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I could give a 5-star but the pacing is a bit fast. It wouldn't hurt to take time to progress the story naturally. But I get it, sometimes being a writer is dealing with excitement for the new ideas you thought of. But please, moderate it as much as you can.
Kinda crazy how every review I see rates this novel pretty highly. The world background isn’t much to look at in this novel and the pacing jumps around and is confusing. The character design isn’t much, the MC is basically a loser that doesn’t go to school so that he can game elsewhere and he gets himself into problems where it’s not his business and that he can’t back himself up. The cultivation of the novel is confusing because once again nothing is explained and somehow the MC gains a new element of magic from just repeated killing.
The idea is great, background information is lacking to say the least, chapters are chaotic and i though that chapters are missing in some places... Also i only got to chapter 40 so can you someone tell me if he ever comes back home and see his maid dead?
Not really good in my opinion. Characters are lacking. Story is weird to say the least. No background explanation at all. Writing quality was good though.
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sometimes it's hard to identify who is talking to. the story is good but you post me by killing the maid. I personally don't like tragedy driven plot, it makes me feel depressed when a character I like die.
Membuka SPOILER
Good novel good story good work and good Quality 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😁😁😁😁😁😄😄😃😄😁😁😄😃😃😄😁😁😄😄😃😃😀😀😀😀😀😀😃😃😄😁😁😄😄😃😃😀
I read my novel, I actually read my novel on the app to re-edit the published chapters, so yeah, I guess that makes me a reader. By the way, this is an entry for WPC #... I forgot. Anyway, I am glad you chose my novel for reading. PS- I have the cover posted below if anyone wants to download it.
Hooked the moment I started reading. It just seems like it has near endless potential, so we all as the readers will see where you take it.
finished chapter 20. the use of words in writing is not easy to understand. too quickly change POV, and lack of further explanation. [img=exp]
I was just randomly going through cultivation novels when my paths crossed with this master piece. Well, at least not less than a work worth recognition. Here are my thoughts about this amazing novel: 1. The world building is amazing (Although it comes late into action) 2. The fights are amazing 3. Amazing cultivation concept 4. The video game elements are mixed together with the apocalypse genre perfeclty. Good work, best of luck.
I would rate this novel a little above average. if it was not for the amazing world building and update stability, I would have rated it average.
I was looking for something like this. sorry, I am not used to writing reviews. but this novel caught my attention because come on, where do you have the fun of enjoying both advanced tech and magic beasts at the same time? absolutely amazing story line with literally no plot holes
amazing to have another novel from you. I love how the writer has mixed the world of science with magic. you do not get to see this often, do you? moreover, it has a totally different but fascinating world building. and the characters are well developed too best of luck, author
Mind blowing mix of Apocalypse, Video games, and magic academy elements. You have created a unique novel. I kind of liked the starting chapters of the novel, there are not much chapters but I hope to read more. Best of luck with the WPC contest!
"SIGH"... Another Garbage .. nothing clear . no character .. no background ... fast based ... no clear power levels ..
I could give a 5-star but the pacing is a bit fast. It wouldn't hurt to take time to progress the story naturally. But I get it, sometimes being a writer is dealing with excitement for the new ideas you thought of. But please, moderate it as much as you can.
Kinda crazy how every review I see rates this novel pretty highly. The world background isn’t much to look at in this novel and the pacing jumps around and is confusing. The character design isn’t much, the MC is basically a loser that doesn’t go to school so that he can game elsewhere and he gets himself into problems where it’s not his business and that he can’t back himself up. The cultivation of the novel is confusing because once again nothing is explained and somehow the MC gains a new element of magic from just repeated killing.
The idea is great, background information is lacking to say the least, chapters are chaotic and i though that chapters are missing in some places... Also i only got to chapter 40 so can you someone tell me if he ever comes back home and see his maid dead?
Not really good in my opinion. Characters are lacking. Story is weird to say the least. No background explanation at all. Writing quality was good though.
finally. something that doesn't have romance. might change this if he a simp tho filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler
sometimes it's hard to identify who is talking to. the story is good but you post me by killing the maid. I personally don't like tragedy driven plot, it makes me feel depressed when a character I like die.
Membuka SPOILER Good novel good story good work and good Quality 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😁😁😁😁😁😄😄😃😄😁😁😄😃😃😄😁😁😄😄😃😃😀😀😀😀😀😀😃😃😄😁😁😄😄😃😃😀
I read my novel, I actually read my novel on the app to re-edit the published chapters, so yeah, I guess that makes me a reader. By the way, this is an entry for WPC #... I forgot. Anyway, I am glad you chose my novel for reading. PS- I have the cover posted below if anyone wants to download it.
Hooked the moment I started reading. It just seems like it has near endless potential, so we all as the readers will see where you take it.
finished chapter 20. the use of words in writing is not easy to understand. too quickly change POV, and lack of further explanation. [img=exp]
I was just randomly going through cultivation novels when my paths crossed with this master piece. Well, at least not less than a work worth recognition. Here are my thoughts about this amazing novel: 1. The world building is amazing (Although it comes late into action) 2. The fights are amazing 3. Amazing cultivation concept 4. The video game elements are mixed together with the apocalypse genre perfeclty. Good work, best of luck.
I would rate this novel a little above average. if it was not for the amazing world building and update stability, I would have rated it average.
I was looking for something like this. sorry, I am not used to writing reviews. but this novel caught my attention because come on, where do you have the fun of enjoying both advanced tech and magic beasts at the same time? absolutely amazing story line with literally no plot holes
amazing to have another novel from you. I love how the writer has mixed the world of science with magic. you do not get to see this often, do you? moreover, it has a totally different but fascinating world building. and the characters are well developed too best of luck, author
Mind blowing mix of Apocalypse, Video games, and magic academy elements. You have created a unique novel. I kind of liked the starting chapters of the novel, there are not much chapters but I hope to read more. Best of luck with the WPC contest!
"SIGH"... Another Garbage .. nothing clear . no character .. no background ... fast based ... no clear power levels ..