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this is a very good story im looking forward to see what you have planned for the rewrite.
This Story had a great start, and I was Immediately immersed. I have enjoyed every chapter up to chapter 26. Recently the Author decided to remove a little aspect of the story which is fine because it had only a minor contribution as of yet. I am looking forward to the continuation of this adventure.
show me the light once more with the eye desire that chapter the shows we're still there just like how are the people of Britain waited for King Arthur to return to pull the shorter from the stone once more as we yell to the depths of heaven show us old chapters that were still there I like the mouse that claim the world by climbing the highest mountain to show the meaning that even the smallest creature can reach the heavens. let the Stars converge once more as this book show eclipse the world once more do not forget one's beginning and those future is not set in stone as we wait here waiting for our Arthur to return once more
I think this is a very interesting story that shows a different perspective and letting us see a different way into the world of rwy and more CHAAAAAAAAAAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!. please 🥺
I like how you still made Ruby her own person instead of it just being "I replaced Ruby while she was still alive". The quality is really good and I like how the romance doesn't start IMMEDIATELY. You can tell there's attraction but love is something you truly build up to. I'm not the most knowledgeable about Overwatch but I do like the character designs and from what I know, Ruby does seem to be on their level so it fits. Good job, Author! I look forward to seeing more from this.
The idea of the author's mc becoming an mc from one series heading to other series to attempt becoming the mc in that universe is a very cool concept. The character's interactions are well written showing a good understanding of the source material while still making the story all new. Thank you for writing this, looking forward to where this story goes.
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A very promising novel with one of my personal favourite characters from any animated show. Not a whole much happening yet just MC doing their stuff and some sprinkled character development. I hope it won't disappear =w= 4.8/5
Is it just me or the quality of the grammars are dropping each chapters ??? I think you need sleep man the quality is dropping because you lack of sleep.
This is a very good story. At first I thought you would make it so Rubys powers were exaggerated but instead made them just like in the show without to much changes and even added the idea of trauma and conflict between the two characters (Ruby and your OC). All in all I love the book and am expecting a great time when reading any future chapters.
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Perfection. The FitnessGram™ Pacer Test is a multistage aerobic capacity test that progressively gets more difficult as it continues. The 20-meter pacer test will begin in 30 seconds. Line up at the start. The running speed starts slowly but gets faster each minute after you hear this signal. A single lap should be completed each time you hear this sound. Remember to run in a straight line, and run as long as possible. The second time you fail to complete a lap before the sound, your test is over. The test will begin on the word start. On your mark, get ready, start.
The concept of a transmigrated Ruby hopping through worlds collecting their powers feel pretty amazing to me...............................................................................................................................I can't wait for more updates..................... I hope this turns out to be an amazing story.......
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really good, i love the concept of two souls memories actually having emotional effects. ........................................................
yuri plz ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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this is a very good story im looking forward to see what you have planned for the rewrite.
This Story had a great start, and I was Immediately immersed. I have enjoyed every chapter up to chapter 26. Recently the Author decided to remove a little aspect of the story which is fine because it had only a minor contribution as of yet. I am looking forward to the continuation of this adventure.
show me the light once more with the eye desire that chapter the shows we're still there just like how are the people of Britain waited for King Arthur to return to pull the shorter from the stone once more as we yell to the depths of heaven show us old chapters that were still there I like the mouse that claim the world by climbing the highest mountain to show the meaning that even the smallest creature can reach the heavens. let the Stars converge once more as this book show eclipse the world once more do not forget one's beginning and those future is not set in stone as we wait here waiting for our Arthur to return once more
I think this is a very interesting story that shows a different perspective and letting us see a different way into the world of rwy and more CHAAAAAAAAAAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!. please 🥺
I like how you still made Ruby her own person instead of it just being "I replaced Ruby while she was still alive". The quality is really good and I like how the romance doesn't start IMMEDIATELY. You can tell there's attraction but love is something you truly build up to. I'm not the most knowledgeable about Overwatch but I do like the character designs and from what I know, Ruby does seem to be on their level so it fits. Good job, Author! I look forward to seeing more from this.
The idea of the author's mc becoming an mc from one series heading to other series to attempt becoming the mc in that universe is a very cool concept. The character's interactions are well written showing a good understanding of the source material while still making the story all new. Thank you for writing this, looking forward to where this story goes.
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A very promising novel with one of my personal favourite characters from any animated show. Not a whole much happening yet just MC doing their stuff and some sprinkled character development. I hope it won't disappear =w= 4.8/5
Is it just me or the quality of the grammars are dropping each chapters ??? I think you need sleep man the quality is dropping because you lack of sleep.
This is a very good story. At first I thought you would make it so Rubys powers were exaggerated but instead made them just like in the show without to much changes and even added the idea of trauma and conflict between the two characters (Ruby and your OC). All in all I love the book and am expecting a great time when reading any future chapters.
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Perfection. The FitnessGram™ Pacer Test is a multistage aerobic capacity test that progressively gets more difficult as it continues. The 20-meter pacer test will begin in 30 seconds. Line up at the start. The running speed starts slowly but gets faster each minute after you hear this signal. A single lap should be completed each time you hear this sound. Remember to run in a straight line, and run as long as possible. The second time you fail to complete a lap before the sound, your test is over. The test will begin on the word start. On your mark, get ready, start.
The concept of a transmigrated Ruby hopping through worlds collecting their powers feel pretty amazing to me...............................................................................................................................I can't wait for more updates..................... I hope this turns out to be an amazing story.......
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really good, i love the concept of two souls memories actually having emotional effects. ........................................................
yuri plz ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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