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At present I feel this work has good grammer and exceptional writing, considering the pool of subpar novels i have seen on this platform. Worldbuilding: Nicely done with subtle introduction of information in a well paced manner, that is what i take from it, do keep in mind i have only read 8 chapters but these 8 were enough to hook me to my phone to ask for more. To the Author, Write this story at your own pace and do not force yourself.
Well hello there people, this novel here is a bit of a tangent from the usual system,check-in,VR etc. Due to this i like what i am reading bye bye
At present I feel this work has good grammer and exceptional writing, considering the pool of subpar novels i have seen on this platform. Worldbuilding: Nicely done with subtle introduction of information in a well paced manner, that is what i take from it, do keep in mind i have only read 8 chapters but these 8 were enough to hook me to my phone to ask for more. To the Author, Write this story at your own pace and do not force yourself.
Well hello there people, this novel here is a bit of a tangent from the usual system,check-in,VR etc. Due to this i like what i am reading bye bye