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It is wrong to abuse psionic abilities in a Dungeon? Danmachi FF
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#PALLUM #SHAPESHIFT #DANMACHI #PSIONIC #LILIRUCAARDE #HEPHAESTHOSFAMILIA #OVERGEARED #FORGING #ALCHEMY #SKILLMASTERING #NOHAREM #NORAPE
Potions, magic items? Psychometry on it!
Secret techniques and knowledge? Psychometry on it!
Convince a misguided cute girl you want to help her? psychometry, telekinesis, premonition, telepathy, and aura vision will do it.
The mc name was "Jugemu Jugemu Goko no Surikire Kaijarisuigyo no Suigyomatsu Unraimatsu Furaimatsu Ku Neru Tokoro ni Sumu Tokoro Yabura Koji no Bura Koji Paipo-paipo Paipo no Shuringan Shuringan no Gurindai Gurindai no Ponpokopi no Ponpokona no Chokyumei no Chosuke" Also known as Chunchunmaru he awoke as Sinns'krieger a green-haired pallum who died from a cursed item that killed his car crowd to Orario.
He soon takes notice of his new [psionic] abilities, when he tried to remember the body past as he uses psychometry to learn how pallums are treated like (minor people) as his height only reaches 135 cm being the taller pallum anyone he knows has ever meet.
He discovers some other uses to his abilities that inspired him to be "great again" and discovers he was two years before Hestia's come to the mortal realm...
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the story is ok, you should improve the grammar and the header a bit..............................................................................
I get your doing this for free and writings your hobby, but the English is jumbled at best and incoherent at worst. Maybe try using a program like grammarly and when you rewrite a chapter go over every sentence and ask yourself does this make sense? If I was an English teacher you would have gotten a d-, the only thing stopping the F is you tried In the first place
story started out good and interesting, but around chapter 10 the grammar degraded to that of a 8th graders.. with the characters constantly talking in the 3rd person.. (like riser phenex from dxd).. basically just constantly saying their own names as well as the persons they're talking to.. it is irritating and starts giving one migraines the more you try to follow along..
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EXP. Lili got the hang of it soon after and regained some distance until I let her overtake me, only for her to stop and be indecisive about being fed by me or the other way around.
Membuka SPOILERJilid 0 : Auxiliary Volume
Jilid 1
- 1 Those thunderclap leaves who made heavenly silkworm explode or evolve taking a breath of time of the 14? realms?.... 2 years ago
- 2 T. 2 years ago
- 3 The mind warrior abuse monsters. 2 years ago
- 4 The Great Pallum abuses monsters part II* 2 years ago
- 5 Lapsus pretium. 2 years ago
- 6 Great Pallum is a Sage now? The true cheat. 2 years ago
- 7 [LOOKHERE] 2 years ago
- 8 My Targets. (Rewrite?) 2 years ago
- 9 The Nullity of an Waifu. ((Rewrite)) 2 years ago
- 10 Convert Lili. ((Rewrite)) 2 years ago
- 11 Cinda Ella? more like Cinda Bella... (Rewrite many times...) 2 years ago
- 12 Lili Ruca? More Like Lili Louca! 2 years ago
- 13 Interesting Life of the Great Pallum. 2 years ago
- 14 Zael & Tach (pt 1) 2 years ago
- 15 Shadows of the Dungeon (pt2) 2 years ago
- 16 Shadows Of the Dungeon abuses an Elf. (pt 3) 2 years ago
- 17 Epic of Lili. Plus: The Elf and Snakegirl. 2 years ago
- 18 Leve Up Madness?... 2 years ago
- 19 A Family. The Great Pallum keep abusing monsters. 2 years ago
- 20 Pause till someday. 1 years ago
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