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The synopsis looks promising ....will wait for Trial Reading and later to be picked up by Webnovel for further translation/regular updates [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I am sorry but I wouldn't recommend it..... too many mistakes. .. The FL name is Charlotte Cooper but her "nickname " is Genna Winslet which makes no sense whatsoever.... I couldn't connect with the story... one of the reasons was overusing the characters full name in almost every sentence it was very cringe especially with english names. I am pretty sure you don't adres you husband/friend by his full name... I don't know the author, maybe is a novice. I will make a small suggestion for future stories to stop overusing full names when it not needed and use pronouns instead. It cuts the flow of the story... Overall the story wasn't bad, it had some interesting points...
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The synopsis looks promising ....will wait for Trial Reading and later to be picked up by Webnovel for further translation/regular updates [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I am sorry but I wouldn't recommend it..... too many mistakes. .. The FL name is Charlotte Cooper but her "nickname " is Genna Winslet which makes no sense whatsoever.... I couldn't connect with the story... one of the reasons was overusing the characters full name in almost every sentence it was very cringe especially with english names. I am pretty sure you don't adres you husband/friend by his full name... I don't know the author, maybe is a novice. I will make a small suggestion for future stories to stop overusing full names when it not needed and use pronouns instead. It cuts the flow of the story... Overall the story wasn't bad, it had some interesting points...