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Bab 18: Chapter 18

(POV From a manipulator who learns over time)

"RAGNAROS, AL'AKIR. THERE IS SOMETHING YOU MUST HEAR DIRECTLY."

Therazane spoke first, implying that what they knew they could not understand unless they could confirm it themselves. Though I know they both know that things are not so simple, now that one of them is "on our side".

For Ragnaros I have a plan that can help me. I don't think anyone will refuse the offers I will present to him.

"A pleasure to finally meet Ragnaros "The Eternal Flame" and Al'Akir "The Lord of the Wind", Elemental Lords. I have come with the intention of delivering a message, to all elemental lords. If I may.

"GO AHEAD AND SAY IT AT ONCE. SLAVE OF THE STONE"

"..."

Ragnaros was more polite than I thought and Al'Akir just nodded. Alright, hahaha, this is perfect.

"I saw that one day a great darkness would fall that would cover the world, and change Azeroth as we know it. It would come from beyond the heavens and the light. It would come from the darkest of the dark to corrupt the world, enslave us all, and make us obey its will. Their bodies were huge and gigantic amorphous masses from which armies of small beings that covered the sky. They built gigantic houses around those beings, corrupting the earth and everything in their path. I saw that you would unite to fight the threat that sought to consume us all. But it mattered not your effort, nor that of the other elementals, for their power was enormous. All would fall victim to their corruption and power, losing everything..."

I hope you understand the gravity of this.

"That is why we must unite before they arrive and build their massive armies. Only together can we stand a chance of eradicating the dark threat that approaches us."

All the elemental lords were in deep thought. Ragnaros was feeling challenged, for I am sure he must rely greatly on his power. Al'Akir on the other hand was calm, but I'm sure his thoughts must be flowing chaotically. Neptulon and Therazane were calmer than the other two, for they had had time to understand the extent of the threat that could lurk within them.

"WHEN DO THESE SO-CALLED THREATS ARRIVE? SLAVE OF THE STONE".

"What I've seen doesn't say when. It could be today or a long time from now, but let's hope it's the latter, because we have to prepare for them."

"HOW MANY ARE THERE? SLAVE... OF THE STONE".

"I saw that there were 5 of them, but it could be more. Because the darkness was so overwhelming.

This way they will not be complacent and will focus on increasing their elemental armies and increasing their strengths.

"WHY DO YOU HIDE THINGS, YOU SLAVE OF THE STONE?! TELL ME AT THIS MOMENT OR YOU WILL BE CONSUMED BY MY FIRE".

I think I exploit a little bit the lord of arrogance *cough* I mean, fire.

"Because they are not ready to know. If I speak of more, it is possible that the world will meet its end. I have seen much, and as much as I have seen I have also learned that time is very fragile. If we change things too much we may never stand a chance against the darkness that threatens us. I hope you understand my concern, Fire Lord."

"IT WOULD BE WISE TO LISTEN TO IT, RAGNAROS. THE WINDS HAVE WARNED ME OF THE EVIL THAT LURKS WITHIN THE CORRUPT FIRE AND SHADOWS. THIS FORGE EARTH DOES NOT LIE.

I'm surprised that the master of this plan himself would interfere. Perhaps I have misjudged his move... But I will still get my revenge for this. My inner fire demands it.

"CORRUPT FIRE? HA-HA-HA DON'T MAKE ME LAUGH, AL'AKIR. ANYONE WHO PLAYS WITH FIRE AGAINST ME WILL BE PURIFIED, DON'T DOUBT IT."

*SIGH* I can understand that, but it also makes me wonder. That Al'Akir knows about demons... I thought they didn't exist here in this time... So how...?

"SO, YOU WANT US TO JOIN TOGETHER TO FIGHT A THREAT THAT WE DON'T KNOW WILL ARRIVE? HOW ABSURD! HOW CAN YOU ASSURE ME OF ITS ARRIVAL?... SLAVE OF THE STONE."

"I have a way, Fire Lord. But first I would like you to listen to me, for I have a deal that you will not be able to refuse, would you like to hear it?"

"SPEAK FAST"

(Terran language - language of the earth elementals).

I turned to look Therazane in the eye, for I had to ask her permission first.

"Mother Stony, I want you to know that I will put my life on the line for this deal. But I swear to you, for the sake of what I wish to protect, for the sake of Azeroth, I will not fail. So I ask your permission to continue."

He looks deeply into my eyes and asks me.

"HOW CONFIDENT ARE YOU THAT YOU CAN WIN, FORGE EARTH?"

Not much to be honest, but I'm not looking to win. Hahaha, this deal will be like killing 2 birds with one stone.

"I cannot beat you in battle, Mother Stony. But I will get the victory, you can trust me for this."

I continued to look at her and waited for her to give me permission. For I am her "son", in other words, her servant. I can't do anything if Therazane doesn't allow me to, for I would be confronting her. To do so would cause me to lose my base and my plan would fall apart. I cannot allow such a thing.

Answering at last, he said to me.

"VERY WELL, DO WHAT YOU MUST, FORGE EARTH. BUT REMEMBER, IF YOU DIE, I'LL MAKE YOU SUFFER UNTIL YOU KEEP YOUR OATH AGAIN!".

But I won't die, because I'm not foolish enough to allow it.

"So be it, Mother Pétrea. I only expect your help for what I will propose next. You won't have to do much, but observing will be very important. Can you be my observer?

"I WILL TRUST YOU, FORGE EARTH. BUT DO IT QUICKLY, THE PATIENCE OF RAGNAROS IS QUICKLY CONSUMED".

"Thank you."

Without another word, I turned and looked at the increasingly furious Ragnaros. So I quickly said.

"I apologize for keeping you waiting, Fire Lord, but I cannot go through with the deal if my Lady will not allow me to. I hope you can understand that my loyalty comes first. But I will not keep you waiting any longer and get to the point... I am willing to team you up like I did to the Water Lord, if you agree to give me your blessing. Besides, if you are willing to accept some conditions, I am also willing to equip your most faithful and powerful servants. To swear my eternal service to you. And lastly, I am willing to accompany you in the fight against the darkness, standing by your side in battle."

I felt Ragnaros's anger diminishing and his curiosity increasing. After thinking, he asked.

"INTERESTING DEAL YOU GIVE ME, STONE SLAVE. BUT TELL ME, WHAT ARE THE CONDITIONS THAT YOU HAVE NOT SAID".

"To arm your servants I only wish to be able to fight them and you in friendly combat where neither side will fight to the death, for I need to adapt to the great levels of power. For my eternal service, you must be willing to have a combat with me. If you are willing to listen to some conditions, but I do not intend to restrict your power. I just want to be able to have a chance to prove myself and prove myself worthy of your blessing. The last part of the deal is tied to whether I win. For I could be of no use to him in battle if I cannot prove my power to him."

"SO YOU WANT TO FIGHT ME, STONE SLAVE. WITH THE POWER YOU BARELY POSSESS, HA-HA-HA. I DON'T KNOW IF I SHOULD PRAISE YOUR BRAVERY OR YOUR STUPIDITY, BUT TELL ME THE FINAL CONDITIONS OF THAT FIGHT. THOUGH I CAN PRACTICALLY SEE YOU ALREADY UNDER MY COMMAND, SLAVE!"

I caught him.

"The conditions of the match will be simple. One, to have observers who will act as judges in combat. This will prevent me from dying from not being able to withstand your power and at the same time end the battle in which case I can no longer continue fighting. Two, in order for me to win I must land 3 hits on you. Three, my defeat will be in case I cannot continue fighting. Four, in order to begin the encounter I must first have forged a piece of equipment for you. Five, you must use the equipment I have already forged for you. Six, in the event of my victory, you must ally with all elemental lords to face the danger to come. Promising a stop to turf fights in order to increase the number of living elementalists for battle. Seven, in case of my victory you will owe me a favor and in return I will make you a special equipment. Eight, if I win I will fight by your side in the battles against darkness. Nine, if you win I will serve you eternally, following your every command. Those would be the conditions for battle. Do you agree? ".

With all these conditions I am postponing the fight, but at the same time I am giving myself time and getting another blessing. Last but not least. My ticket of revenge against Al'Akir. I'm sure Ragnaros will enjoy doing it as soon as he hears about it.

I can already feel Al'Akir's restlessness. Ha-ha-ha, you'll see, Lord of the Wind. You trapped me by being with Ragnaros, but I will win this war by turning your ally against you.

"VERY WELL, SLAVE. I ACCEPT."

"Then please bless me so that I can make the most suitable equipment for you. I will also need you to bring the rocks that are deepest in the most powerful volcano in your territory. The more powerful and resistant the rock, the better."

"VERY WELL, SLAVE. HAVE MY BLESSING. I HOPE YOU WILL DO ME SOME GOOD, OR YOU WILL SUFFER MY WRATH."

With a dismissive wave of his hand, a great power flooded my being. It sought to consume my land and boil my water. But I controlled the whole process with my will. Little by little I was gaining a mastery of this. The day will come when I can handle these blessings easily, and at that time I will absorb it all and make it truly mine.

...

A long time later.

I had promised Ragnaros powerful and special equipment. I promised him that his power would increase by possessing such equipment and if he wanted I could swear it on my life.

The arrogant fool just left me the materials and said nothing more. I had asked him for a lot, because he needed it for his equipment. And it was true.

It took me less time than I thought to analyze the power of the mineral I called "Magma Heart". It was a powerful mineral formed from the magma streams that formed in the deepest chambers of volcanoes. It was a very hard mineral, and its power was incredible. It was comparable to Neptulon's "Deep Pearl".

Anyway, it didn't take me long to forge from this material, what would be known as "Sulfuras, The Hand of Ragnaros". A large mace with spikes like golden blades protruding from each smooth side of it. In total 9 for on the mace and 3 on the end of the handle. It was a beautiful reddish-earth color, glowing from the amount of fire elemental energy coursing through it. The engravings were purely artistic, but its elemental harmonization made it very hard to ridiculous degrees. The fire flowed smoothly in enormous amounts, so much so that the weapon could not store it all and continuously expelled it causing the glow.

With this mace, Ragnaros could use fire easier and faster. In addition to generating extreme damage with fiery shockwaves. Stun an enemy if hit correctly and more abilities the mace has at his disposal.

But that wasn't the only thing I created. I also made myself a special body for what was to come. I know I don't stand a chance in a battle against Ragnaros, but thanks to my ingenuity this isn't a battle. It's a fight and I only have to hit him 3 times for my victory. Of course I will win this. It's not arrogance because of my new improved fire, it's just logic after carefully planning the possibilities. It didn't take me long to think of them, because I already had some in mind for when we went with the 3 elemental lords to suppress Ragnaros and force him to join.

For the next battle my victory is assured. And what's better. I had more than enough time to prepare. Hahaha, neither Ragnaros nor Al'Akir will know what awaits them. For poor Ragnaros lost this battle the moment he let his greed, power and arrogance overcome his mind.

Author's Note: Last chapter today. I finally managed to finish without falling asleep, what do you think, comment because every comment is a motivation to continue writing. Ask if you have doubts, comment with confidence because I don't bite and interact with me as you like in a healthy way. I enjoy your comments and that's why I always invite you to express yourselves. Well, I say goodbye and I wish you a great day or a good night (free of nightmares of course). ^^

Questioner: There is a little trap in the chapter. Whoever tells me: "what is it? and why is that cheat? You will be able to ask me a question about the story, and you will be free to create 1 character to your liking (within the limits of the wow universe, of course). Where you can assign him if he is alliance or horde. If you are dragon or naga. The race determines his possible actions, alliances, timeline in which he is present (unless it is in the future) and so on, all this to avoid being an incoherent character and fails to add to the story. Of course, I'm willing to hear how you guys would like him to be. Including if he would participate in some big battle or want to be related to the main character in some way. Anything is possible as long as we talk. (There is ONLY 1 WINNER. YOU HAVE ONLY 1 CHANCE TO GUESS AND ONLY IF YOU ANSWER BOTH QUESTIONS AT THE SAME TIME IN 1 SINGLE MESSAGE, so give it a shot) (Preferably answer in this paragraph).

By the way, if I manage to integrate the character, I may continue to add more and give more opportunities to create someone who can become important in the story. I don't know if you know, but in WOW there are a lot of "heroes" who are supposed to be the ones who face all the enemies in the world.

If the person who won wishes to "donate" the character, (wishes to be created from among those who read this Fanfic), I can ask questions, and slowly choose which person will choose a particular thing about the character. Like someone choose the hair color and hair shape. Another the name, and so on XD. I'm just having fun.


Bab 19: Chapter 19

(POV From a budding Manipulator)

"Fire Lord, this weapon is a "Mallet", and I have called it , "Sulfuras, The Hand of Ragnaros".

When I handed Sulfuras to Ragnaros, I could feel his joy.

"WELL! YOU HAVE PROVEN YOURSELF WORTHY TO SERVE ME. NOW LET US BEGIN."

"So be it, fire lord."

I had made a similar deal with Neptulon, in which I would forge him a weapon of his own in exchange for being able to fight him and his princes. This was with the intention of improving my power before the coming of the old gods. And I also asked him to be an observer of the "friendly" combat that would take place. The water lord happily agreed. I guess he also wishes to carry a weapon even though he shouldn't specialize in close range combat... the hatred and competitiveness that beings can cause is unbelievable. Thank 'God' for giving me the power to feel emotions, it wouldn't be so easy if it wasn't for this.

To Therazane I proposed the same deal, as I needed to learn how to fight anything that was thrown at me. Obviously it has to do with fulfilling the mission of the "GOD / DEVIL" who sent me here. She accepted.

I didn't say anything to the air lord, because at this point it doesn't really matter if he participates or not, I have already bagged 3 of the 4 lords.

...

(Time after - Start of the fight)

"NOW, SLAVE. I WILL DEMONSTRATE THE POWER OF YOUR NEW MASTER. I WON'T BE TOO HARD ON YOU, I STILL NEED YOU TO ARM MY ARMIES. SO REJOICE, FOR YOU WILL BE THE ONE TO MAKE MY DOMINION OVER THIS WORLD POSSIBLE, HA-HA-HA-HA!"

Watch momentarily as the firelord rejoiced in a victory that was not yet set in stone. But it was preferable that it should be so, for an enemy full of arrogance is an easy one to impress. What I find most amusing is that he thinks that, if he wins, I can do the same thing I've done so far. Hahaha, Therazane only has to take her blessing from me and I will once again be an elemental with little forging ability. For without my land it won't be easy. As for Neptulon's blessing... There's not much to say, as soon as I lose I know his blessing will vanish.

"It is an honor for me to fight you today. I will do my best to get the victory and prove myself worthy of your blessing."

As much as his arrogance ruined my impression of him. My respect for his power is genuine, and I'm really excited to prove how strong I am now.

"STOP TALKING AND LET'S GET STARTED, SLAVE."

"Observers, please begin the fight at your leisure."

I looked at Therazane and Neptulon. They both nodded and Therazane spoke.

"INICIEN"

...

The firelord lunged toward me, intent on crushing me under the weight of Sulfuras. But his movement was slow. Not only did he lack the sledgehammer mastery he should possess in the future. If swinging the sledgehammer with the intent to crush requires a lot of technique or talent... But, he's also not used to the right amount of force he should use for each strike.

Ragnaros, before getting Sulfuras was a ranged mage with the beginnings of a battle mage, so, despite knowing how to strike with his fists, he doesn't know how to use weapons.

I for one am a somewhat versatile close range attacker. And now with Neptulon's blessing, that versatility has increased even more, thanks to gaining the "crowd control" powers that water elementals are known for.

As soon as the fight started, I used my body power to increase my mass. Surrounding myself with the stone around me, I grew to be a little bigger than Ragnaros. My intention was to test one of his blows and see if what I have theorized is possible.

My sudden increase in size surprised Ragnaros a little but he didn't hesitate even though my size exceeded him by a head.

I received his first swing with my left hand. But the force behind that blow was immense.

*BOOOOOOM*

I must say that the closer I get, the louder their explosions get. My hand didn't completely explode with the shockwave, because I managed to make the stone resist and hold together under the control of my ability. As it hit, in addition to the shockwave, it sent out a wave of fire that sought to consume my entire left arm.

"HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA!"

I quickly summoned 3 stone walls that would give me a moment to perform my experiment.

"YOU RETREAT SO QUICKLY, SLAVE. DO YOU WANT TO GIVE UP NOW THAT I HAVE DEMONSTRATED A SMALL PART OF MY POWER?".

Without responding, I focused on the fire invading my left arm, and using the ability of body control, I used all my will to guide Ragnaros' fire into my chest. More specifically to the area where his blessing and my fire resided.

*BOOOOOOM*

*BOOOOOOM*

*BOOOOOOM*

"WHAT'S THE MATTER, SLAVE. NOW YOU'LL HIDE BEHIND THE STONE? HOW DO YOU PLAN TO BEAT ME IF YOU CAN'T HIT ME? HA-HA-HA-HA! JUST GIVE UP AND LET'S GET IT OVER WITH! I PROMISE NOT TO TREAT YOU BADLY. ONLY UNDER MY COMMAND WILL YOU BE TRULY USEFUL!"

While Ragnaros took his time destroying the walls that separated him from me, and bought me time, I had managed to easily move the fire to where I wanted it.

Then came the hard part. The struggle of my will against the residual will that possessed his attack. Still, by attacking its remaining will with the weight of my own, I managed to make all that fire now obey me.

It wouldn't be so easy if I wasn't in my control zone, where my will was like a fortress. Everything would be at my mercy once inside.

HAHAHAHAHA, I internally laughed at the result. Now that I know I can take his attack, the fire lord lowered his danger to me a little. And I say little, because all the fire I can't drag into my will field will be dangerous. But no matter, I just have to let him keep hitting me, I'm sure he won't like what I have in store for him one bit.

"Fire Lord, as I told you before, I'm honored! "

I lunged at him now with reckless abandon. Ragnaros was momentarily surprised to see that I was completely unaware of my own safety.

And even in surprise, his next attack was on the move. He aimed for my chest, I suppose with the intention of incapacitating me at once. But I received it like a champ.

*BOOOOOOM*

Again his attack imbued its fire into the site and the broken stone remained bound by my skill, or should I say, by my will. I absorbed the fire from his attack with gusto, slowly increasing the power I stored up.

*BOOOOOOM*

An attack on my shoulder.

*BOOOOOOM*

To my head.

*BOOOOOOM*

On my side, where my ribs would be.

*BOOOOOOM*

*BOOOOOOM*

*BOOOOOOM*

*BOOOOOOM*

I just held on, and when he finished his last blow, I initiated my own. In addition to withstanding his attacks, absorbing his fire and crushing the remaining will, I was also calculating his attack times.

*POOFFFFFFFF*

"AAAARRRRG"

My blow pushed him and he let go, pulling away from me. I guess it did hurt.

"WHAT DID YOU DO, YOU SLAVE!"

"First of 3 hits, fire lord."

"HA-HA-HA-HA, REJOICE, BUT THAT'S THE LAST HIT YOU'LL EVER GET."

Then he proceeded to cast his spells on me. Balls of lava and fire. I let them hit and steadily approached. The fire lord moved away each time I approached, keeping me at a distance to continue casting his elemental spells. Not that they would do me much harm, I had only to guide the fire and its will would be crushed by mine.

Seeing that this was going nowhere, I decided to take a chance and provoke him. Well, not that I care about his hatred, he already hates everything else besides himself.

"What is it lord of fire, does a single blow from me now cause fear in you, where is the arrogance of your words, lord of fire?! FIGHT!!!!!

"INSOLENT SLAVE!!!! I'LL SHOW YOU YOUR PLACE!!!!"

"HAHAHAHAHAHA! TRY IT, FIRE LORD! SHOW YOUR POWER!"

I knew he was really angry now. But that's better, hahaha. I hope his fire can stand up to the pace of his own arrogance.

Again we approached. As Ragnaros was getting a little used to using his new weapon, he had already prepared the attack. So as soon as I entered his area, the hammer fell on my head. But I didn't care, I returned his blow with my own. Precisely to his head.

*BOOOOOOM*

*POOFFFFFFFFFFF*

"AAAARRRRG"

My blow again pushed him away, as he allowed me to retreat. But I didn't want it to end like this. I just needed one more punch.

"2 FOR 3 FIRELORD, I FEEL MY VICTORY ALREADY!!!"

"SLAVE!!! BOW DOWN TO YOUR MASTER!!!!"

Suddenly a huge wave of fire began to heat up the whole environment. The lava that was already flowing with its presence, increased. Rivers formed around it, but this was not a change of scenery, it was an area attack where it sought to consume my existence in fire. I think I went a little overboard... and the words too, HAHAHAHAHA.

...

(POV Therazane)

With Ragnaros' attack flooding the area with fire, I worried. The Earthforge could hold out, but for how long? I had challenged and enraged Ragnaros constantly, at some point his short patience would wear thin. It took longer than I thought. He must have really valued the Earthforge.

But I did not stop the encounter, and I would not allow Neptulon to do so either. I could sense that he was still alive, and if he died I would enforce the warning I had given him. To hold him deep in the earth, until he could get out on his own... if he could get out at all.

(POV A manipulator beaten, is a growing manipulator)

As it could not be otherwise, to survive I consumed all the fire that hit me. The waves were like the sea, giving way to larger and more powerful waves of fire. As I could not see an end to this, I decided to end this once and for all, as I had a limit to the amount of power I could maintain without collapsing.

I approached the sun that Ragnaros had become by releasing the great waves of fire, and using the tentacle I held in my hand as a harpoon, I managed to thrust it into his chest. Then, pulling with all my strength and the weight I could muster, I managed to catch the fire lord off guard.

"GET OVER HERE!!!!"

When I had Ragnaros in front of me, releasing all those waves of fire, I decided to release the power I had been accumulating and returned it to his caster.

*POOOFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFSSSSSSSSTT*

"AAAAARRRRRGG. SLAVE!!!"

A great cloud of black smoke and foam shot out of my mouth and the tentacle still stuck in my chest. The foam and smoke smothered Ragnaros' fire. And it was all thanks to his own power fueling my attack.

When the smoke dissipated, my current appearance was visible. The rock I had used to maintain my current mass and size had a strange appearance. As if a candle had melted and then solidified.

"I have won, Fire Lord. It was a great battle, thank you for allowing me such an honor."

Moving as fast as I could away from a slightly more muted Ragnaros in color, I headed towards Therazane and Neptulon. I was waiting for them to finish the fight.

"THE FORGE EARTH HAS WON"

Therazane said.

...

I didn't stay any longer and quickly retreated to the mountain where I was forging. As soon as I was inside, the whole mass of stone I had used and attached to me fell down.

Broken and molten pieces fell, revealing my current form. All the stone I had forged for my body held, but the places where Ragnaros' fire flowed were melted.

Ragnaros is the most powerful elemental lord, for his flame is the most powerful. If I had to give an example. The flame of a candle versus the flame of the sun. Both are fire, but their intensity, heat and power are different. Besides, what makes Ragnaros' flame powerful is precisely his, and by this I mean, his spirit and will. He is the personification of the flame of this world.

If it weren't for the fact that Ragnaros wasn't taking his control over fire seriously in battle, it probably wouldn't have been so easy to subdue his will. My fight would have been different and my victory harder to obtain... Ragnaros held back, I'm sure.

I was getting very "sleepy". I think fighting against Ragnaros' will, even if they were remnants in his fire, exhausted me. I must practice more the correct use of my fight against a powerful will... But already... I cannot... think... any... more... any... thing.

And without realizing it, I "fell asleep".

Author's Note: Good, (Further down my rant, there is an explanation of this chapter and the trap I left in the previous chapter), I want to apologize for not updating, as I had planned to, but couldn't keep up with the plans. I was busy traveling home to spend it with my family this 24th and 31st. That was the day before yesterday.

Yesterday, a friend I've known since I was in 1st grade got married... Even though he said he never would. I guess this proves once again that what is planned doesn't always go the way we want it to. But hey, that's life. A series of events whose reaction culminates in a "gift" or "present", where our actions will guide our future...

On the other hand, much to my regret, I feel bad. I made a mistake and mixed liquor... And now my stomach is protesting against me for doing it. An example of how our actions affect us... I don't drink liquor, in fact, my friends and I don't even drink at events. But I drank because whiskey changed the taste of Pepsi. I found out that if you put a little splash in it, that drink would taste like bubble gum XD. So I don't regret it. But what killed me was combining that with a pina colada cocktail (which of course I ordered with low alcohol)... *Sigh* I don't want to say, "I'll never drink again in my life" because thanks that I controlled myself, I don't feel as bad as if I hadn't done it... Within the bad, there's something less bad XD.

Leaving aside my decisions and plans that don't go as expected, I will explain what I meant in the previous chapter and some things that happened in this chapter. I'll try to explain everything as best I can.

Chapter 18 was left with a "challenge" from me. Unfortunately, few participated and among those who did, they couldn't find it. I'm talking about finding the "trap". The answer: I mentioned that 5 (old gods) were coming. No one mentioned it, nor did they think it was weird. If I'm honest when I wrote it I did it without thinking, because there are 4 not 5. But like, believing it myself made it something you guys could overlook without realizing it... XD. What a thing.

I would explain WHY it is a "trap", because when I wrote it and reread it I realized that mistake. But I decided to give a reason to the mentioned text and not change it.

But since it's possible that it was my mistake for not explaining it WELL, then I'll make another "challenge" where the prize will be kept for the winner of the "challenge" of chapter 18.

Finally, "the explanation of this chapter". Some may ask "Why was Ragnaros so easy to beat?"... and for now I'll just say it. Nothing is exactly what it seems. I'm not trying to just move the plot along, even though it may seem that way. I'm trying to make everything have a reason behind it.

If I'm not doing well, just comment and I'll try to improve. If not, then I'm doing fine for now. I REITERATE, I invite you to comment, advise and criticize me CONSTRUCTIVELY. We can all destroy, but only the wise can guide.

For now, I'll post this chapter. If I can stay well and not release my life in an act of purifying myself, I may post today. Something that might motivate me, even if I'm dying, would be your comments. Today I won't post a minimum of comments to update, because I feel like I've looked bad, not only with you, but also with myself and the daily update plans I had. U.U

Anyway, I invite you to comment and express yourselves, because every comment is a motivation for me. I wish you a great day or a good night, ^^


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