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Tulis ulasanGreat concept for a novel. BUT, there are multiple instances of the author either not explaining what is happening or repeating events multiple times but changing how it happened, describing things differently, or adding and subtracting details. I read the same thing 3 times, just written slightly differently each time.
I like keep it up But plEase let there be romance But will I dont want to see all the Mc does it get stronger and if its romance make it 2 wives an elf and a dragon or cat girls More Chapters✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻🙏🙏🙏🙏
I like the system and the Plot that author make. And teh story is good. .keep it up, I'll waiting for your updates [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
Great concept for a novel. BUT, there are multiple instances of the author either not explaining what is happening or repeating events multiple times but changing how it happened, describing things differently, or adding and subtracting details. I read the same thing 3 times, just written slightly differently each time.
I like keep it up But plEase let there be romance But will I dont want to see all the Mc does it get stronger and if its romance make it 2 wives an elf and a dragon or cat girls More Chapters✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻🙏🙏🙏🙏
I like the system and the Plot that author make. And teh story is good. .keep it up, I'll waiting for your updates [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]