Sanctuary God

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Sin_KG08

Small note from the Author: First i’d like to say im sorry, I’ve been away for a week and i sincerly apologize for that, at that time thanksgiving began and i wanted to spend time with my family, the writing also got stressful so i took a 3-4 day break. Now, since i dont want anything like this to happen anymore i’ve come up with a simple schedule, i’ll be posting in, monday, Wednesday and friday, saturday and sunday i’ll have for myself so that i can prepare chapters without the need to rush, please forgive me and have a good night/Morning or after. noon

me encanto esta novela aunque este en inglés la traduci y fue muy intrigante me engancho los personajes son interesantes el protagonista pienso que podría tener un buen desarrollo y me causa intriga como se desarrollará la historia

LV 4

Ultimatedaywriter

The story is off to a great start the MC isn't a tool which is a plus. Stubborn main characters are interesting and often break the mold. Its pretty anime in some places like the Eyes of Adam referenced in the first chapter. That isn't a bad thing anime is great for a reason.

LV 3

HANA_4345

So....so far we've got an MC who loves martial arts, gods in mythology and fairies. This could go wrong in so many ways (since there are so many things added to the story) if the author isn't careful in the storytelling. For the time being though, it sounds itneresting enought to captivate the audience. Keep up the work[img=recommend]

LV 15

Aardae

It's by no means bad, I've definitely read worse on Webnovel. The main issue I have with the novel is that the main character really got on my nerves... to the point that I had to stop. I couldn't get past chapter ~40. I still recommend you give it a shot, perhaps you get a different impression of the main character.

LV 10

Sabah_1853

Amazing story Amazing Novel Amazing mc i love this 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

LV 1

NNN_CCC

The story is original, it took me a long time, and it's very nice to have added religious and mythological elements, transforming them in the service of the story. I also like the kind of black humor you have added from time to time. Just a note, if the dialogue takes place between two well-known characters, avoid describing who the sentence belongs to each time the sentence is spoken. Slow down the pace a lot. Keep it going!

LV 10

CorwynGentry

This is a good story, and if that's what you're looking for then the 27 current chapters are a good place for you to start. The only thing I didn't like about this story was the inconsistencies regarding chapter length. The first part is huge while the second only lasts a few lines in comparison. Other than that very good story.

LV 11

Rayne_Rue

The synopsis is amazing, Love the character design . A good creation too the author has this unique type of writing and that's what makes this book enjoyable to read. judging from the chapters I was reading so far everything is great, I loved the first chapter kinda felt like crying through all hands on deck this is a good book. Keep updating more !!

LV 1

LucienNg

The MC is involved in so many things, but I believe you’ll be fine with the help of proper planning. The pace is good as it is, and I like our MC’s personality so far. Writing is a hard task, but I hope you’ll keep on writing and improving in the process. I’m rooting for you, so please keep up the good work 😊

LV 10

SJCTheLegacy

I love how you write since it's goofy in a good way. The elements are in harmony that makes this story the best. keep it up. one more thing to recommend is that find a cover that would fit on your story, you can get one in inkstone too.

LV 11

LORDOFORIGINALINK

Great book it has a goofy And op mc the author writes in a way that brings the whole story together and he doesn’t express characters Like I’ll add this character for the word count no he add them in to the goffy and serious parts and keeps it perfectly balanced it seems like it’s a hidden jem I definitely recommend the only thing that I don’ like is the mc being seriously op but it does make sense Keep up the good work and don’t take a week break again