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Author, thanks for writing your ideas! I loved your book! The protagonist is beautiful and that already makes the reading more pleasant than it already is, the world seems very good and fun, and him being a little dominated is something I liked, because if the protagonist is weak or something and people defend, it gets a little frustrating, and he's not lazy, something very cool, and his powers and the type of system I liked a lot too, and him being smart is another positive point, because the dumb protagonist spoils the reading, I'll give it a go example: "The protagonist doesn't understand something so simple that you get angry" and your protagonist is perfect in my opinion, well the post time is great for normal people, but for a reading addict like me it makes me anxious to wait for your chapters and how good your book is it only makes the situation worse haha, and i loved how the story unfolded so far and the writing is ok too.
From what I've seen till now, is absolutely amazing. The story itself is good, the characters are good, writing style is amazing (although some tiny mistakes), Highly recommend this novel, keep up the good work!
Ohh author san has another book. I love that other apocalypse genre novel already and this more, I might worship you. Joke i am just exaggerating cause this the tenth novel I've read and the first one is author san other novel. Love your woke but a bit overly detailed that it encompassed an entire chapter completely.
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I love the plot 😁 the author is somewhat new to this but her work is good and nice to read 😉 that detailed explanation and mind game's is amazing 🤩
I like it maybe this is why we read, and why in moments of darkness we return and enjoy the books: to find words for what we already know but new.
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I like this type of novels where reality and virtual world become one, then a devastating apocalypse would descend creating more and more chaos in the already chaotic theme.
I like how the character is made of, a cunning brilliant person who'd do everything to achieve his goal, an either righteous nor evil protagonist.
I kinda like this kind of novel. I just hope when he start playing that game it won't be a levelling system because for one with that massive time dilation if he just log out for 3 hours there's going to be a big difference on level where before 3 hours he is the strongest at the current level but 3 hours later he became the weakest. Question 1)is his brain gonna get side effect the longer he plays the game? 2)what kind of weapon is he gonna use? 3)is there gonna be some kind of job and bloodline for customized?or is it just random?(for bloodline) 4)is he gonna let his sister play the game? 5)how much time will he need before the apocalypse? 6)when is the release of the virtual game? 7)is his real life body strength will affect the game? I hope this novel dont drop
Please choose my work I might be new to this stuff, but I wanted to learn and share my fictional thoughts. I am proud to this work of mine even there were some mistakes there in there, so please be so kind to try to read my work 😊
Author, thanks for writing your ideas! I loved your book! The protagonist is beautiful and that already makes the reading more pleasant than it already is, the world seems very good and fun, and him being a little dominated is something I liked, because if the protagonist is weak or something and people defend, it gets a little frustrating, and he's not lazy, something very cool, and his powers and the type of system I liked a lot too, and him being smart is another positive point, because the dumb protagonist spoils the reading, I'll give it a go example: "The protagonist doesn't understand something so simple that you get angry" and your protagonist is perfect in my opinion, well the post time is great for normal people, but for a reading addict like me it makes me anxious to wait for your chapters and how good your book is it only makes the situation worse haha, and i loved how the story unfolded so far and the writing is ok too.
From what I've seen till now, is absolutely amazing. The story itself is good, the characters are good, writing style is amazing (although some tiny mistakes), Highly recommend this novel, keep up the good work!
Ohh author san has another book. I love that other apocalypse genre novel already and this more, I might worship you. Joke i am just exaggerating cause this the tenth novel I've read and the first one is author san other novel. Love your woke but a bit overly detailed that it encompassed an entire chapter completely.
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[img=update][img=faceslap][img=update][img=faceslap][img=update][img=faceslap][img=update][img=faceslap][img=update][img=faceslap][img=update][img=faceslap] NICE I NEED MORE OF THAT DECEPTION MIND GAMES.
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Nice nice a smart scheming merciless sly demon act protagonist that possessed advance overpowering future knowledge in his arsenal. [img=update][img=update][img=update]
I love the plot 😁 the author is somewhat new to this but her work is good and nice to read 😉 that detailed explanation and mind game's is amazing 🤩
I like it maybe this is why we read, and why in moments of darkness we return and enjoy the books: to find words for what we already know but new.
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I like this type of novels where reality and virtual world become one, then a devastating apocalypse would descend creating more and more chaos in the already chaotic theme.
I like how the character is made of, a cunning brilliant person who'd do everything to achieve his goal, an either righteous nor evil protagonist.
I kinda like this kind of novel. I just hope when he start playing that game it won't be a levelling system because for one with that massive time dilation if he just log out for 3 hours there's going to be a big difference on level where before 3 hours he is the strongest at the current level but 3 hours later he became the weakest. Question 1)is his brain gonna get side effect the longer he plays the game? 2)what kind of weapon is he gonna use? 3)is there gonna be some kind of job and bloodline for customized?or is it just random?(for bloodline) 4)is he gonna let his sister play the game? 5)how much time will he need before the apocalypse? 6)when is the release of the virtual game? 7)is his real life body strength will affect the game? I hope this novel dont drop
Please choose my work I might be new to this stuff, but I wanted to learn and share my fictional thoughts. I am proud to this work of mine even there were some mistakes there in there, so please be so kind to try to read my work 😊
Waiting................ I will wait even when I'm ascended..............