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I think it’s a good novel but it’s also confusing and the template system is good but he should build is power on is own or using the gacha ressource
@Chapter 59 - Author still has trouble with his/her she/him Story is erratic and hard to follow and very random in a bad way. I really want to like this but it is actual work to read and not super entertaining.
There's too much grammatical errors and the characters are sometimes been used in a confusing way. There's potential though if a good editing work is done
I think it’s a good novel but it’s also confusing and the template system is good but he should build is power on is own or using the gacha ressource
@Chapter 59 - Author still has trouble with his/her she/him Story is erratic and hard to follow and very random in a bad way. I really want to like this but it is actual work to read and not super entertaining.
There's too much grammatical errors and the characters are sometimes been used in a confusing way. There's potential though if a good editing work is done