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tooooo strong. At the age of 9, he can kill the 3rd raikage. And it only has till 3rd ninja war.
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This was an amazing awesome read, I really really liked it. Oh and Please Keep On Making More Chapters. Bbbhhbhyy ffgvvbhyhhhhggggvgggggggggyggggygvvfrthgfrggjyggh
Ayo good novel but is it dropped ? . . . . . [img=exp][img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=exp][img=recommend][img=fp]
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This is a great fanfic novel the world building is immersive it is also very structured. The Lilith angle needs to be further explored. A very enjoyable read would recommend to everybody.[img=update][img=update]
Well... the idea is not bad... but seriously author? It seems like you have read way too much cultivating novels, the characters behave like they are straight from those cultivating novels and has lost the "Naruto" vibe and there are way too many plot holes.
One of the best naruto fics ...........................................................................................................................................................
Super fanfic 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 i want more author🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤
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nice.................................................................................................................................................................
anyway you know how to surprise you're reader I mean I thought of a lot of power but Ignir escaped me: Fire dragon slayer, Demon slayer or fire god, lineage Bune(DxD), Incinerate Anthem (DxD), Johnny Storm / Human Torch (Marvel Comics), John Allerdyce / Pyro X-Men, Phoenix Lineage (DxD), Nuova Shenron (Dragon Ball GT), Genryusai Shigekuni Yamamoto's Ryūjin Jakka (Bleach), The Sun rising of Feitan (Hunter x Hunter) , the Quirk - Cremation of Dabi (My Hero Academia) , the powers of the Phoenix Force (Earth-616) | Marvel, The Powers of Zarathos (Earth-616) Marvel.... in short among all I did not even imagine The fire dragon Ignore congratulations and thank you for the chapter
very good need more......................... ............................. .................. ..................more ........................
Bro this is the copy of Law of Demons, same script except little changes like he got fire fruit rather than string fruit and the “main heroine “ switched to Kurenei same except scene where MC was getting “bullied”. Please author credit the previous author in summary. But I really like the change you did to that book.
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История мира очень интересная, есть много персонажей(как главный герои, так и второстепенные), которые хорошо расскрыты и чувствуются живими. Но не всё так хорошо, как хотелось бы. Такое ощущение, что этот фанфик написан под впечатлением от китайского фанфика" Devil ninja ".Начало почти такое-же, арка с академией почти чистый плагиат (только имя гг поменяли и всё). Единственное отличие в том, что у гг другие способности. и я надеюсь что из-за этого история будет отличаться от фанфика Devil ninja
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
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I like the concept, story line and the progress so far are interesting. Looking forward on some of the event that will happen and what the MC will do especially with Shishui and how the MC will developed.
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A great read so far, waiting for more updates in the future . Hope author will pick this up again and continue where he left. Looking forward.
tooooo strong. At the age of 9, he can kill the 3rd raikage. And it only has till 3rd ninja war.
Membuka SPOILER ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
This was an amazing awesome read, I really really liked it. Oh and Please Keep On Making More Chapters. Bbbhhbhyy ffgvvbhyhhhhggggvgggggggggyggggygvvfrthgfrggjyggh
Ayo good novel but is it dropped ? . . . . . [img=exp][img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=exp][img=recommend][img=fp]
😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫
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This is a great fanfic novel the world building is immersive it is also very structured. The Lilith angle needs to be further explored. A very enjoyable read would recommend to everybody.[img=update][img=update]
Well... the idea is not bad... but seriously author? It seems like you have read way too much cultivating novels, the characters behave like they are straight from those cultivating novels and has lost the "Naruto" vibe and there are way too many plot holes.
One of the best naruto fics ...........................................................................................................................................................
Super fanfic 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 i want more author🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤
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MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
nice.................................................................................................................................................................
anyway you know how to surprise you're reader I mean I thought of a lot of power but Ignir escaped me: Fire dragon slayer, Demon slayer or fire god, lineage Bune(DxD), Incinerate Anthem (DxD), Johnny Storm / Human Torch (Marvel Comics), John Allerdyce / Pyro X-Men, Phoenix Lineage (DxD), Nuova Shenron (Dragon Ball GT), Genryusai Shigekuni Yamamoto's Ryūjin Jakka (Bleach), The Sun rising of Feitan (Hunter x Hunter) , the Quirk - Cremation of Dabi (My Hero Academia) , the powers of the Phoenix Force (Earth-616) | Marvel, The Powers of Zarathos (Earth-616) Marvel.... in short among all I did not even imagine The fire dragon Ignore congratulations and thank you for the chapter
very good need more......................... ............................. .................. ..................more ........................
Bro this is the copy of Law of Demons, same script except little changes like he got fire fruit rather than string fruit and the “main heroine “ switched to Kurenei same except scene where MC was getting “bullied”. Please author credit the previous author in summary. But I really like the change you did to that book.
Membuka SPOILER exp..........................................................................................................................................
More @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!#################################################$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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История мира очень интересная, есть много персонажей(как главный герои, так и второстепенные), которые хорошо расскрыты и чувствуются живими. Но не всё так хорошо, как хотелось бы. Такое ощущение, что этот фанфик написан под впечатлением от китайского фанфика" Devil ninja ".Начало почти такое-же, арка с академией почти чистый плагиат (только имя гг поменяли и всё). Единственное отличие в том, что у гг другие способности. и я надеюсь что из-за этого история будет отличаться от фанфика Devil ninja
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
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I like the concept, story line and the progress so far are interesting. Looking forward on some of the event that will happen and what the MC will do especially with Shishui and how the MC will developed.
Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaahahahahahahhahahhhahahhaahahahaahahahahahaahahahahhaahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahaahahahahahahahaahhahaahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaahahahahaha by not really
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A great read so far, waiting for more updates in the future . Hope author will pick this up again and continue where he left. Looking forward.