The National Goddess Reborn

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loriperfect

if I get a dollar for every evil stepsister in web novel system 🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃😗🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃😗🙃😗😗🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃

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LV 4

Bok_Knee

Although some might think it's the usual step-sister and OP FL, this one actually has a little twist in it. The FL has supernatural powers and I look forward to it more. I really hope this story gets picked.

LV 4

MoonGrace_flores

Ok .......ok me Like lol 🌝🥲♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️

LV 15

DaoistU78Sy7

Not appreciating the end . Very disappointed in the writer for leaving it unfinished. It was an interesting story up until the end. If I wasn't read other stories, this would have turned me off from reading Webnovel . I feel ripped off, love reading good stories this one was good until the .writer left it incomplete. Very Disappointed .[img=faceslap]

LV 2

purpl3_fox

Honestly, I had great expectations of this novel, but from the first chapter it was pretty obvious it is subpar. Author seems to have attention span and writing ability of a 10year old. While idea is good, flow of the story is all over the place, author jumps from one train of thought to another without proper bridge, all characters no matter the age seem to have a brain of a chicken and rich is made to be the same as super smart/violent/hot. If none of that strikes you as irritating, how about absurdities such as: Dog was stabbed THROUGH THE NECK but sure is still alive; then there's the fight IN THE MIDDLE OF A BANQUET but nobody notices nor does anything about it; the little spoiled rich girl had her wrist broken but not a single tear or a scream is heard; and those are just the first few chapters! Now, translation is pretty decent except for the fact that Middle school mentioned in the novel should be Hight school, because middle school is for kids up to the age of 14, and our protagonist is 18... Anyways, I do not recommend reading this novel. If you're like me and can't stop yourself from reading these kind of overused plots, try something else, there are those better than this, and that's saying something... p.s. Does anybody else find it annoying that 'cool' people have to heave their hands in the pant pockets while walking? Because I've tried it and it's super awkward to walk like that..

LV 10

Wallflower_Monk

I wouldn't say it's great but it's good enough. There are over the top dramatic and brainless characters in the novel that can be annoying at times. Also, ridiculous situations that would never be okay in real life, like beating people up in public and getting away with it for example 🥲. ✏️ Spoilers: The cool thing about the novel are the superpowers. The FL was strong in her past life luckily she's able to regain her powers in this new world. I think the ML may have powers too. He may possibly even be a transmigrating character but these are just guesses and I could be wrong. He does however know about some of the things involving powers that the FL knows about. I'm looking forward to seeing how the superpower aspect of the novel develops. I'm also looking forward to the ML and FL's interactions. They haven't officially met yet, but they've seen each other from afar (20 chapters in).

LV 15

Jafrastr

It should have an end, not stop in the middle of the story. Please finish this booking. If I knew the 📖 wasn't complete, I wouldn't have gotten this book.

LV 13

thakarriddhi11

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LV 6

MizuTenshi

INCOMPLETE STORY! Whether the original author or the translator stopped updating, the story shouldn’t be labelled complete. Do not read if you don’t want be left hanging.

LV 5

supergirl2

does anyone know it's raw title. ................. plzzz🥺🥺 can't wait to read more😍😍 . .. .. . . .. .... .. ... .... 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

LV 4

Darshana_Varma

The story is not complete.....Hope author will continue the novel.....😔😌

LV 14

Trenita_Finley

I can't believe the ending of this novel. It has left me hanging and wanting more....It needs a proper ending

LV 15

Moe_Flett

A great read nicely different to other reborn stories. the only complaint is the ending, you cant just leave it like that🤯 I hope there is a second book that picks up where this left off.

LV 1

Sana_Amami

why is there a complete sign even thought it's not complete yet !!! this is weird can anyone tell me why !! i love this novel <3 <3 <3 why why why why :(

LV 15

Lady_Cultivatorz

yet another novel dropped half way marked completed. what a waste of time..

LV 13

Lilys1101

This novel is not complete. What happened to the author lu yiyi. This story is 100% good but it's not complete 😭

LV 4

Aishana_Ruby

is this the end?? 🙀🙀🙀....................................................................................................................

LV 15

j_hopefull

Ok, have read until chapter 148. One word for this story to date: MESSY! Positives are: Updates regularly. Translations seems ok with a few errors here and there. Superpower. And that is it? Negatives: MC is supposed to be the usual "cool" or "outwardly cold" persona that many other MC's are in other novels but it seems to fail achieving that. The MC feels like a mix of many other MC's that we may have read but it all feels superficial? The story development and it's flow is HORRENDOUS! It is absolutely messy with incorrect time frames (one moment it speaks of certain amount of time and then it is a different amount time in the next few chapters that things have been happening). I can't even tell how long she's been reborn since the months written keeps changing from 2 months and later a character mentions something about half a year or something! The author also seems to jump from one action to another without any TRANSITION. It's like the MC was doing something one moment and then it jumps to something else. It makes it feel that there are things missing in between. The plot writing have quite a few redundant words as well. I can only assume this is a brand new author (kuddos & good luck to you if so) that needs to go back to the beginning of her story and restructure her story by fixing the time frame so that the story can FLOW. As it is, reading it can be confusing when a paragraph in a chapter should come AFTER another and vice versa. Also, is the author trying to make the MC some kind of female fatale? If so, it fails. It feels too abrupt having those males all be interested in her with the very limited interaction or vibes that is written. This novel has shown the MC to be very "violent" in an annoying way when I assume the author was trying for cold and bad*ss. Unfortunately, she's just violent? I don't mind if an MC beats their opponent but this MC just lack something? So bottom line, the IDEA of the story seems interesting but it is too messy to be enjoyable. Need a lot of fixing on time flow, fix up the MC a bit to make her more "alive" and then this novel would be on a better path. I will not read it any further or recommend until it is improved.