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It’s readable but horribly cringe. There is a lot of anime characters to the pojnt that there is little creativity at all. the writing is fine but for me it’ my cup of tea. However, i still recommend you check it clout as you might enjoy this. This is my personal opinion.
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Good. I would recommend but the update schedule is horrific but I would definitely read.
a very good writer, even though your novel tells about the daily life of a reincarnated MC with his harem in the Dxd world, I never get tired of reading it and this is a rare thing for Fanfiction novels,. and yes I hope that what you say about this novel is not dropped is the truth okay? because your novel is the best! and yes, if I may give you a suggestion I want a scene in full chapter 18+, so I can follow the rhythm in the bathroom too xD that's all from me, thank you, and have a nice day!!!
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Es una historia interesante , aunque espere ver al mc en la edad de rías gremory, admito qué tiene una buena trama y buena descripción de todos los personajes ya qué hay fanfics qué solo ponen en su escritura pero es mejor una imagen para tener una idea de como se ven
its really a shame he (you) decided to stop writing this and focused on 5 other stories first chapters. this had the potential to be really good but stopping writing so you can start new stories, is just annoying.
Love this novel ................................................................................................................................................
It's a 4.6 ( Only the update is the problem other than that it's quite good. ) [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=exp]
well what can I say fanfictions with side characters getting all enviable waifus not cup of my tea.............. I mean if you are desparate on pairing all characters atleast pair them with some random OC because we are here for waifus (mostly) and not interested in reading our waifus in the background (not focus of main story) because if you are not giving them focus with main character what's the point in adding them to your story just for their introduction
NO!!!!!!!!! please please please please, please Keep Rias for the MC Take all the heroines like Akino, Rias, Yasaka, Gabriel who are heroines of DxD And keep Issie as a side character for COMEDY please Author-chan
I like your work as well as other fanfic's of yours as well as in fanfiction . com. You should work on representation and focus on character development and along add pov's of some important character 's and kindly give your update shedules of chapters per week.
when I comment ,author become blind 😂🤣 I want to say please change grafiya to grayfia back grayfiya was grayfia mom and you just say grafiya was sirzech wife , basically you want to say sirzech marry mom and daughter together ? basically mc talking about grayfia if I m not wrong not grayfiya right
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A good fanfic. I like the idea of being before the original plot of dxd. The MC has a good personality, and I like the fact that he knows when to act and when to not act. I can't wait for the civil war to begin! My only complaint is for the author to have a set posting schedule for new chapters.
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This book is much better than I expected. I really recommend it! Good job author-san! .
A Good Fanfic so far... It is a bit fast paced... But that's fine... A very strong MC but not so strong so as to make the fic boring early... Perfect Background... The best timeline... Not a lot of dxd fics cover the Devil Civil War... We should have more fics focussing on that time... So much of timeline is wasted just to match the canon timeline.. So much could be done... Don't stop this... It will be a great fic seriously...
Honest, i like it. The author just made chapter 15. So far i like it the writing quality is amazing. Barely any to no mistakes. The author updates like every day. The development is going along nicely just make sure that he does go from 0-1000 to fast on power level. Then I like anti-hero/villain mc. I get sick and tired of a good mc in dxd because you can't be nice in this world or you die. Keep up the good work author
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Membuka SPOILER It’s readable but horribly cringe. There is a lot of anime characters to the pojnt that there is little creativity at all. the writing is fine but for me it’ my cup of tea. However, i still recommend you check it clout as you might enjoy this. This is my personal opinion.
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Good. I would recommend but the update schedule is horrific but I would definitely read.
a very good writer, even though your novel tells about the daily life of a reincarnated MC with his harem in the Dxd world, I never get tired of reading it and this is a rare thing for Fanfiction novels,. and yes I hope that what you say about this novel is not dropped is the truth okay? because your novel is the best! and yes, if I may give you a suggestion I want a scene in full chapter 18+, so I can follow the rhythm in the bathroom too xD that's all from me, thank you, and have a nice day!!!
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Es una historia interesante , aunque espere ver al mc en la edad de rías gremory, admito qué tiene una buena trama y buena descripción de todos los personajes ya qué hay fanfics qué solo ponen en su escritura pero es mejor una imagen para tener una idea de como se ven
its really a shame he (you) decided to stop writing this and focused on 5 other stories first chapters. this had the potential to be really good but stopping writing so you can start new stories, is just annoying.
Love this novel ................................................................................................................................................
It's a 4.6 ( Only the update is the problem other than that it's quite good. ) [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=exp]
well what can I say fanfictions with side characters getting all enviable waifus not cup of my tea.............. I mean if you are desparate on pairing all characters atleast pair them with some random OC because we are here for waifus (mostly) and not interested in reading our waifus in the background (not focus of main story) because if you are not giving them focus with main character what's the point in adding them to your story just for their introduction
NO!!!!!!!!! please please please please, please Keep Rias for the MC Take all the heroines like Akino, Rias, Yasaka, Gabriel who are heroines of DxD And keep Issie as a side character for COMEDY please Author-chan
I like your work as well as other fanfic's of yours as well as in fanfiction . com. You should work on representation and focus on character development and along add pov's of some important character 's and kindly give your update shedules of chapters per week.
when I comment ,author become blind 😂🤣 I want to say please change grafiya to grayfia back grayfiya was grayfia mom and you just say grafiya was sirzech wife , basically you want to say sirzech marry mom and daughter together ? basically mc talking about grayfia if I m not wrong not grayfiya right
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Membuka SPOILER A good fanfic. I like the idea of being before the original plot of dxd. The MC has a good personality, and I like the fact that he knows when to act and when to not act. I can't wait for the civil war to begin! My only complaint is for the author to have a set posting schedule for new chapters.
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This book is much better than I expected. I really recommend it! Good job author-san! .
A Good Fanfic so far... It is a bit fast paced... But that's fine... A very strong MC but not so strong so as to make the fic boring early... Perfect Background... The best timeline... Not a lot of dxd fics cover the Devil Civil War... We should have more fics focussing on that time... So much of timeline is wasted just to match the canon timeline.. So much could be done... Don't stop this... It will be a great fic seriously...
Honest, i like it. The author just made chapter 15. So far i like it the writing quality is amazing. Barely any to no mistakes. The author updates like every day. The development is going along nicely just make sure that he does go from 0-1000 to fast on power level. Then I like anti-hero/villain mc. I get sick and tired of a good mc in dxd because you can't be nice in this world or you die. Keep up the good work author
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