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Autor puedes hacer una novela de animes combinados ¡por favor! El tema principal sera animes combinados. Talvez un sistema auxiliar para ayudarlo.mundos War is love, High school Of Death, KissXKiss, las Quintillisas, el anime de cocina de nivel dios donde aparece Irina, talves un mc tipo macho alfa, nada beta. Harem, Ecenas +18 pero no frecuentemente, ya sabes como lo haces tu. Que se enfoque más en el romance y el fondo del mundo y su trasfondo.
i am really enjoying this story so far, the characters are properly explained and the world setting isnt to messed up after the mc came so thats a nice change, i do feel it is slightly fast pased but its still great, i feel with the harem that he should take some time after each girl so that he interacts with them more before going after another girl, it makes the girls seem shallow but they are not, s far the story is going really well and the lemons are golden, i hope you keep up tge work author nim andi reccomend thus book highly to anyone who is reading this.
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This is a great fanfic but it takes many days for a new chapter wished it had more chapters
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The premise of the novel is great, I like it a lot. There are a couple things that need some work, though they aren't major things that affect the book in a negative way, it's just in the earlier chapters. The spelling and grammar needs to be fixed, other than that nothing else really catches my eye. Keep up the good work Author san.
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no bad... gonna read this in a few days... hopefully the system is not the annoying type[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
I really like this story, it's the first good fic I find from Trinity Seven. I like the MC and how he develops his relationship with the girls. I will definitely continue reading and supporting it until you finish it author sama ✨ Keep doing an excellent job ✨
the system is one of those that are Annoying and sarcastic and the mc is not the best but not the worst but he is one of the worst I have read about
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Hey everyone, please don't take it to heart as I am not gonna keep the reviews rating below 4, so if you find this is not your cup of tea then then please don't bother with the review. Only give review if you find it to your liking as I already explained myself in the synopsis itself so read that first and tags below in it. Thank you
I like the story ......................................................................................................................................
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Es la primera ves que veo un fic de Trinity seven, Debo decir que me está gustando cómo va y tengo curiosidad por cual magia se centrará 👍👍👍👍👍
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until the recent chapter you can notice the progress, it is not so fast the romance, since it is approached slowly, it would be good also that you make "pov" of the 7 "trinities". I can't say more until more chapters come out, that could show their progress with their training and the girls.
I previously put this work on the novel section and there was a grammar error so this time I corrected the grammar errors and try to improvise a little. If you like this work don't forget to put a revive here.
Autor puedes hacer una novela de animes combinados ¡por favor! El tema principal sera animes combinados. Talvez un sistema auxiliar para ayudarlo.mundos War is love, High school Of Death, KissXKiss, las Quintillisas, el anime de cocina de nivel dios donde aparece Irina, talves un mc tipo macho alfa, nada beta. Harem, Ecenas +18 pero no frecuentemente, ya sabes como lo haces tu. Que se enfoque más en el romance y el fondo del mundo y su trasfondo.
i am really enjoying this story so far, the characters are properly explained and the world setting isnt to messed up after the mc came so thats a nice change, i do feel it is slightly fast pased but its still great, i feel with the harem that he should take some time after each girl so that he interacts with them more before going after another girl, it makes the girls seem shallow but they are not, s far the story is going really well and the lemons are golden, i hope you keep up tge work author nim andi reccomend thus book highly to anyone who is reading this.
HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
This is a great fanfic but it takes many days for a new chapter wished it had more chapters
Great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍
The premise of the novel is great, I like it a lot. There are a couple things that need some work, though they aren't major things that affect the book in a negative way, it's just in the earlier chapters. The spelling and grammar needs to be fixed, other than that nothing else really catches my eye. Keep up the good work Author san.
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no bad... gonna read this in a few days... hopefully the system is not the annoying type[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
I really like this story, it's the first good fic I find from Trinity Seven. I like the MC and how he develops his relationship with the girls. I will definitely continue reading and supporting it until you finish it author sama ✨ Keep doing an excellent job ✨
the system is one of those that are Annoying and sarcastic and the mc is not the best but not the worst but he is one of the worst I have read about
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Hey everyone, please don't take it to heart as I am not gonna keep the reviews rating below 4, so if you find this is not your cup of tea then then please don't bother with the review. Only give review if you find it to your liking as I already explained myself in the synopsis itself so read that first and tags below in it. Thank you
I like the story ......................................................................................................................................
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Es la primera ves que veo un fic de Trinity seven, Debo decir que me está gustando cómo va y tengo curiosidad por cual magia se centrará 👍👍👍👍👍
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until the recent chapter you can notice the progress, it is not so fast the romance, since it is approached slowly, it would be good also that you make "pov" of the 7 "trinities". I can't say more until more chapters come out, that could show their progress with their training and the girls.
I previously put this work on the novel section and there was a grammar error so this time I corrected the grammar errors and try to improvise a little. If you like this work don't forget to put a revive here.
The story is great . Pity it is not updated in a long time