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Started off great, eventually became a copy and paste of the original whilst trying it’s hardest to make the MC relevant. The same Arcs happen whilst keeping the same drama, they start the same and pretty much end the same. Like I said, only minor changes to include the MC (who becomes useless). It’s a real shame to be honest, I liked it in the beginning as it started way before canon and took a different route. I understand that he was always going to join the Strawhats but I thought it would have retained some of it’s originality.
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In the beginning, there is a translation problem with garps name calling him karp, but after a while becomes better.
La historia tiene un buen inicio, el desarrollo del personaje es maravilloso. El capitulo que me sorpendio fue donde mataron a Roberts me dio tristesa como sufre en silencio Lin Tian y la salida de la Marina. MUCHAS GRACIAS POR LA HISTORIA . [img=recomendar]
As much as i like reading Chinese novel im starting to hate their translation as they usual use phrase like "You're courting death!” Ive grown sick of it Anyway bad grammar if you dont have the ability to switch off brain while reading you can try
i like this about was how mc become strong and his relation between garp and him why he betrayed even he is strong in crew still he isn't interfere much
1.- Mc is Luffy's dog 🐶 2.- writing quality is bad. 3.- The author and translator change the names of the characters. 4.- Chinese or wuxia/xianxia/cultivation phrases and words. 6.- China good and better than others. ....
Poorly translated with wuxia-like jargons. I'm only adding 5 stars to balance the reviews out and because I'm not that particular about grammar. I care more about the author's ability to tell their story, and the author of this fanfic does a good job with that, imo. It starts kicking off at around 200 chapters when the canon timeline begins. By then, the characters and MC's background is already fleshed out and the initial part feels more like a prologue, making the pay-off and start of Luffy's journey 100x better. than 99% of One Piece fanfics. The MC joins Luffy, not as a stranger but as someone who is deeply ingrained in the One Piece world, due to him existing years before the timeline starts. By the time Luffy sets sail, the MC already has a reputation as well as connections with the various canon characters, making the small tweaks in canon events along their journey something to look forward to.
the idea of the story is Great and refreshing but the translation is so bad that it's unbarebel for me to read More then 2 chapter's he basically just copied and pasted the story from a translation app without checking any gramer
well good&fun fan fiction to read, i some people might not like it since they like original story more, and considering fan fiction is blasphemy to their favorite manga🤣
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A really really great story!!! There's not much One Piece story where MC became a great marine (admiral) first then later became Luffy vice/deputy captain... I love how Lin Tian not became strong suddenly (became OP), he need many years until he can fight with many strong people like Whitebeards, Rayleigh, Shanks, 3 Admirals, etc.. I love how he became Garp disciple and have his own moral (killing a bad pirates and realese a good pirates/not kill innocents), he even kill the World Nobles to avenge his bestfriends 👍👍 I also like how he have a brotherhood bonds with Luffy and Ace.. He also have good relationship with his peers in marine... I don't mind Lin Tian have many interest, but I hope it's not become a harem.. Just make him with Carly/Ain or Hancock, or even Ai Siqi or Nami, not all of them 😁😁😁 Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good job author san 👍👍👍😍😍😁😁
Una traducción terrible, imposible disfrutar de la lectura, si vas a hacer algo hazlo bien o no lo hagas directamente, por mi parte solo llegué a leer hasta el capítulo 51 dado que no podía obligarme a seguir leyendo, lo intenté realmente pensé que mejoraría la traducción pero no lo hace, en conclusión este fan-fic apesta
Do not read this, this is one of my top 5 worst one piece fanfics. Translator just don't translate this and upload here pick another novel to translate that is better.
Should really work on those translations. It feels like you just use mtl.atleast do the homework of checking for grammar error and wrong spellings and not just copy paste and post it here directly
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novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
Una traducción terrible, imposible disfrutar de la lectura, si vas a hacer algo hazlo bien o no lo hagas directamente, por mi parte solo llegué a leer hasta el capítulo 51 dado que no podía obligarme a seguir leyendo, lo intente realmente pensé que mejoraría la traducción pero no lo hace, en conclusión este fan-fic apesta
Lin Tian, who had reincarnated into the world of One Piece ten years ago met Garp, who was on duty to eradicate pirates, and become his student. In the past ten years, Lin Tian has lived his life as a Marine Soldier and has experienced many amazing adventures and battles in the Grand Line. However, due to the World Nobles incident that shook the world, he became rebellious against the Marine until seriously injured. He escaped and met Luffy, who had formed a small pirate crew, and became Luffy's vice-captain in that pirate crew. He returns to the Grand Line and begins a new journey with Luffy as his captain. Lin Tian became accustomed to playing the role of a vice-captain who always made plans, had unreliable captains, and always acted before thinking what exciting things would happen...
Badddddd..............,..,'............................,..,'.........................,..,'....................,..,'.................,..,'.......................,..,'.................,..,'................,..,'...................
why are you updating this trash novel it so bad it kills my brain cells _______________________________________________________________________________
Started off great, eventually became a copy and paste of the original whilst trying it’s hardest to make the MC relevant. The same Arcs happen whilst keeping the same drama, they start the same and pretty much end the same. Like I said, only minor changes to include the MC (who becomes useless). It’s a real shame to be honest, I liked it in the beginning as it started way before canon and took a different route. I understand that he was always going to join the Strawhats but I thought it would have retained some of it’s originality.
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In the beginning, there is a translation problem with garps name calling him karp, but after a while becomes better.
La historia tiene un buen inicio, el desarrollo del personaje es maravilloso. El capitulo que me sorpendio fue donde mataron a Roberts me dio tristesa como sufre en silencio Lin Tian y la salida de la Marina. MUCHAS GRACIAS POR LA HISTORIA . [img=recomendar]
As much as i like reading Chinese novel im starting to hate their translation as they usual use phrase like "You're courting death!” Ive grown sick of it Anyway bad grammar if you dont have the ability to switch off brain while reading you can try
i like this about was how mc become strong and his relation between garp and him why he betrayed even he is strong in crew still he isn't interfere much
1.- Mc is Luffy's dog 🐶 2.- writing quality is bad. 3.- The author and translator change the names of the characters. 4.- Chinese or wuxia/xianxia/cultivation phrases and words. 6.- China good and better than others. ....
Poorly translated with wuxia-like jargons. I'm only adding 5 stars to balance the reviews out and because I'm not that particular about grammar. I care more about the author's ability to tell their story, and the author of this fanfic does a good job with that, imo. It starts kicking off at around 200 chapters when the canon timeline begins. By then, the characters and MC's background is already fleshed out and the initial part feels more like a prologue, making the pay-off and start of Luffy's journey 100x better. than 99% of One Piece fanfics. The MC joins Luffy, not as a stranger but as someone who is deeply ingrained in the One Piece world, due to him existing years before the timeline starts. By the time Luffy sets sail, the MC already has a reputation as well as connections with the various canon characters, making the small tweaks in canon events along their journey something to look forward to.
the idea of the story is Great and refreshing but the translation is so bad that it's unbarebel for me to read More then 2 chapter's he basically just copied and pasted the story from a translation app without checking any gramer
well good&fun fan fiction to read, i some people might not like it since they like original story more, and considering fan fiction is blasphemy to their favorite manga🤣
[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Membuka SPOILER Bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad
A really really great story!!! There's not much One Piece story where MC became a great marine (admiral) first then later became Luffy vice/deputy captain... I love how Lin Tian not became strong suddenly (became OP), he need many years until he can fight with many strong people like Whitebeards, Rayleigh, Shanks, 3 Admirals, etc.. I love how he became Garp disciple and have his own moral (killing a bad pirates and realese a good pirates/not kill innocents), he even kill the World Nobles to avenge his bestfriends 👍👍 I also like how he have a brotherhood bonds with Luffy and Ace.. He also have good relationship with his peers in marine... I don't mind Lin Tian have many interest, but I hope it's not become a harem.. Just make him with Carly/Ain or Hancock, or even Ai Siqi or Nami, not all of them 😁😁😁 Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good job author san 👍👍👍😍😍😁😁
Una traducción terrible, imposible disfrutar de la lectura, si vas a hacer algo hazlo bien o no lo hagas directamente, por mi parte solo llegué a leer hasta el capítulo 51 dado que no podía obligarme a seguir leyendo, lo intenté realmente pensé que mejoraría la traducción pero no lo hace, en conclusión este fan-fic apesta
Do not read this, this is one of my top 5 worst one piece fanfics. Translator just don't translate this and upload here pick another novel to translate that is better.
Should really work on those translations. It feels like you just use mtl.atleast do the homework of checking for grammar error and wrong spellings and not just copy paste and post it here directly
Pire traduction au mondeeeee[img=faceslap][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
Una traducción terrible, imposible disfrutar de la lectura, si vas a hacer algo hazlo bien o no lo hagas directamente, por mi parte solo llegué a leer hasta el capítulo 51 dado que no podía obligarme a seguir leyendo, lo intente realmente pensé que mejoraría la traducción pero no lo hace, en conclusión este fan-fic apesta
Lin Tian, who had reincarnated into the world of One Piece ten years ago met Garp, who was on duty to eradicate pirates, and become his student. In the past ten years, Lin Tian has lived his life as a Marine Soldier and has experienced many amazing adventures and battles in the Grand Line. However, due to the World Nobles incident that shook the world, he became rebellious against the Marine until seriously injured. He escaped and met Luffy, who had formed a small pirate crew, and became Luffy's vice-captain in that pirate crew. He returns to the Grand Line and begins a new journey with Luffy as his captain. Lin Tian became accustomed to playing the role of a vice-captain who always made plans, had unreliable captains, and always acted before thinking what exciting things would happen...
Badddddd..............,..,'............................,..,'.........................,..,'....................,..,'.................,..,'.......................,..,'.................,..,'................,..,'...................
why are you updating this trash novel it so bad it kills my brain cells _______________________________________________________________________________