4Ulasan-ulasan
- Kualitas penulisan
- Stabilitas Pembaruan
- Pengembangan Cerita
- Desain Karakter
- Latar Belakang Dunia
Bagikan pikiran Anda dengan orang lain
Tulis ulasan
You have a way with words that make each read worth admiring, you've manage to paint an appealing image for the reader as your words become descriptive the picture becomes clearer. A novel with great potential
Even though I'm not very familiar with Indonesian ghosts, I think I'm imagining it like the other white lady ghosts I hope this ghost has different features, and isn't a Sadako's Rip off Unfortunately we haven't gotten to the part where MC uses the demonic nails as stated in the synopsis
I'm sure this story was originally in bahasa the translation isn't that good, and I prefer to read it after I translate it back into Indonesian
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leozhan2020*@*gmail.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
You have a way with words that make each read worth admiring, you've manage to paint an appealing image for the reader as your words become descriptive the picture becomes clearer. A novel with great potential
Even though I'm not very familiar with Indonesian ghosts, I think I'm imagining it like the other white lady ghosts I hope this ghost has different features, and isn't a Sadako's Rip off Unfortunately we haven't gotten to the part where MC uses the demonic nails as stated in the synopsis
I'm sure this story was originally in bahasa the translation isn't that good, and I prefer to read it after I translate it back into Indonesian
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leozhan2020*@*gmail.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.