Harry Potter, The Martial Master

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BigStig97

Only 3 chapters so far but great quality. Interesting premise and power system. I'm definitely excited for more!! Luna for Waifu!!!!!! PLEASE!!!

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Kiloreee

Include Hermione and Luna to harem .................................................................................................................................................................

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Ptitkactus

was really good at the start with a mix of Magic/cultivation and skill tree like Skyrim, now it's about the perverted mc and his future harem... The personality of the mc took a 180° from a smart old cultivator reincarnating to a childlike young Master that want an harem... Go look elsewhere if you want plot :(

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Daoist423242

Boring, different personality but still a gryffindor....................................................................,,,,.,,,.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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BlackSwordman1234

You know, I am already liking this. Hope this Harry fixes his need to save others as while he does not seem like a villain, a cultivator should always be ready to be ruthless and fight for benefits.

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AyMystecs

The entire story just kinda blends together and instead of being a story it feels like a brief summary of things that happened off screen, overall not the worst book, but not that good either.

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ShuYme

Its not that bad, but its at best average when it comes to fanfics on this site which isnt saying much considering the quality of most of the works on webnovel. Classic gary sue mc, he is very overpowered and everything works out for him. One dimensional characters who dont really seem to have their own opinions and just kinda do whatever the mc says. Novel is a complete powertrip, which to be fair can be fun.

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CruelReality

It is quite decent however I cannot get past a few things. 1)No one really questions his op cultivaiton knowledge and where he got it. Nor how he could be so strong and knowledgeable yet somehow was abused by his fat normie relatives. 2)He wants a harem, enough said on that. 3)At this rate he will be way too op too fast removing all tension. 4)He trusts characters way too quick without knowing them. He doesn’t know about Harry Potter but he instantly trusts and reveals tons of info to main cast characters and dumbledore. Anyway, if you can completely turn your brain off like you would with typical Chinese novel bs you might enjoy this. I simply do not think I can continue due to the above four points.

LV 14

skulputulurubug

with all dumbles responsibilities, obviously he'll drop the ball on some of them, people making him out to be evil when he's trying to make sure everything is good.. the story is amazing so far, the only thing I don't like is the ron bashing, he's a kid trying to stand out from his super siblings they all have wants and goals, while he only wanted recognition, he lost his brother but never hated Harry, the only character worth hating should've been umbitc

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ActivelyLazy

why does it seem like his mentality doesn't reflect his age and experience? it's kind of annoying. ..... ..... ..... .... .... ..... .......

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lateron_21

I love this please don't drop I love this please don't drop I love this please don't drop I love this please don't drop I love this please don't drop

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bitware

Author, amazing, just amazing. Never had a Harry Potter fanfic been as interesting as yours. Fascinating premise to the story, character development, and a even more incredible world background. Looking forward for more chapters.

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Alex_Boen

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Z3RG102077

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nonexistent_re

This is truly good. Looking forward to more. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

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Vandalism

Loving the story, not very many catch my attention to the point where it feels like an addiction. Just waiting for the next fix now. Keep up the solid work.

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The_Dao

haven't read it yet but I have a feeling I won't regret giving Five Stars so DONT DROP PLEASE.... every good book I find gets dropped so please continue

LV 5

tai_master9903

more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more

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joseph_lockett

I'm really liking the story and I hope for this to cover the entire harry potter books also if you add a harem think you could add characters that is rarely used like the Patil twins or pansy Parkinson since we are friendly to Draco

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Sema_

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