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ok, the novel has vast unlimited potential. that's for sure however the author's representation of that potential is a little underwhelming. I'm, not one to judge on the grammar but it's honestly terrible. The start was also a little off-putting. moving from excited to saddened then crazy. there no stability in the characters thoughts.
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personally I like lotus so I hope he ends up with before anyone else also like a chapter seeing their reaction to them becoming a couple. anyway I like it the grammar isn't the best but still readable so far lotus and Emily are the only yandere's. so I recommend you give it a try what are you doing down here go read the novel
What can I say about this novel?! Whatever I say would be an underestimating compliment. This novel is so awesome, that you just have to try it!!! Such an engrossing novel!! Please keep up the good work, Author!>3 Wishing you the best for your amazing novel!
I love the way this novel goes. It's pretty decent and has a unique vibe. People gotta try reading this. I can guarantee that you won't be disappointed.
I love yandere but, and no offence, the level of grammar hurt my brain. Like it's not that hard to edit, if your English skills are bad then read more difficult books, and use Grammarly. A touch of Grammarly, which is totally free by the way, could turn a nice yandere story that's unreadable into an actual story. I love the updates though.
I honestly don't read this genre much if anyone of you seen my previous reviews on other books. I don't read it much because... well I probably don't have a lot of patience to figure things out? But this books was not bad as the Author did try to help me understand this world background and the development of the story was interesting. Good Job Author!
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you won't regret reading it . it will be full of doubts ,full of mysteries of impenetrable fog . it will be a story no one asked and you needed it. a yandere story which is unique compared to other yandere stories even a gem among yandere stories
The sentence structure is not very good and the writing quality is poor at the beginning. However, it can be seen that the author is not stupid or uneducated as the author's understanding of philosophy shines through.
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ok, the novel has vast unlimited potential. that's for sure however the author's representation of that potential is a little underwhelming. I'm, not one to judge on the grammar but it's honestly terrible. The start was also a little off-putting. moving from excited to saddened then crazy. there no stability in the characters thoughts.
Love the story so far, thanks.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I'll give power stone for a chapter today.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
personally I like lotus so I hope he ends up with before anyone else also like a chapter seeing their reaction to them becoming a couple. anyway I like it the grammar isn't the best but still readable so far lotus and Emily are the only yandere's. so I recommend you give it a try what are you doing down here go read the novel
What can I say about this novel?! Whatever I say would be an underestimating compliment. This novel is so awesome, that you just have to try it!!! Such an engrossing novel!! Please keep up the good work, Author!>3 Wishing you the best for your amazing novel!
I love the way this novel goes. It's pretty decent and has a unique vibe. People gotta try reading this. I can guarantee that you won't be disappointed.
I love yandere but, and no offence, the level of grammar hurt my brain. Like it's not that hard to edit, if your English skills are bad then read more difficult books, and use Grammarly. A touch of Grammarly, which is totally free by the way, could turn a nice yandere story that's unreadable into an actual story. I love the updates though.
I honestly don't read this genre much if anyone of you seen my previous reviews on other books. I don't read it much because... well I probably don't have a lot of patience to figure things out? But this books was not bad as the Author did try to help me understand this world background and the development of the story was interesting. Good Job Author!
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you won't regret reading it . it will be full of doubts ,full of mysteries of impenetrable fog . it will be a story no one asked and you needed it. a yandere story which is unique compared to other yandere stories even a gem among yandere stories
The sentence structure is not very good and the writing quality is poor at the beginning. However, it can be seen that the author is not stupid or uneducated as the author's understanding of philosophy shines through.