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I love this novel! it's very well written! I hope the author will have time to finish ......................................................................................
I'm speechless. The writing is just immaculate. The way the sentence is phrased, and with how a few words, a lot of the stuff is conveyed. The world-building is really good. I could just picture myself in that world. I could see myself as a character in this story. Really top-notch work. Craving for more.
Great one, I really really enjoyed reading this story it was amazing and it met my expectations what can I say the author did a great job. well done and keep it up.
This is a certified page-turner, the mystery...the dark past, all that is captured amazingly and the book sucks you in and keeps you in. overall a very interesting, unique and realistic novel with loads of potential. Best of luck author and keep writing!!
My goodness!!!! The chapters keep me on hook! The moment I finished reading one chapter, I could not control myself from going to the next one! The plot is quite unique and totally of my liking! Keep up the good work author!
Great story it has an interesting concept which I guess should attract readers well I hope u just increase rate of updates and plz don't drop it
Definitely one of my favorite stories I've read so far. I highly recommend this story and it has one of my favorite element in a story. One of the best reads I ever had.
need more 😍🤩😭🤧 we need more realism themed novels, just a good one like this, all for you author!
Great chapters can't wait to read more updates from you, I love your work, I highly recommend your work 🔥love the pace the grammer ,keep it up
Incredible story line with great scenes. Can't help but look forward to seeing more updates from you author. Keep it up dear with this excellent masterpiece.
I feel like some books are so underrated, and this is a pearl among them. For me it's a different kind of plot to explore, and it's amazing, I'm in awe of the story. Continue writing, I look forward to what happens next! !! 💖
Good read, good fun, worth the time spent. If you're considering whether or not you wana pick up this nove, do give it a try! You won't regret it.
Some parts of this story are mildly disturbing, so be warned. Despite that, though, the story is pretty good! It explores the mind of a messed up guy pretty well.
It's a very intriguing story so far. Nicely written, and the flow is incredible. I think the mysteriousness of all the characters had me adding it to continue later, but it could have been the way you tell the story. Keep it up!
All I can say is good job author! that was a really vivid expression of the story. I only suggest that the title be written in capital letters as to make it look more professional. other than that, keep up the good work
I liked the twist that he have something shady happening in the background Hope y post more ,and also i wish they charachter développement to bé slow pace not some Speedrun 😩
Book looks alright and only chapter are short, more please. I hope you will continue this novel, and we'll be looking forward to the next chapter of yours.
This is what they mean when they talk about writing a good hook. I wasn't sure what to expect besides the cliche of a depressed lead character. But you do enough to just draw the reader in, after that anyone will want more. I read well
The words are well writen and chosen with deep meanings, the dark pasts are just growing the story more, giving it vibes of an anime. -------
The author has a picture to portray through their words. And they do that well enough for the reader to understand the theme of it. The world created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline.
I feel like if I continue reading this, it will definitely be a thrilling and enjoyable experience. So I will be adding this to my library. Good luck author!
I was a bit sad that you dropped a novel that I had been reading and enjoying. After reading this one though I feel like I was rewarded. Amazing prose, amazing characters and amazing pacing. Looking forward to future chapters!
nah, for real, this is gas! the way the emotions have been explained is just amazing. it seems we are in for something dark. this really is my cup of tea. excited for future chapters
Now, this is amazing! The way you write every chapter giving hints of MCs' past through his emotions makes me want to read more and more. The type of novel I was looking for!
The MC really got my attention. As a reader, I could say that the author created his MC in a very realistic way. How could I say this? Read chapter one that's all I can say. and you will that the mc is a real person that exists. Good luck!
Let's start with the good points. 1. Grammer and the writing quality is good. It is fairly easy to understand what everyone is saying or what the MC is thinking. The pace was smooth as well. 2. This story looks promising and beautiful. The feeling it gave me was that' when it will be completed or have more chaps(50+) it will become a thrilling story.' For that reason, I will save it for the future. Now some bad points:- 1. Since it was just 6 chaps many things looked incomplete. How does the MC look? How do his classmates look, especially the girl and his male friend? I can imagine the MC from the cover but it's difficult to imagine others. (Give a clear picture of what the MC sees, without over detailing it.) 2. There are fewer surprise elements in the beginning. Sure there is a mystery in the first chap and it makes you look towards the 2nd chap but after that, it's just a story about a 'special' boy and his everyday life with a 'special' girl, but without any extra piece of intel that will intrigue you, it becomes a plain story. (Well, I guess it can't be sorted that easily within 6 chaps and will become better as the story progresses. So it's not really a bad point but something you can still try to improve to get more readers into your story.) The above review can still be ignored cause, you know, it is my opinion and it may differ from other readers. Personally, I will read it and wait for more chaps.
As expected, the story is amazing. The mystery about the past is intriguing. The main character is compelling. I have read your pervious works and I think with every new one you are improving. That's a great sign.
This one is promising. The writing style is consistent, not rushed, not too draggy either. I'm getting curious about Kageyama and that woman. They're giving a similar vibe.
The starting seems good and I am really excited to see what the past of our protagonist is. Seems like he has some screw lose. Definitely adding this to my library.
Hello everyone. It's me, your friendly author! The first volume of the series has been completed and the second volume is already underway. If you are reading this story and enjoying it, I am really glad. So, I would like to treat this review as a Q&A area. If you have any queries, suggestions or if you have noticed any mistakes then please tell me without hesitation!
I love this novel! it's very well written! I hope the author will have time to finish ......................................................................................
I'm speechless. The writing is just immaculate. The way the sentence is phrased, and with how a few words, a lot of the stuff is conveyed. The world-building is really good. I could just picture myself in that world. I could see myself as a character in this story. Really top-notch work. Craving for more.
Great one, I really really enjoyed reading this story it was amazing and it met my expectations what can I say the author did a great job. well done and keep it up.
This is a certified page-turner, the mystery...the dark past, all that is captured amazingly and the book sucks you in and keeps you in. overall a very interesting, unique and realistic novel with loads of potential. Best of luck author and keep writing!!
My goodness!!!! The chapters keep me on hook! The moment I finished reading one chapter, I could not control myself from going to the next one! The plot is quite unique and totally of my liking! Keep up the good work author!
Great story it has an interesting concept which I guess should attract readers well I hope u just increase rate of updates and plz don't drop it
Definitely one of my favorite stories I've read so far. I highly recommend this story and it has one of my favorite element in a story. One of the best reads I ever had.
need more 😍🤩😭🤧 we need more realism themed novels, just a good one like this, all for you author!
Great chapters can't wait to read more updates from you, I love your work, I highly recommend your work 🔥love the pace the grammer ,keep it up
Incredible story line with great scenes. Can't help but look forward to seeing more updates from you author. Keep it up dear with this excellent masterpiece.
I feel like some books are so underrated, and this is a pearl among them. For me it's a different kind of plot to explore, and it's amazing, I'm in awe of the story. Continue writing, I look forward to what happens next! !! 💖
Good read, good fun, worth the time spent. If you're considering whether or not you wana pick up this nove, do give it a try! You won't regret it.
Some parts of this story are mildly disturbing, so be warned. Despite that, though, the story is pretty good! It explores the mind of a messed up guy pretty well.
It's a very intriguing story so far. Nicely written, and the flow is incredible. I think the mysteriousness of all the characters had me adding it to continue later, but it could have been the way you tell the story. Keep it up!
All I can say is good job author! that was a really vivid expression of the story. I only suggest that the title be written in capital letters as to make it look more professional. other than that, keep up the good work
I liked the twist that he have something shady happening in the background Hope y post more ,and also i wish they charachter développement to bé slow pace not some Speedrun 😩
Book looks alright and only chapter are short, more please. I hope you will continue this novel, and we'll be looking forward to the next chapter of yours.
This is what they mean when they talk about writing a good hook. I wasn't sure what to expect besides the cliche of a depressed lead character. But you do enough to just draw the reader in, after that anyone will want more. I read well
The words are well writen and chosen with deep meanings, the dark pasts are just growing the story more, giving it vibes of an anime. -------
The author has a picture to portray through their words. And they do that well enough for the reader to understand the theme of it. The world created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline.
I feel like if I continue reading this, it will definitely be a thrilling and enjoyable experience. So I will be adding this to my library. Good luck author!
I was a bit sad that you dropped a novel that I had been reading and enjoying. After reading this one though I feel like I was rewarded. Amazing prose, amazing characters and amazing pacing. Looking forward to future chapters!
nah, for real, this is gas! the way the emotions have been explained is just amazing. it seems we are in for something dark. this really is my cup of tea. excited for future chapters
Now, this is amazing! The way you write every chapter giving hints of MCs' past through his emotions makes me want to read more and more. The type of novel I was looking for!
The MC really got my attention. As a reader, I could say that the author created his MC in a very realistic way. How could I say this? Read chapter one that's all I can say. and you will that the mc is a real person that exists. Good luck!
Let's start with the good points. 1. Grammer and the writing quality is good. It is fairly easy to understand what everyone is saying or what the MC is thinking. The pace was smooth as well. 2. This story looks promising and beautiful. The feeling it gave me was that' when it will be completed or have more chaps(50+) it will become a thrilling story.' For that reason, I will save it for the future. Now some bad points:- 1. Since it was just 6 chaps many things looked incomplete. How does the MC look? How do his classmates look, especially the girl and his male friend? I can imagine the MC from the cover but it's difficult to imagine others. (Give a clear picture of what the MC sees, without over detailing it.) 2. There are fewer surprise elements in the beginning. Sure there is a mystery in the first chap and it makes you look towards the 2nd chap but after that, it's just a story about a 'special' boy and his everyday life with a 'special' girl, but without any extra piece of intel that will intrigue you, it becomes a plain story. (Well, I guess it can't be sorted that easily within 6 chaps and will become better as the story progresses. So it's not really a bad point but something you can still try to improve to get more readers into your story.) The above review can still be ignored cause, you know, it is my opinion and it may differ from other readers. Personally, I will read it and wait for more chaps.
As expected, the story is amazing. The mystery about the past is intriguing. The main character is compelling. I have read your pervious works and I think with every new one you are improving. That's a great sign.
This one is promising. The writing style is consistent, not rushed, not too draggy either. I'm getting curious about Kageyama and that woman. They're giving a similar vibe.
The starting seems good and I am really excited to see what the past of our protagonist is. Seems like he has some screw lose. Definitely adding this to my library.
Hello everyone. It's me, your friendly author! The first volume of the series has been completed and the second volume is already underway. If you are reading this story and enjoying it, I am really glad. So, I would like to treat this review as a Q&A area. If you have any queries, suggestions or if you have noticed any mistakes then please tell me without hesitation!