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Interesting story. Great start, great writing quality (definitely not translated). Lost interest and Dropped at around chapter 140-ish. At age 13, he already can beat Salem or at least fight at equal strength, and he still want to attend Beacon... That's not the main problem for me. It's the fact he used wish-knowledge artifact that can stop-time and training in there without any problem. He's still 13-14, and already can defeat final boss. Maybe he's gonna use that artifact again next time and instantly got the power to beat the Light/Dark Gods.
it's great just started reading it recently and Binge read the 270 current chapters in a week or two
Honestly, story is really good and i liked everything about it. The only reason i have to dislike it, and the reason i stopped reading it, is due to the classic harem of just picking up practically every girl he meets. Maybe the author would beg to differ, but its true, sadly. All the getting to know them and developing feelings, while seemingly genuine, is only an illusion, since he ends up with pretty much every girl he meets. I do not have any problem with the harem genre, but too many women really takes the romance out of it.
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it's really a great read and I am really enjoying every moment of it. I hope you keep up your good work and maybe go to other worlds.Many thanks for you hard work!
I would like to read the dc crisis arc because to me it sounds much more interesting to read then the other arcs. But is up to you so I’ll be waiting for more.
This was fantastic until the world changed. Then I still stuck it out until his stupid solution for getting back home. Solid 8/10 for the first part, but dropped when it got too dumb. There were way better ways to world jump
I can’t tolerate the stupid paws, If you wanted the Mc to have claws Tucson (the dude emerald and mercury killed) from season 2 or 3 literally grows claws without the stupid looking paws.
Great fic, loved the rwby part but this fate part is just a bunch of nonsense full of plot holes, who was the random isekai character and how did he show up in remnant (not to mention the nonsense of a system power to transport a person to whole another universe), why include fate storyline without finishing rwby storyline? I am just waiting for this fate part to end and him to go back to remnant now.
The book is good but I lost interest when the other reincarnator came in and when he went to fate. If I remember correctly there were small fate elements in the previous version of the book and that was fine replacing Jaune with Jeanne but, it is still a good book just not my cup of tea 8/10 would recommend.
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As someone else said the story is good not great. BUT, compared to all the other rwby stories out there, to me though, it's great. it doesn't do anything spectacular nor does it amazes me with this World building obviously because this is a fun fiction, so the world is already established, but just the standard that this author has in his grammar and diction makes up for the low amount of creativity. I'm not saying it has no plot, I'm not saying it has no storyline and I'm not saying that it was done poorly; they were all exceptionally done. if you're looking for something extremely creative and mind blowing, maybe this is not for you but if you're looking for a story that's in a remnants, with a likable main character, harem and a solid store you can count on, then please give this one is due diligence and read his fanfiction. P.S. the passing is on the slower side be prepared and get comfy but the author uses this time well and creates solid characters. P.P.S. author please update more often, please, I like this story, it never disappoints or at least not to the point I have given up on it's
This story was good than you had to put another reincarnator that died just because you wanted to teleport the Mc in the fate series
ok so here we go. I enjoyed the novel for the most part however I feel like it's lacking mc struggle after a certin point after the mc is stronger and outplays the villain the novel lacks anything that could threaten him. I'm fine for the most part with that it just makes the story kind of drab in my opinion however I'm on chapter 145 and the author kind of "jumped the shark" when he added flying saucers and space travel (although only in orbit so far). I think if the author had made the mc struggle more to obtain his power and got it by his own hand then it would be a better story overall.
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Can you post this on scribblehub, now computer users can't read any fanfiction on webnovel it seems.........................................
I'm really enjoying this, the mc isn't a doormat but he is not a psycho. The story also isn't just a rehash of canon, quite a lot is changed and there is lots of chapters.
This novel is definitely one of the better ones. I enjoy our mc’s changes to the plot, and the story is very enticing to read. The characters in the story also stay fairly true to their original counterparts, save for the changes they receive due to the interventions by our mc, but I will say that sometimes characters do not act how they normally would in specific circumstances. For example, the forced romantic relationships of 30-40 year old adults and a supposed 13-14 year old kid (even though said “kid” is 6’8”, battle-scarred and has the mental age of a century-old man). But I can ignore that as it’s not that important and more self-fantasy than anything. Plot progression is good, smooth, and interesting. Character development, aside from romantic relationships (a few are done well), are also good and can be easily imagined coming from the characters. Subplots are easy to follow, and are solved one at a time to allow for readers to process things better. The world seems to be branching slowly but surely from canon, though it’s not a jarring change as many other novels get subjected to. Overall, very good read and continuing to look forward to more.
This is absolutely good. MC isn't strong from the start but geting stronger and stronger. He didn't jump at every female but slowly interacting with them. all is good for me
The MC is a cringe BLM activist/terrorist constantly crying over people being rude to him. Beta male energy. ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... .....
honestly the book is good not great just good there's a few points to be made while reading this for one the plot is to slow it only move forward every ten chapters even then it still feels like the mc hasn't really did anything. second Im not a fan of yuri stuff the mc barely started his harem and and his first girl is already going to someone else for relief after just having done the deed that that's basically cheating and I refuse to be told differently and if it's going to be the same for every other girl that joins the harem then what's the point of reading this but I digress back on topic if the story can speed up alot more I don't need to know what they do day by day hour by hour minute by minute it becomes tedious to read welp there my point
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Good characterizations, good plot. The comedy is excellent. Things take time to happen this is the best, nothing is worse than those stories in which the protagonist becomes the most powerful in five chapters.
since i trully loved your other ff of rwby that you plan to drop. i will read this. i really liked you made blake an M lol. to bad i couldnt read the chapter where he uses clones to have S with her as she wanted. (the magic clones being NTR is a thing i cannot understand lol)
This seems a lot better than the first one. You ruined that one with the amount of girls you introduced with no good reason.
É uma boa fanfic de RWBY e bastante consistente na sua historia, o autor não é muito bom em drama e as vezes faz as cenas parecerem mais uma novela mexicana ou um dialogo de bom humor com um toque de seriedade, claro essas cenas são poucas e as vezes ele acerta porem no geral é uma fanfic bem consistente, dou meus parabéns ao autor e espero que ele melhore sua escrita com minha critica.
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Como me gustó el. Inicio, pero el prota es otro prota/autor xianxia qué mata o daña a otros solo porque le conviene o tiene el temperamento del imbécil típico de los adolescentes piojos, lo doy 3 estrellas, por ser una buena historia y escritura pero un protagonista/autor self insert desagradable ODIO cuando los protagonistas se hacen pasar por sabios o superiores morales solo porque conocen el futuro, Cuando todo sale a pedir de boca, simplemente es demasiado estúpido y la historia se vuelve unilateral y aburrida El prota olvida que Salem tiene magia Es difícil encontrar un autor que no tenga una forma de pensamiento desagradable que lo plasme e n su self insert Es simple, si no puedes soportar que la forma de pensar que utilizas se aplique hacia tus acciones y decisiones entonces eres un hipócrita de mierda que merece el peor de los sufrimientos e indigno de la vida
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Interesting story. Great start, great writing quality (definitely not translated). Lost interest and Dropped at around chapter 140-ish. At age 13, he already can beat Salem or at least fight at equal strength, and he still want to attend Beacon... That's not the main problem for me. It's the fact he used wish-knowledge artifact that can stop-time and training in there without any problem. He's still 13-14, and already can defeat final boss. Maybe he's gonna use that artifact again next time and instantly got the power to beat the Light/Dark Gods.
it's great just started reading it recently and Binge read the 270 current chapters in a week or two
Honestly, story is really good and i liked everything about it. The only reason i have to dislike it, and the reason i stopped reading it, is due to the classic harem of just picking up practically every girl he meets. Maybe the author would beg to differ, but its true, sadly. All the getting to know them and developing feelings, while seemingly genuine, is only an illusion, since he ends up with pretty much every girl he meets. I do not have any problem with the harem genre, but too many women really takes the romance out of it.
Membuka SPOILER it's really a great read and I am really enjoying every moment of it. I hope you keep up your good work and maybe go to other worlds.Many thanks for you hard work!
I would like to read the dc crisis arc because to me it sounds much more interesting to read then the other arcs. But is up to you so I’ll be waiting for more.
This was fantastic until the world changed. Then I still stuck it out until his stupid solution for getting back home. Solid 8/10 for the first part, but dropped when it got too dumb. There were way better ways to world jump
I can’t tolerate the stupid paws, If you wanted the Mc to have claws Tucson (the dude emerald and mercury killed) from season 2 or 3 literally grows claws without the stupid looking paws.
Great fic, loved the rwby part but this fate part is just a bunch of nonsense full of plot holes, who was the random isekai character and how did he show up in remnant (not to mention the nonsense of a system power to transport a person to whole another universe), why include fate storyline without finishing rwby storyline? I am just waiting for this fate part to end and him to go back to remnant now.
The book is good but I lost interest when the other reincarnator came in and when he went to fate. If I remember correctly there were small fate elements in the previous version of the book and that was fine replacing Jaune with Jeanne but, it is still a good book just not my cup of tea 8/10 would recommend.
Membuka SPOILER As someone else said the story is good not great. BUT, compared to all the other rwby stories out there, to me though, it's great. it doesn't do anything spectacular nor does it amazes me with this World building obviously because this is a fun fiction, so the world is already established, but just the standard that this author has in his grammar and diction makes up for the low amount of creativity. I'm not saying it has no plot, I'm not saying it has no storyline and I'm not saying that it was done poorly; they were all exceptionally done. if you're looking for something extremely creative and mind blowing, maybe this is not for you but if you're looking for a story that's in a remnants, with a likable main character, harem and a solid store you can count on, then please give this one is due diligence and read his fanfiction. P.S. the passing is on the slower side be prepared and get comfy but the author uses this time well and creates solid characters. P.P.S. author please update more often, please, I like this story, it never disappoints or at least not to the point I have given up on it's
This story was good than you had to put another reincarnator that died just because you wanted to teleport the Mc in the fate series
ok so here we go. I enjoyed the novel for the most part however I feel like it's lacking mc struggle after a certin point after the mc is stronger and outplays the villain the novel lacks anything that could threaten him. I'm fine for the most part with that it just makes the story kind of drab in my opinion however I'm on chapter 145 and the author kind of "jumped the shark" when he added flying saucers and space travel (although only in orbit so far). I think if the author had made the mc struggle more to obtain his power and got it by his own hand then it would be a better story overall.
Membuka SPOILER Can you post this on scribblehub, now computer users can't read any fanfiction on webnovel it seems.........................................
I'm really enjoying this, the mc isn't a doormat but he is not a psycho. The story also isn't just a rehash of canon, quite a lot is changed and there is lots of chapters.
This novel is definitely one of the better ones. I enjoy our mc’s changes to the plot, and the story is very enticing to read. The characters in the story also stay fairly true to their original counterparts, save for the changes they receive due to the interventions by our mc, but I will say that sometimes characters do not act how they normally would in specific circumstances. For example, the forced romantic relationships of 30-40 year old adults and a supposed 13-14 year old kid (even though said “kid” is 6’8”, battle-scarred and has the mental age of a century-old man). But I can ignore that as it’s not that important and more self-fantasy than anything. Plot progression is good, smooth, and interesting. Character development, aside from romantic relationships (a few are done well), are also good and can be easily imagined coming from the characters. Subplots are easy to follow, and are solved one at a time to allow for readers to process things better. The world seems to be branching slowly but surely from canon, though it’s not a jarring change as many other novels get subjected to. Overall, very good read and continuing to look forward to more.
This is absolutely good. MC isn't strong from the start but geting stronger and stronger. He didn't jump at every female but slowly interacting with them. all is good for me
The MC is a cringe BLM activist/terrorist constantly crying over people being rude to him. Beta male energy. ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... .....
honestly the book is good not great just good there's a few points to be made while reading this for one the plot is to slow it only move forward every ten chapters even then it still feels like the mc hasn't really did anything. second Im not a fan of yuri stuff the mc barely started his harem and and his first girl is already going to someone else for relief after just having done the deed that that's basically cheating and I refuse to be told differently and if it's going to be the same for every other girl that joins the harem then what's the point of reading this but I digress back on topic if the story can speed up alot more I don't need to know what they do day by day hour by hour minute by minute it becomes tedious to read welp there my point
Membuka SPOILER Good characterizations, good plot. The comedy is excellent. Things take time to happen this is the best, nothing is worse than those stories in which the protagonist becomes the most powerful in five chapters.
since i trully loved your other ff of rwby that you plan to drop. i will read this. i really liked you made blake an M lol. to bad i couldnt read the chapter where he uses clones to have S with her as she wanted. (the magic clones being NTR is a thing i cannot understand lol)
This seems a lot better than the first one. You ruined that one with the amount of girls you introduced with no good reason.
É uma boa fanfic de RWBY e bastante consistente na sua historia, o autor não é muito bom em drama e as vezes faz as cenas parecerem mais uma novela mexicana ou um dialogo de bom humor com um toque de seriedade, claro essas cenas são poucas e as vezes ele acerta porem no geral é uma fanfic bem consistente, dou meus parabéns ao autor e espero que ele melhore sua escrita com minha critica.
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Como me gustó el. Inicio, pero el prota es otro prota/autor xianxia qué mata o daña a otros solo porque le conviene o tiene el temperamento del imbécil típico de los adolescentes piojos, lo doy 3 estrellas, por ser una buena historia y escritura pero un protagonista/autor self insert desagradable ODIO cuando los protagonistas se hacen pasar por sabios o superiores morales solo porque conocen el futuro, Cuando todo sale a pedir de boca, simplemente es demasiado estúpido y la historia se vuelve unilateral y aburrida El prota olvida que Salem tiene magia Es difícil encontrar un autor que no tenga una forma de pensamiento desagradable que lo plasme e n su self insert Es simple, si no puedes soportar que la forma de pensar que utilizas se aplique hacia tus acciones y decisiones entonces eres un hipócrita de mierda que merece el peor de los sufrimientos e indigno de la vida