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It’s not bad, maybe a bit too fast paced and some more details would be more than welcome about family background, planet / continent and major powers, at least some initial introduction for starters. I kinda like the Mc tho, he’s not rushing too much and uses his brain but too many things are kept in the shadow (back to details I already mentioned), would like to know more about the “cheat system” itself too and how those skills (… martial art, body s. Tecniques etc…) are coming from … origin/acquired/found/whatever. Aaand where is the harem!!! Haha jkjk Would like to know how story proceeds for sure so added to library and looking forward to it. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This isn't bad, its kind of a stale reading and although the translation is rough in the beginning it gets better later. Overall I'd say its not bad if you have nothing left to read but there are better options in terms of webnovels.
I read the raws at some point a city called Sakura City appears and the protagonist compared it to "that nation" also known as Japan. He goes on to state how unrighteous they are the same drivel you see these brainwashed Chinese publish over and over again.
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Writing quality - 4 stars : Some terms are inconsistent like the type of the weapon, wether it's a sword or saber. Story Development - 4 stars : There's no unreasonable increase of strength but no clear distinction of the cultivation/martial realms. There's a character growth as the story progress. Character Design - 4 star : There's a substance (somehow) which is good enough for me but some character are not describe clearly Updating Stability - 1 star : Welp this is a trial read so... Wold Backgroud - 3 stars : No extensive explaination, only the the name of the Kingdom and its enemy on war plus revolt caused by bandits.
One of the three recommended books to read. Hopefully this book goes to the voting pool. For those who like to read strong MC then this is for you. I'm not sure if MC can be considered as OP(Right now he can be considered as such, but the people around him aren't really experts, so not sure if he's really strong compared to experts), but he's surely very close, so for people who don't like that, then this is not for you. What I actually like about this novel is that compared to usual mastery system, this novel's system doesn't take that long for the skill to be useful. Even if the skill is only level 3-4 it's already strong and quite useful, then 5-6 is OP at his current situation since the people/enemies around him aren't really experts. Really hope people won't just pass on this novel as this novel is quite interesting.
Overall, it's decent story, more of a way to kill time when you're waiting for those novels that are actually good to update, it'd be the 6/10 out of my ratings...usually don't bother to continue reading anything less than 5/10
From the cover, I bet it would be harem or at least romance. Let's see if I'm right or not. Beat it or beat it. 🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟
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The story just feels off. it feels like a three year old tried to write a cultivation novel and badly failed. The first problem with the novel wouldnbe the writing style which ruins the novel with the lack of world building and logic. we don’t have an understanding of the world’s cultivation and are just asked to understand everything about the novel without any background or context to why
looked interesting and fresh for a few chapters. but i guess a bunch of idiots spamming comments about how it didn't fit the usual troupes and them believing that is how the world should work forced the author to change the novel into a generic cultivation one.
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This is pretty eh. The characters aren't that well designed so far they range from ehh to bad. The system would have been better had it not let the MC blast through the limits of cultivation techniques and just upgrade them to higher levels. At least then it would add some sort of limit that had to be overcome in trying to find a better technique once you max that one out. The world is pretty generic cultivation world. It's fairly fast paced so far, but I think that honestly comes with some drawbacks because situations aren't developed that much and as such they don't feel all that serious.
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i hope it gets picked. jts pretty good honestly though i cant say much about the plot and characters but yesh its the trial trait i enjoyed the most this week
Membuka SPOILER
Easily the best novel in this run for trial. No nationalism by right of disparaging other countries. Not an overpowered MC but he’s been lucky so far no doubt. A ‘smart’ MC but not a monstrous genius - Well he is to others in cultivation speed due to the gold finger. I swear if that trash Global Survival makes it...the racism seeps into you through osmosis thats how thick it is
Story so far is pretty meh, but the translator sucks, got to chapter where he's buying a weapon and the translator is switching freely between the word knife, sabre and longsword, like they're all the same thing, in one paragraph the same weapon was called both a knife and a longsword. If the translator is too inept at the English language that they can't get the weapons right, they have no business charging for translations, god knows what sort of other mistakes they make.
it's going to be release on mtlnovel.com tonight you can get the raw name from there or read in mtl..................................,......
Machine Translation, the grammar is awful. there is almost no use of "is" and is almost always "was" or "had". Past tense is all messed up. He, she also cannot be trusted because a machine cannot determine he or she through chinese and context It is an otherwise good story
read 19 chapters first, I like the story it's just that there is no mention of power levels do it is somewhat confusing but overall I like it
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good ............................................ ............................................... ................ ............ good book ...
Its quite good read got me bewitched............................................................................................................................
The Story and Character are good. I haven't read any Racist remarks. The only Thing that need fixing is the editing and a bit of the Translation
1. Writing is fast paced, the narration is stale and boring as well. the quality of the writing is a bit worse than many trial reads. 2. Story development how should I say it? just decent. 3. Won't say anything about updating stability. for now I will give five stars. 4. World background is decent as well just not good enough for me, it is stale.
It’s not bad, maybe a bit too fast paced and some more details would be more than welcome about family background, planet / continent and major powers, at least some initial introduction for starters. I kinda like the Mc tho, he’s not rushing too much and uses his brain but too many things are kept in the shadow (back to details I already mentioned), would like to know more about the “cheat system” itself too and how those skills (… martial art, body s. Tecniques etc…) are coming from … origin/acquired/found/whatever. Aaand where is the harem!!! Haha jkjk Would like to know how story proceeds for sure so added to library and looking forward to it. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This isn't bad, its kind of a stale reading and although the translation is rough in the beginning it gets better later. Overall I'd say its not bad if you have nothing left to read but there are better options in terms of webnovels.
I read the raws at some point a city called Sakura City appears and the protagonist compared it to "that nation" also known as Japan. He goes on to state how unrighteous they are the same drivel you see these brainwashed Chinese publish over and over again.
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Writing quality - 4 stars : Some terms are inconsistent like the type of the weapon, wether it's a sword or saber. Story Development - 4 stars : There's no unreasonable increase of strength but no clear distinction of the cultivation/martial realms. There's a character growth as the story progress. Character Design - 4 star : There's a substance (somehow) which is good enough for me but some character are not describe clearly Updating Stability - 1 star : Welp this is a trial read so... Wold Backgroud - 3 stars : No extensive explaination, only the the name of the Kingdom and its enemy on war plus revolt caused by bandits.
One of the three recommended books to read. Hopefully this book goes to the voting pool. For those who like to read strong MC then this is for you. I'm not sure if MC can be considered as OP(Right now he can be considered as such, but the people around him aren't really experts, so not sure if he's really strong compared to experts), but he's surely very close, so for people who don't like that, then this is not for you. What I actually like about this novel is that compared to usual mastery system, this novel's system doesn't take that long for the skill to be useful. Even if the skill is only level 3-4 it's already strong and quite useful, then 5-6 is OP at his current situation since the people/enemies around him aren't really experts. Really hope people won't just pass on this novel as this novel is quite interesting.
Overall, it's decent story, more of a way to kill time when you're waiting for those novels that are actually good to update, it'd be the 6/10 out of my ratings...usually don't bother to continue reading anything less than 5/10
From the cover, I bet it would be harem or at least romance. Let's see if I'm right or not. Beat it or beat it. 🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟
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The story just feels off. it feels like a three year old tried to write a cultivation novel and badly failed. The first problem with the novel wouldnbe the writing style which ruins the novel with the lack of world building and logic. we don’t have an understanding of the world’s cultivation and are just asked to understand everything about the novel without any background or context to why
looked interesting and fresh for a few chapters. but i guess a bunch of idiots spamming comments about how it didn't fit the usual troupes and them believing that is how the world should work forced the author to change the novel into a generic cultivation one.
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This is pretty eh. The characters aren't that well designed so far they range from ehh to bad. The system would have been better had it not let the MC blast through the limits of cultivation techniques and just upgrade them to higher levels. At least then it would add some sort of limit that had to be overcome in trying to find a better technique once you max that one out. The world is pretty generic cultivation world. It's fairly fast paced so far, but I think that honestly comes with some drawbacks because situations aren't developed that much and as such they don't feel all that serious.
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i hope it gets picked. jts pretty good honestly though i cant say much about the plot and characters but yesh its the trial trait i enjoyed the most this week
Membuka SPOILER Easily the best novel in this run for trial. No nationalism by right of disparaging other countries. Not an overpowered MC but he’s been lucky so far no doubt. A ‘smart’ MC but not a monstrous genius - Well he is to others in cultivation speed due to the gold finger. I swear if that trash Global Survival makes it...the racism seeps into you through osmosis thats how thick it is
Story so far is pretty meh, but the translator sucks, got to chapter where he's buying a weapon and the translator is switching freely between the word knife, sabre and longsword, like they're all the same thing, in one paragraph the same weapon was called both a knife and a longsword. If the translator is too inept at the English language that they can't get the weapons right, they have no business charging for translations, god knows what sort of other mistakes they make.
it's going to be release on mtlnovel.com tonight you can get the raw name from there or read in mtl..................................,......
Machine Translation, the grammar is awful. there is almost no use of "is" and is almost always "was" or "had". Past tense is all messed up. He, she also cannot be trusted because a machine cannot determine he or she through chinese and context It is an otherwise good story
read 19 chapters first, I like the story it's just that there is no mention of power levels do it is somewhat confusing but overall I like it
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good ............................................ ............................................... ................ ............ good book ...
Its quite good read got me bewitched............................................................................................................................
The Story and Character are good. I haven't read any Racist remarks. The only Thing that need fixing is the editing and a bit of the Translation
1. Writing is fast paced, the narration is stale and boring as well. the quality of the writing is a bit worse than many trial reads. 2. Story development how should I say it? just decent. 3. Won't say anything about updating stability. for now I will give five stars. 4. World background is decent as well just not good enough for me, it is stale.
haisss it didn't get picked 😔😔 .