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Mc. entered the world with portal so is it gonna be multiverse or just TF. By the way opening was pretty ineresting there is so much thing that mc can learn and obtain from transformers universe but main topic of transformers story which is war between decepticon and autobot is not a thing human should interfere so i think if you make mv. is better to not spent to much time in there.
im sorry, i dont want to give you 2 stars but, if you just add more effort in giving TAGS on description/synopsis, i would not going to write this review.. this is Female Lead as protagonist. that alone is not wrong, but you confuse your first readers candidates. as not all readers like FL as Protag. sooo, at least give warning on synopsis. what use of tag if you just put #Transformer. why not add, #FemaleLead or something. if not available there, then write at descriptions or Synopsis, OR use Aux chapters. thank you. just opinions
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Mc. entered the world with portal so is it gonna be multiverse or just TF. By the way opening was pretty ineresting there is so much thing that mc can learn and obtain from transformers universe but main topic of transformers story which is war between decepticon and autobot is not a thing human should interfere so i think if you make mv. is better to not spent to much time in there.
im sorry, i dont want to give you 2 stars but, if you just add more effort in giving TAGS on description/synopsis, i would not going to write this review.. this is Female Lead as protagonist. that alone is not wrong, but you confuse your first readers candidates. as not all readers like FL as Protag. sooo, at least give warning on synopsis. what use of tag if you just put #Transformer. why not add, #FemaleLead or something. if not available there, then write at descriptions or Synopsis, OR use Aux chapters. thank you. just opinions