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Overall this story is great and very much entertaining despite being a short story. I am quite a bit disappointed with Amiya's character as it was displayed that she is quite unstable and somehow feels... Psychotic.
the story is good ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
it's sweet short and mature if you're expecting something really crazy this isn't it but this was nice the male character wasn't a pushover stood his ground the female character wasn't completely crazy to the point that you wanted to hit her they separated like people that were going to become adults this was refreshing
Author you really won my heart with this content. I must say this novel is really worth trying.
this is Avery appreciating story about a couple going through a breakup and is one of the best i read on this topi , I hope you all give it a try
Very well written. The emotional and human aspect of it was show in an almost realistic that kept you reading the story. Again very well done. 5 star for the story. I wish there were more like this.
A novel for men with cuck*ld and sick fetishes. All right, the MC and the author are a cuck man who prays for his girlfriend who cheated on him to live happily, it's really great and there are no words to say for the author
i think this might be one of the best romance drama novel ive read.my respect in on the author🤝
I like it but I am not a good judge of literature considering what I have read
At first I really thought how can a book be this short but I still decided to give it a try well cuz I was bored and I can say this wholeheartedly that I do not regret reading this book. Although short but fulfilling. After reading so many novels about cheating and revenge this novel was like a fresh air. Thanks Really loved
very very short, but very inspiring. i just wish the author spent a little more on building a newer and better ML because that's what people usually do or try to do after break ups. trying to build the pieces back together, the struggles, the usual hobbits because sometimes love becomes a muscle memory, a subconscious. but trying to fix a broken mirror you will still see the cracks. then maybe thats where we need to let it go and look for a new one 😊 everybody deserves some form of happiness in life.
I just, you know, quite shaked at first but now I am more confused, questioning if there is someone around me who is going through a similar experience.
It’s a good book, though I thought that it was gonna be very different and have more chapters then it did. It was still a good read and I kinda hope for a update to show the future life after college that the MC has
I do enjoy a classic break up but this one took me back to my teenage days of dating. The heart break and the thoughts and ridiculous ideas that flew in my head. It also had an acceptable ending.
I like it, nice story. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
it's been a very good write up and to some the feeling is relatable but then there are those who still wants the chance to have forgiveness not revenge seriously that's overrated. so ya write one with them getting together and maybe with the new girl too, y not hehe
Chanced on this. Was expecting the usual despairing lover and either a lot of face slapping or a suicide (isn't that how most of the "I caught my gf/bf cheating" stories go?). finally a realistic story where the MC realizes that what was going on in his head was a long way from reality. Where he took stock of what was truly important and moved on. Our ML moves on like a real man. He works out that it wasn't his fault, it just was. So once he's ready he finds someone else. Good lad. Good read
Its a good story of how it ended 8n finding true love whom they can trust...but the part HE got cheated is very troublesome...how he doubt himself...he should just slapped her the momment she said she felled excited...
This book is really very realistic and reaches deep into the feelings of a breakup in real life. I like the progression and how Kazuya handled the problem. But it definitely isn't for those people who like revenge plots so better don't try reading it if you are one.
gostei muito uma historia onde o cara não vira um cara vingativo, mas sim uma pessoa que entende que ele se vingar não ia mudar nada, e com isso segui em frente perdoando-a, e seguindo em frente com a vida.
i lile the story very much. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
You don't want to take revenge, beauty, but at least punch the crazy guy, Betrayal right crazy, talk with your fist...🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱
A little sad that the story was so short. But love the quality, how concise it is and how well it depicts how someone who really loved their second half may feel when trying to move on.
Thank you so much Author-san for thos wonderful book. It took me on an emotional ride. I feel like this book is a must-have for those who are going through a break-up and are not sure how to deal with their feelings.
Hm, not at all for me, the mc really has a cuckold and losing mentality, and it's not getting better, plus forgiving your gf is too much, as they say you can forgive an enemy but not a traitor 😤
I thought the story overall was pretty solid it wasn't a masterpiece but it was still a good read. The characters were very likable and hateable. I think the story pacing seemed a little too fast and maybe could've spent a few more chapters to flesh it out. Overall it was a fun ride thanks for the book.
hmm i liked the story as long as it lasted while the ending was short it was kinda satisfying but sadly it's not a redemption type of novel which would have been fun but it's realistic after all mc isn't the center of the universe so it's better to just move on and luckily he managed to find a way better girl
Overall this story is great and very much entertaining despite being a short story. I am quite a bit disappointed with Amiya's character as it was displayed that she is quite unstable and somehow feels... Psychotic.
the story is good ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
it's sweet short and mature if you're expecting something really crazy this isn't it but this was nice the male character wasn't a pushover stood his ground the female character wasn't completely crazy to the point that you wanted to hit her they separated like people that were going to become adults this was refreshing
Author you really won my heart with this content. I must say this novel is really worth trying.
this is Avery appreciating story about a couple going through a breakup and is one of the best i read on this topi , I hope you all give it a try
Very well written. The emotional and human aspect of it was show in an almost realistic that kept you reading the story. Again very well done. 5 star for the story. I wish there were more like this.
A novel for men with cuck*ld and sick fetishes. All right, the MC and the author are a cuck man who prays for his girlfriend who cheated on him to live happily, it's really great and there are no words to say for the author
i think this might be one of the best romance drama novel ive read.my respect in on the author🤝
I like it but I am not a good judge of literature considering what I have read
At first I really thought how can a book be this short but I still decided to give it a try well cuz I was bored and I can say this wholeheartedly that I do not regret reading this book. Although short but fulfilling. After reading so many novels about cheating and revenge this novel was like a fresh air. Thanks Really loved
very very short, but very inspiring. i just wish the author spent a little more on building a newer and better ML because that's what people usually do or try to do after break ups. trying to build the pieces back together, the struggles, the usual hobbits because sometimes love becomes a muscle memory, a subconscious. but trying to fix a broken mirror you will still see the cracks. then maybe thats where we need to let it go and look for a new one 😊 everybody deserves some form of happiness in life.
I just, you know, quite shaked at first but now I am more confused, questioning if there is someone around me who is going through a similar experience.
It’s a good book, though I thought that it was gonna be very different and have more chapters then it did. It was still a good read and I kinda hope for a update to show the future life after college that the MC has
I do enjoy a classic break up but this one took me back to my teenage days of dating. The heart break and the thoughts and ridiculous ideas that flew in my head. It also had an acceptable ending.
I like it, nice story. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
it's been a very good write up and to some the feeling is relatable but then there are those who still wants the chance to have forgiveness not revenge seriously that's overrated. so ya write one with them getting together and maybe with the new girl too, y not hehe
Chanced on this. Was expecting the usual despairing lover and either a lot of face slapping or a suicide (isn't that how most of the "I caught my gf/bf cheating" stories go?). finally a realistic story where the MC realizes that what was going on in his head was a long way from reality. Where he took stock of what was truly important and moved on. Our ML moves on like a real man. He works out that it wasn't his fault, it just was. So once he's ready he finds someone else. Good lad. Good read
Its a good story of how it ended 8n finding true love whom they can trust...but the part HE got cheated is very troublesome...how he doubt himself...he should just slapped her the momment she said she felled excited...
This book is really very realistic and reaches deep into the feelings of a breakup in real life. I like the progression and how Kazuya handled the problem. But it definitely isn't for those people who like revenge plots so better don't try reading it if you are one.
gostei muito uma historia onde o cara não vira um cara vingativo, mas sim uma pessoa que entende que ele se vingar não ia mudar nada, e com isso segui em frente perdoando-a, e seguindo em frente com a vida.
i lile the story very much. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
You don't want to take revenge, beauty, but at least punch the crazy guy, Betrayal right crazy, talk with your fist...🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱
A little sad that the story was so short. But love the quality, how concise it is and how well it depicts how someone who really loved their second half may feel when trying to move on.
Thank you so much Author-san for thos wonderful book. It took me on an emotional ride. I feel like this book is a must-have for those who are going through a break-up and are not sure how to deal with their feelings.
Hm, not at all for me, the mc really has a cuckold and losing mentality, and it's not getting better, plus forgiving your gf is too much, as they say you can forgive an enemy but not a traitor 😤
I thought the story overall was pretty solid it wasn't a masterpiece but it was still a good read. The characters were very likable and hateable. I think the story pacing seemed a little too fast and maybe could've spent a few more chapters to flesh it out. Overall it was a fun ride thanks for the book.
hmm i liked the story as long as it lasted while the ending was short it was kinda satisfying but sadly it's not a redemption type of novel which would have been fun but it's realistic after all mc isn't the center of the universe so it's better to just move on and luckily he managed to find a way better girl