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Absolutely love the story...please update soon..............................................................................................
Finally found a great story but it updates so slow! Absolutely love the story so far! Keep it up, Author! ~Filling up space!~ ~Filling up space!~ ~Filling up space!~
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this is really good so far keep up the good work. to anyone reading this comment I suggest you check out this book. the very very beginning was kinda bad but after a few paragraphs it got really good. author I hope you don't ditch this book as it's really good and I can tell you have talent. have a good day or good night depending on when your reading this.
Hey Author , are you going to update it ??? Its been like 9 months ..... Its really good 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 But U don't Update
Woah! I thought I was reading a professional story for a moment there! Really glad I decided to read this despite there only being 3 chapters, the length of the chapters alone makes up for that. Also, thank you for deciding to make long chapters instead of making 30 chapters each with the 1/10th of the content of your current chapters.
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Absolutely love the story...please update soon..............................................................................................
Finally found a great story but it updates so slow! Absolutely love the story so far! Keep it up, Author! ~Filling up space!~ ~Filling up space!~ ~Filling up space!~
The story is off to a good start. I hope you can update it fast and when you do please maintain a consistant pace of updates.👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
this is really good so far keep up the good work. to anyone reading this comment I suggest you check out this book. the very very beginning was kinda bad but after a few paragraphs it got really good. author I hope you don't ditch this book as it's really good and I can tell you have talent. have a good day or good night depending on when your reading this.
Hey Author , are you going to update it ??? Its been like 9 months ..... Its really good 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 But U don't Update