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I like the idea of the story but I don't like the MC and I don't like harem thing.
Love your work very much. following you for a long time. Please don't make it a harem. but a good slice of life story with romance btw Ran sonoko and MC.
haii brohh... dh lama w ga bca story lu. .. maybe lu dh lupa ama gw tpi w masi inget story prtama lu yg dlu sring w baca trus sring w komen trus kita bedua bicara via reply chat... btw thnx smua krya lu brohh
Muy buena la historia sigue así 👌😸🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸 me encanta la historia casi no hay historia del detective conan sigue así 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Couple problems with this story. 1 its screams Chinese supremacy 2 it has grammar issues after being translated it is readable but still hinders story. If it didnt have these issues I would definitely rate it higher cause I love the world it's set in.
much better than i expected. a few confusing parts but overall good considering its a translated chinese novel. the only things i didn't like were the beginning when the currency is some weird name but it gets changed to yuan quickly, and the fact that china took over japan and called it some confusing name. other than that its very simple to understand even from someone who hasn't watched the anime(s) in it
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[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] Overall this is good novel. I really like this. Though its update is slow. Keep waiting.
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Very good. I hope autor will post more chapters. Althought i do have some complaints about weird style of giving titles that make you lose ability after taking them off, it's really easy to read, and there are a lot of good scenes.
Membuka SPOILER I like the idea of the story but I don't like the MC and I don't like harem thing.
Love your work very much. following you for a long time. Please don't make it a harem. but a good slice of life story with romance btw Ran sonoko and MC.
haii brohh... dh lama w ga bca story lu. .. maybe lu dh lupa ama gw tpi w masi inget story prtama lu yg dlu sring w baca trus sring w komen trus kita bedua bicara via reply chat... btw thnx smua krya lu brohh
Muy buena la historia sigue así 👌😸🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸 me encanta la historia casi no hay historia del detective conan sigue así 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Couple problems with this story. 1 its screams Chinese supremacy 2 it has grammar issues after being translated it is readable but still hinders story. If it didnt have these issues I would definitely rate it higher cause I love the world it's set in.
much better than i expected. a few confusing parts but overall good considering its a translated chinese novel. the only things i didn't like were the beginning when the currency is some weird name but it gets changed to yuan quickly, and the fact that china took over japan and called it some confusing name. other than that its very simple to understand even from someone who hasn't watched the anime(s) in it
good....................................................................................................................................................................................
Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] Overall this is good novel. I really like this. Though its update is slow. Keep waiting.
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copy of the author's registered in tokyo story ElReyCoronado18112 ??? ..............................................................................................................
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Very good. I hope autor will post more chapters. Althought i do have some complaints about weird style of giving titles that make you lose ability after taking them off, it's really easy to read, and there are a lot of good scenes.
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