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Halo kaaa, cerita nya seruuu.. tetap semangat menulisnya kaaa, jangan pernah menyerah dan patah semangat!! 😘😘😘 btw mampir kelapak aku yuk kaakk, Follback, Collback dan Revback cerita aku yaaaa.. terimakasih 🥰
The pacing is a bit fast and the information given in the first chapter is a bit overwhelming. Over time it did get a bit better but it still needs polishing before it can turn into a full gem. Keep up the good work author!
The plot develops well throughout the chapter and the picture created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline. As a reader i got sinked in this world the Author had created. A fascinating escape from reality into another world. A great read
Fun and enjoyable. Excellent job author! If you're thinking whether or not you want to pick up this book, go on ahead and give it a try! Very well written!
It only has a few chapters but It is off to a great start, your writing skill is really good, the concept of your story is really nice too the only thing you need to do is update more chap, great work though will be waiting author.
This work is really unique, kinda different from what I've read so far. I just love it. The author really did an amazing job in writing and thinking of the plot.
The writing quality is fantastic and it is apparent that the author has some prior experience in writing novels, so on that front, it is excellent. The characters are well written the story is intriguing.
It's a very nice story, well written, it's very clear that the author has a lot of experience in writing. Though it's just a few chapters released, I can already see the infinite potential of the novel. Great work!
The story is very interesting, with a prologue and there is a plot that hangs events in the story. That's a great strategy to make readers curious and read it to the end. Goodluck Thor
wow amazing. I like the story. please keep going on to update frequently. i will be waiting. your English is good too. 👍😊 Semangat kak Ani.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leozhan2020*@*gmail.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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Halo kaaa, cerita nya seruuu.. tetap semangat menulisnya kaaa, jangan pernah menyerah dan patah semangat!! 😘😘😘 btw mampir kelapak aku yuk kaakk, Follback, Collback dan Revback cerita aku yaaaa.. terimakasih 🥰
The pacing is a bit fast and the information given in the first chapter is a bit overwhelming. Over time it did get a bit better but it still needs polishing before it can turn into a full gem. Keep up the good work author!
The plot develops well throughout the chapter and the picture created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline. As a reader i got sinked in this world the Author had created. A fascinating escape from reality into another world. A great read
Fun and enjoyable. Excellent job author! If you're thinking whether or not you want to pick up this book, go on ahead and give it a try! Very well written!
It only has a few chapters but It is off to a great start, your writing skill is really good, the concept of your story is really nice too the only thing you need to do is update more chap, great work though will be waiting author.
This work is really unique, kinda different from what I've read so far. I just love it. The author really did an amazing job in writing and thinking of the plot.
The writing quality is fantastic and it is apparent that the author has some prior experience in writing novels, so on that front, it is excellent. The characters are well written the story is intriguing.
It's a very nice story, well written, it's very clear that the author has a lot of experience in writing. Though it's just a few chapters released, I can already see the infinite potential of the novel. Great work!
The story is very interesting, with a prologue and there is a plot that hangs events in the story. That's a great strategy to make readers curious and read it to the end. Goodluck Thor
wow amazing. I like the story. please keep going on to update frequently. i will be waiting. your English is good too. 👍😊 Semangat kak Ani.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leozhan2020*@*gmail.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Thank u for all of you who always support my book. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=coins] i love you guys.🎉🎉🎉
I cant stop to read this book oh myy..😘😘😘😭😭😭😭😭[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
this indonesian trans is available too. please read that too😍😍😍😍🙏 thank youuu.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
that so sad. iam going to cry all over my face when i read this😭😭😭😭😭😭😭[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
make me feel so high. iam going crazy plzzz😭😭😭 so saaaddd.... [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
youre story amaze me. plisssssss[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] keep going please. [img=recommend]
Whatever. i just want to that woman be happy with the devil king together.😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
Dimana ada kamu disitu ada aku. mantap bngttt. walau aku hanya baca versi indonya. tapi inggrisnya pasti menarik banyak otang[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]good luck kak
Need more pleaseee[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Woww.. Ada translate ingrisnya.. So good😍😍😍😍😍😍😍[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
OMG. u know wut, i just wanna say a word. Amazingghhhh[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]😭😭 Sooo good..
this story is unexpected realyyyyy[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
welcome to my new story. sorry. my last one is wrong. Give me vote with power stone, golden ticket and collection plus review my book. thank u[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=coins]❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️